Reviewer: Leah_Lovegood
Date: 06/20/08 11:31
Chapter: Chapter Five: Skirmish

Wow! That was really really good!

Author's Response: Thanks ye kindly. :)

Reviewer: indigo_mouse
Date: 05/03/08 0:28
Chapter: Chapter Four: Bridgehead

Excellent story! Well imagined! I'm waiting to see what the "one small change is". Its interesting to see Harold and the alternate Hermione be the kind of people that the 'real' Trio would never have become. There is the potential for evil in us all, I suppose.

Author's Response: I know I'm being coy about the "one small change" but the basic answer is in the synopsis. As to evil, Harold and alt-Hermione aren't evil per se. After all 'good' can be just as ruthless as 'evil' is, if there are such things.

Reviewer: SteakZ
Date: 04/28/08 13:26
Chapter: Chapter Four: Bridgehead

keep up the good work and i did mean to say the man fudge thought he was. good to see the similarities showing through. cant wait for more

Reviewer: Valentinia
Date: 04/24/08 23:19
Chapter: Chapter Four: Bridgehead

:D You updated! Quickly! Do it again! ;) *cough*
Seriously though, great chapter. I wonder why it's Regulus... and I still wonder what that subtle change is! Soooo many questions, so much suspense! Your writing style and your great plot really keep the reader on tenterhooks. I can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: black rain
Date: 04/24/08 16:41
Chapter: Chapter Four: Bridgehead

this story is amazing and so captivating! i can hardly wait for the next chapter!! please update quickly!

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 04/21/08 18:46
Chapter: Chapter Four: Bridgehead

Wow, that last bit was frightening! I never thought Hermione could be so cold, but as she's from a different reality.. . Anyway, this was great! Isn't it funny how all those creatures Luna swears are real exist in another re4ality? Perhaps she and her father were seeing into the other reality. I think my favourite line was Harry feeling almost confortable in his own presence. I'd love to find out what Harold went through to make him predatory, perhaps he chose Slytherin over Gryffindore while under the sorting hat. Harold does seem too much like Dumbledore, it's unnerving. The occlumency shield for instance, but i think it unwise ove him to have revealed himself to Voldemort. For the next chapter I'm praying for the OTHERS to ask questions before storming in and wrecking things. I wonder if they'll agree to help US now there's a way for Harold to get home. This is just getting very weird, I love it!

Author's Response: Yes it was unwise of Harold to reveal himself so soon to the Lord V. But Harold did defeat his Voldemort, so he's a little overconfident. Time will tell what that portends. Glad you enjoyed it so far.

Reviewer: SteakZ
Date: 04/18/08 13:54
Chapter: Chapter Three: The State of Things

i cant wait for more

brilliantly written in all aspects love the new Harry (Harold) being the man that cornelius fudge should have been

update soon please

Author's Response: Thanks SteakZ. Update coming as soon as I have time. I never thought of Harold as the "man that cornelius fudge should have been" but I like it. Not entirely accurate but useful. Harold is not relating to people as a hero or the Boy Who Lived, but as the ruler of a victorious nation. The kind of leader Fudge thought he was.

Reviewer: Valentinia
Date: 04/12/08 17:17
Chapter: Chapter Three: The State of Things

Woah, the other universe is creeeeepy! But it's constructed really well - it's great how you use the same characters, change the circumstances, change the personalities just the teeeeensiest bit and voilą! :D The plot is really intriguing, also, of course! Update sooooon!

Author's Response: There's only one major change, which I haven't told you yet, and all the tiny changes ripple out from that. It's so much fun.

Reviewer: Valentinia
Date: 04/12/08 17:07
Chapter: Chapter 2: Kidnapped!

Though there are a couple of typos in this chapter, the plot seems really great! I love seeing flashes of the alternate reality, and you write Voldemort quite well - he's really hard to pull off, I think! In any case, I can't wait to see where this is going!

Reviewer: Valentinia
Date: 04/12/08 16:59
Chapter: Chapter One: A Cry in the Dark

Hmmm... the summary sounded really interesting, and so does this first chapter! You've definitely whet my appetite. *goes to read more*

Reviewer: Arial Felchem
Date: 04/05/08 0:05
Chapter: Chapter Three: The State of Things

This is a really interesting story. I can't wait for the next chapter to be up.

Reviewer: Reader4ever
Date: 04/02/08 18:53
Chapter: Chapter Three: The State of Things

Wow! This story is really good!
I love the differences between Harry and Harold as well as between the two universes!
Hope more is on the way; cause i'm really excited for when the 2 worlds collide :)

Reviewer: deanine
Date: 03/26/08 20:10
Chapter: Chapter Three: The State of Things

This story is exactly what AU is all about. I adore it. Please READ your letter and make the 2 small corrections requested. Bridget

Reviewer: davek86
Date: 03/14/08 10:36
Chapter: Chapter One: A Cry in the Dark

nice story, I like the plot set up. And I bet the other Hermoine is pissed.

Reviewer: chrisj
Date: 01/10/08 6:27
Chapter: Chapter 2: Kidnapped!

Good lord, who proofread this? I like the idea, but your grammatical and spelling errors are killing me. As I understand it, there are betas to help catch things like this. I'm not particularly intereted in reading works in progress, but I offer to proofread it just before you submit. I'm not sure how to arrange such a thing, but if you're interested, I'm sure we can make an arrangement.

I'm favoriting this, since I like it, for the most part. But *please* clean up the grammar and spelling.

Reviewer: Hermione Clone
Date: 12/29/07 21:50
Chapter: Chapter 2: Kidnapped!

Great Job! It's a very interesting concept. A bit confusing, but interesting.
What did Harold's comment about "his Hermione" mean, I wonder?
Cool putting Ariana Dumbledore into the other dimension.
Please, update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks! I hope you're confused by what I want you to be confused by and not b/c I screwed up. Update coming as soon as submissions reopen. Ciao

Reviewer: iluvkrum
Date: 12/25/07 9:12
Chapter: Chapter 2: Kidnapped!

interesting. look forward to reading more.

Reviewer: Wicked Wench
Date: 12/24/07 11:18
Chapter: Chapter 2: Kidnapped!

Wow! What an interesting concept. I cannot wait to see how the plot unfolds.

Reviewer: Seer_Witch
Date: 12/13/07 18:59
Chapter: Chapter One: A Cry in the Dark

PLEASE WRITE MORE! I MIGHT DIE IF YOU DON'T!!!! Okay, maybe not THAT dramatic, but pretty close!!! I'm sorry for the drama, but you're an awesome writer with an awesome story and I want to read it!!! KEEP WRITING!!!!

~Aya Braxton~

Reviewer: jediprankster
Date: 12/12/07 5:41
Chapter: Chapter One: A Cry in the Dark

Great start! I'm intrigued. This is very well written, and I can't wait to see what you have in store for this story.

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