Update now please

oh please please update. it's amazein'. i can't wait!

Interesting, I liked the paragraph at the end a lot. The secrecy of it is fabulous.

-Ica

this is very interesting story line!
i couldn't think of hermione being in an abusive relationship.its a very new way to write a fan fic and because it is such an original theme(in my opinion) you have set my expectations really high!so no pressure:P and the first chapter was excellent....are you sure this is your first fic?:)
keep up the good work and good luck with your next chapter

Oh yeah! I bet Tad is the one that is abusive and get's Hermione close to Snape.

Ooooh, you've got me intrigued, why is Snape watching over Hermione? I can't wait to see this story develop further - the plot sounds very promising. Hope you update soon!

Awww, he's watching over her. (Just kidding, cute Snape is weird) I'm wondering what's coming next. It's a good plot that doesn't sound like anything I've read before, so I'm excited to read the rest of it.

Author's Response: Thanks. :) I'm glad you noticed it was Snape. I'm sure other people did, but you're the first to mention it.

ooh i love where the story is goinf please continue

Author's Response: Thanks. Definitely. :)

Ack, my second review was written for a different story. I thought I had deleted it, but this siteis sometimes wacky. Sorry bout that, I fully understand that this is going to be full length. (How could it not) lol, sorry again. :]

Author's Response: Lol. It's no big deal... I was kind of thinking that may have been what happened. ;)

Oooo, I like where this is going. Keep it up! And make sure you update SOON. :D

Author's Response: Thank you! I had meant to finish the second chapter this weekend, but real life got so hectic!! I promise not to keep you waiting too terribly long! :)