Reviews For Shattered
Reviewer: DramioneLove
Date: 01/01/11 11:50
Chapter: Chapter 1

will the next chapter be posted soon?
i'm very eager to see how this story turns out!!!

Reviewer: no_potter_haters
Date: 12/29/10 20:19
Chapter: Chapter 1

Update now please

Reviewer: bloodytiger417
Date: 11/19/10 19:09
Chapter: Chapter 1

you should finish

Reviewer: starspark112
Date: 02/14/10 20:00
Chapter: Chapter 1

oh please please update. it's amazein'. i can't wait!

Reviewer: starspark112
Date: 02/14/10 19:59
Chapter: Chapter 1

oh please please update. it's amazein'. i can't wait!

Reviewer: melancholya
Date: 12/18/09 17:25
Chapter: Chapter 1

Interesting, I liked the paragraph at the end a lot. The secrecy of it is fabulous.


Reviewer: SexySeverus14
Date: 08/16/08 14:02
Chapter: Chapter 1

Good so far keep writing!

Reviewer: tashy
Date: 07/08/08 2:29
Chapter: Chapter 1

this is very interesting story line!
i couldn't think of hermione being in an abusive relationship.its a very new way to write a fan fic and because it is such an original theme(in my opinion) you have set my expectations really high!so no pressure:P and the first chapter was excellent....are you sure this is your first fic?:)
keep up the good work and good luck with your next chapter

Reviewer: hebridean black
Date: 07/06/08 20:19
Chapter: Chapter 1

this is starting out very nicely. can't wait to hear more!!

Reviewer: Vampire Hunter Blade
Date: 04/22/08 17:37
Chapter: Chapter 1

Oh yeah! I bet Tad is the one that is abusive and get's Hermione close to Snape.

Reviewer: akasha2411
Date: 04/14/08 17:33
Chapter: Chapter 1

like it very mucho where is ch 2?????
please update soon!!!!

Reviewer: Pissenoffanis
Date: 01/22/08 2:45
Chapter: Chapter 1

Ooooh, you've got me intrigued, why is Snape watching over Hermione? I can't wait to see this story develop further - the plot sounds very promising. Hope you update soon!

Reviewer: pochileaf
Date: 12/16/07 13:23
Chapter: Chapter 1


Author's Response: ?? Lol.

Reviewer: relichunter18
Date: 12/10/07 19:01
Chapter: Chapter 1

Awww, he's watching over her. (Just kidding, cute Snape is weird) I'm wondering what's coming next. It's a good plot that doesn't sound like anything I've read before, so I'm excited to read the rest of it.

Author's Response: Thanks. :) I'm glad you noticed it was Snape. I'm sure other people did, but you're the first to mention it.

Reviewer: Wicked Wench
Date: 12/06/07 18:24
Chapter: Chapter 1

I can't wait for the next chapter...

Author's Response: Lol. Should be coming soon! Major writers block and super-hectic RL have kept me from writing.. but CH2 is almost finished. :)

Reviewer: tokiolover123
Date: 12/06/07 16:52
Chapter: Chapter 1

ooh i love where the story is goinf please continue

Author's Response: Thanks. Definitely. :)

Reviewer: LUV2READ
Date: 12/05/07 22:45
Chapter: Chapter 1

Ooohh! Keep it up!

Author's Response: Thanks! RL is taking over right now.. but Chapter 2 should be up soon!

Reviewer: Lady Camelot
Date: 12/04/07 14:54
Chapter: Chapter 1

Ack, my second review was written for a different story. I thought I had deleted it, but this siteis sometimes wacky. Sorry bout that, I fully understand that this is going to be full length. (How could it not) lol, sorry again. :]

Author's Response: Lol. It's no big deal... I was kind of thinking that may have been what happened. ;)

Reviewer: Lady Camelot
Date: 12/03/07 18:58
Chapter: Chapter 1

Love it! I hope you would consider writing a full length SS/HG sometime in the future, seeing as you have wonderful writing skills. :] ihopeihopeihope!!!

Author's Response: Lol. Well, hopefully when this is finished, it will be a full length SS/HG! :D

Reviewer: Lady Camelot
Date: 12/03/07 16:29
Chapter: Chapter 1

Oooo, I like where this is going. Keep it up! And make sure you update SOON. :D

Author's Response: Thank you! I had meant to finish the second chapter this weekend, but real life got so hectic!! I promise not to keep you waiting too terribly long! :)

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