If you really want to *shamelessselfpromotion* I would recomend my For The Greater Good as it is the one I'm most proud of.=Sammy

Author's Response: Thanks. I'll read that one immediatley. Meg

Like fun without pranks,

It may be just me but I think the line would sound better if written like this.

Like pranks without fun,

Other than that I really liked the simple tone and mood of this poem. George's characterization is really good and I can actually see him writing this late one night.

I guess the reason I liked it so much is becouse it's true. George may get used to the idea of Fred beeing dead but his life will never be the same. He probably will experiance all the things you mentioned above like he'd go to a feast and won't want to eat and he'll plan pranks only to realise they aren't as fun anymore.

So overall good job.=Sammy



Author's Response: Thank you so much Sammy. i like that idea wand will change it. Thanks so much. Now I can't wait to read one of your stories. Thanks again, Meg

that was cool and true! i give it a thumbs up!

Author's Response: Thank you for the review! Meg