I love your story. Snape torture stories are the best. I can't wait to you write the chapter. I'm really dying for it. Please hurry and write some more soon.
The story is very powerful so far. One of the things I really enjoy about it are the view of Severus through others' eyes (your Minerva is simply wonderful).
One particularly heart-rending moment for me were Orestes' words: “You were right: she is there. — She is — always there, isn’t she?”
I do agree with Dumbledore on the issue that if anything can save Snape, it's his love for Lily. I never cease to be astounded at the paramount importance of her in his life, and the depth that love for her gave him...
Needless to say (after the above), I love Severus Snape deeply. I was also happy to find that you enjoyed VV's stories. Also, 37 chapters sounds great (especially chapters of this length! love long chapters), and I can't wait till you post more!
Um. I would also be extremely flattered if you dropped by my corner when you have a moment, to glance at a fic currently in the process of posting with an eye of a fellow Snape writer. Apologies for the shameless self-promotion. *blush*
That's amazing. Torturing Snape stories are my favorite. They make me want to give him a hug.
very interesting and fascinating story. Something different, a story concerning Snape's demons and the other professers and the Healer trying to cure him.
I look forward to the next chapter!
Very good, very good!
I'm sorry, I can't give you a more thorough and detailed review - it's very late here.
I think I shold mention, however, "Petrificus Totalus" is spelled with a U.
Author's Response: Thank you!I hope you enjoy the rest of the story. And thank you for the spelling hint!
Sorry, after I posted my review, I realized that my left makes it the RIGHT margin which is cutting off the words to your story. Thanks
Author's Response: If you select the text and copy it to a Word document, opr another text editor, it all shows up. (Or, just select and highlight the text as you're reading it, I suppose...) Thank you for persevering. I hope to have the problem addressed very soon.
Enjoying the story so far. Perhaps it's just my computer, but the left margin of this site cuts off the first two words of every sentence under the left margin. Yours is the only one that I've seen like that on this site. Makes the story a bit harder to read.
Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to comment. I notice the same problem with the left margin on my computer, and I don't know what the cause is. This is my first posting on this site. I'll try to have it fixed ASAP! Again, thanks for reviewing!