If you really want to *shamelessselfpromotion* I would recomend my For The Greater Good as it is the one I'm most proud of.=Sammy
Author's Response: Thanks. I'll read that one immediatley. Meg
Wow that is pretty good! I liked it alot hey can you check out my story once it gets vaildated pleez. I want to get ppl to read my stories just like ill get pll to read this poem it was very well written.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'd love to read your story. Meg
Like fun without pranks,
It may be just me but I think the line would sound better if written like this.
Like pranks without fun,
Other than that I really liked the simple tone and mood of this poem. George's characterization is really good and I can actually see him writing this late one night.
I guess the reason I liked it so much is becouse it's true. George may get used to the idea of Fred beeing dead but his life will never be the same. He probably will experiance all the things you mentioned above like he'd go to a feast and won't want to eat and he'll plan pranks only to realise they aren't as fun anymore.
So overall good job.=Sammy
Author's Response: Thank you so much Sammy. i like that idea wand will change it. Thanks so much. Now I can't wait to read one of your stories. Thanks again, Meg
*sniff* :-( good poem! but shouldn't it have a DH spoilers warning???
Author's Response: Good catch. I'll give it the warning immediatley. Thanks for reviewing, Meg
that was cool and true! i give it a thumbs up!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! Meg