I liked this take on the inevitable Ginny-Harry moment after the battle. I really don't have much to criticize, but I will suggest that Harry could've offered a sandwich in a way that didn't quite sound so dismissive of Kreacher, especially since he's supposed to have a new respect for him. It might've been better to have him say, "I could see if Kreacher could bring us some sandwiches." That makes it sound like he'd ask instead of demanding, which (besides being closer to his actions as depicted during the trio's stay at Grimmauld Place) is nicer, kinder, and sweeter, fitting in better with the wonderful mood you've set.
Awwww!!! This is my most favorite one shot ever(Tying with a snowy evening by kingbobrules,of course)!!!
Happy Easter,everyone!
aw! that was so sweet! its very sad that fred is gone (sob!!) but at least voldemorts gone as well.
Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words and for taking the time to post a review. Aww I miss Fred too.
wow so romantic
Author's Response: Thank you very much I'm glad you enjoyed it!
*speechless*
Please, please! Continue writing! For all us over obsessive Harry Potter fans out there : )
~A&H {The GryffindorGals}
P.S.- We lied to you...........
you can never, EVER, be to obsessed with Harry Potter!
Author's Response: Thank you for the lovely review. I have written one more H/G story. I'm just waiting for MNFF to allow submissions and then I'll post it.
This was sooo cute! I loved every single part of the story, and i thought it was very well structured and well thought out. Great job and keep up the great work!
XOXO
Katie :)
Author's Response: Thank you for the lovely review. I had so much fun writing it. H/G are my favorites.
MERLIN`S PANTS!! I love this story! I loved how you had all of the Characters....well...is character!! Lol... Yes..here I go.....AWWWWWWW!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks again.
PS. WHY, FRED, WHY!?!?!?!
Author's Response: Aww I miss Fred.
MERLIN`S PANTS!! I love this story! I loved how you had all of the Characters....well...is character!! Lol... Yes..here I go.....AWWWWWWW!!!!!
Author's Response: Wow, my story got a "Merlin's Pants!!" Thank you for the sweet review and the wonderful completment. I love Harry Potter too much not to do JKR's characters justice. I'm glad you liked it.
too superb!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review!!
aww a really nice story probably what did happen after!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review I'm glad you liked it. I'd like to think their reunion happened like this :-)
Really cute!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for the lovely review.
OMFG I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you for the sweet review and exclamation points!! - Nice username by the way :-)
Good story, stayed with canon. This I like.
Author's Response: Thanks again!!
Good story, stayed with canon. This I like.
Author's Response: I'm glad to hear to liked it. It was important to me to stay with canon. Thank you so much for the review.
awwwwwwwwww love it
Author's Response: Thanks I'm glad you like it.
*sniff* good story!!
Author's Response: Thank you for the great review. I'm glad you liked it.
I've read a lot of versins of this sort of Harry/Ginny back-together scene but this is by far the best one I've come across. Good work!
Author's Response: *blushes* Thank you, wow, "by far the best one I've come across." You are so sweet. Thank you for the awesome review.
aaawwwwwwww.
Author's Response: Thank you for the lovely review. Aaawwwwwwww seems to be the natural response to this story. I'm glad you liked it.
