Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 12/14/07 21:39
Chapter: Chapter 1

If you really want to *shamelessselfpromotion* I would recomend my For The Greater Good as it is the one I'm most proud of.=Sammy

Author's Response: Thanks. I'll read that one immediatley. Meg

Reviewer: Courtbrat
Date: 12/10/07 21:27
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow that is pretty good! I liked it alot hey can you check out my story once it gets vaildated pleez. I want to get ppl to read my stories just like ill get pll to read this poem it was very well written.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'd love to read your story. Meg

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 12/10/07 4:23
Chapter: Chapter 1

Like fun without pranks,

It may be just me but I think the line would sound better if written like this.

Like pranks without fun,

Other than that I really liked the simple tone and mood of this poem. George's characterization is really good and I can actually see him writing this late one night.

I guess the reason I liked it so much is becouse it's true. George may get used to the idea of Fred beeing dead but his life will never be the same. He probably will experiance all the things you mentioned above like he'd go to a feast and won't want to eat and he'll plan pranks only to realise they aren't as fun anymore.

So overall good job.=Sammy



Author's Response: Thank you so much Sammy. i like that idea wand will change it. Thanks so much. Now I can't wait to read one of your stories. Thanks again, Meg

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 12/09/07 19:51
Chapter: Chapter 1

*sniff* :-( good poem! but shouldn't it have a DH spoilers warning???

Author's Response: Good catch. I'll give it the warning immediatley. Thanks for reviewing, Meg

Reviewer: cedric_lvr98
Date: 12/09/07 19:11
Chapter: Chapter 1

that was cool and true! i give it a thumbs up!

Author's Response: Thank you for the review! Meg

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