Nice beginning! YOu've shown the feelings of being in lurrrrve very well ;) I can't wait to see the story develop further!
Author's Response: Well, thank you for taking the time to review. I hope you "lurrrve" the rest of the story! :)
I enjoyed that a lot, this is defiantly going into my favorites, and I awaited VERY eagerly for it's next update. ; )
Author's Response: Thank you! I enjoyed writing. I can't wait until I finish this next chapter.