HAHA THE LINE
"IT'S WHAT YOU DO TO ME...." REMINDS ME OF HEY THERE DELILAH(SPELLING) BY THE PLAIN WHITE TS

Dearest Sarah, you never fail to impress me with your fics. I don’t read very much Ron/Hermione, even though I love the pairing, because usually I’ve a hard time finding one worth reading. But of course yours was fabulous.

I love the simplicity of this fic. It’s just so wonderful, and I don’t even know why. I guess it’s because you didn’t overload this with details and background and lots of unnecessary things – you gave a brief snapshot into a relationship, and it was perfect. You only included the one flashback, but that was all you needed, really. And it was so adorable. So Ron and Hermione; it could totally have happened.

The addition of the man on the train was cute. A great little touch, just to have Ron verbalize to somebody how he feels about Hermione. It’s so adorable! That’s what Ron and Hermione are – adorable. I loved this line: He watched the cities flash past him, catching the eye of the old man every so often and sharing a look which every time whispered their two stories; similar yet different.

And again, it’s so cute when Hermione sees Ron and they embrace and kiss and guh. So cute. :) It’s interesting that you don’t really explain where they are (I mean, yeah, you mention Ipswich and whatnot, but you know), because it just lets us focus on the couple themselves. The center of the fic is their love, not their story so much. Does that make sense? Well, I don’t know, but there you go.

And finally, the reference to ‘Hey There, Delilah’ is nice. I think it’s a good song for Ron and Hermione, actually. And it does sort of sound like something Ron would say, doesn’t it? Yes. Excellent work, my dear. Thank you for such a lovely read. -squishes-

beautiful ive most likely already reviewed this but am re-reading all of the r/hr fics as ive already read lal of them and its been a while since the first few. next stop if my 50 + chapter story that i finally have a betta for

Author's Response: Thanks!

Great piece! Is it supposed to be briefly relating to "Hey there delilah"?

Author's Response: Yes, well spotted! That's where I got my inspiration. Thank you!

awww so cute! it made me smile =D

Author's Response: I'm happy to hear it!

oooooo i like! a little more fluff than i would expect from ron and hermione, but i do like it, especially ron finally realizing how much she's changed him :)

Author's Response: Well, the story was supposed to be all about Ron acknowledging his emotions - bound to be a little fluffy! Thank you very much.

this was a really good story! you are a great writer! You really showed Ron's feelings well.

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

I'm returning after three hours since I first read your story to tell you that

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I can't stop smiling. :D

loved it!

Akay

Author's Response: Whee! I'm really pleased. Thank you!

How sweet and touching. Very good.

Author's Response: Thank you!