Reviews For Angst & Adoration
Reviewer: bighpfan23
Date: 03/21/08 15:39
Chapter: Chapter 4

This is a great story! Please update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks! :D I'm workin' on getting it up as soon as possible. :)

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 02/13/08 13:00
Chapter: Chapter 4

Another great chapter, i really enjoyed Harry and Ginny joking about Viktor Krum. Also, I thought Ron might fly to the girls window while out on his broom, as Hermione seems to be keeping a low profile. Can't wait to read on, please update again soon.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! :D I'm glad you liked the Viktor bit - it's sort of embarrassing when I'm the only one laughing at my own jokes ... ahem ... anywho ... :p I didn't think of the broom in time, but I think you'll like this way anyway. :)

Reviewer: shadow_in_the_rain
Date: 02/13/08 11:37
Chapter: Chapter 2

great story!! can't wait for more!! :D

Author's Response: Aaaw, thank you! :D More is on the way! :)

Reviewer: goGinny_84
Date: 02/12/08 20:48
Chapter: Chapter 4

I do hope you have Ron fly up the girls' staircase. The founders really weren't too clever- if the boy's fet don't touch the staircase, it won't turn into a slide.

Author's Response: lol. This is very true ... I'm not sure why I didn't think of a broom before ... hmmm. :p Oh well - hopefully you'll enjoy the next chapter anyway! :D

Reviewer: Badgers_R_Cool
Date: 01/26/08 15:13
Chapter: Chapter 3

awsome! i cant wait to read the next chapter!

Author's Response: Oh yay - thank you! :D

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 01/22/08 17:53
Chapter: Chapter 3

This fic is great! I always like reading about two people arguing who I know will end up together. It's the same with James and Lily in the marauder era. Having said that, I think what Ron said is dispicable and felt like knocking his head clean off as opposed to just cuffing him like Ginny did. He'd better have a damn good apology planned. Isn't it awful when people purposefully hurt each other just to see how much they care? Anyway, I can't wait to see what he says to make things right with Hermione, so please update soon, please.

Author's Response: Hey, thanks so much! :D I had a lot of trouble trying to figure out how Ron was going to dig himself out of this one. And yes, I agree - it is awful when people hurt each other on purpose. Don't worry though, he'll fix it. :)

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 01/22/08 17:52
Chapter: Chapter 3

This fic is great! I always like reading about two people arguing who I know will end up together. It's the same with James and Lily in the marauder era. Having said that, I think what Ron said is dispicable and felt like knocking his head clean off as opposed to just cuffing him like Ginny did. He'd better have a damn good apology planned. Isn't it awful when people purposefully hurt each other just to see how much they care? Anyway, I can't wait to see what he says to make things right with Hermione, so please update soon, please.

Reviewer: FelicisQuill
Date: 01/07/08 19:10
Chapter: Chapter 3

I hope you continue the piece soon!

Author's Response: Thanks! :D I've actually had the story finished for awhile, but this last chapter is having a hard time finding its way out of the que! lol. Soon though! :)

Reviewer: FelicisQuill
Date: 01/07/08 19:05
Chapter: Chapter 2

Once again very good. I liked the dialogue for being so realistic!

Author's Response: Thank you - I'm so glad! :D I worked really hard to make it sound like an actual conversation! :)

Reviewer: FelicisQuill
Date: 01/07/08 19:00
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was very well-written. It seemed like it could have come out of Half-Blood Prince.

Author's Response: Woo-hoo! That's what I was going for - thank you! :D

Reviewer: Beeb
Date: 01/02/08 15:10
Chapter: Chapter 3

Is there more!?
Brilliant!

Author's Response: Hey, thanks! :D And yes, there is more ... :)

Reviewer: Beeb
Date: 01/02/08 15:10
Chapter: Chapter 3

Is there more!?
Brilliant!

Reviewer: WeasleyWeakness
Date: 12/15/07 12:50
Chapter: Chapter 2

Hermione just wanted Ron alone

Author's Response: lol. I dunno ... guess you'll just have to keep reading! :D

Reviewer: Hermione Jane
Date: 12/10/07 19:53
Chapter: Chapter 1

ooo, that was cute. I want to hear more!

Author's Response: Yay - thank you! :D I'm glad you liked it. :)

Reviewer: WeasleyWeakness
Date: 12/06/07 13:35
Chapter: Chapter 1

Cute story so far! Keep writing!

Author's Response: Will do! :) Thank you so much! :D

Reviewer: DracoLuva4684
Date: 12/05/07 17:26
Chapter: Chapter 1

cute :)

Author's Response: Aaaw, thanks! :D

Reviewer: Jazzbones
Date: 12/05/07 16:00
Chapter: Chapter 1

Pretty good so far. We'll see where it progresses to. Keep writing.

Author's Response: Hey thanks! :D I definitely will. :)

Reviewer: lucilla_pauie
Date: 12/04/07 20:44
Chapter: Chapter 1

Hi Kaitlin,

Adorable one-shot you have here, not fluffy at all, just pure fun!

Your dialogue is crisp and droll. “Look, Hermione,” he said, feeling slightly annoyed, “is there something the matter or have I just got a giant bogey hanging out my nose that you’re afraid to tell me about?”

Hermione’s mouth hinted at the start of a smile, but quickly changed to concern.

“Harry,” she began, looking him straight in the eyes, almost pleadingly. “Are you…? I mean, you … Harry, you are being careful, aren’t you?”

Harry blinked at her.

“Well, I just … you know it’s just that Ginny, of all people, knows —“

Harry bumped his knee so hard underneath the table that his ink well nearly spilled.

“- how dangerous relying on a book can be,” she finished, clearly pretending not to have noticed this painful reflex.

Goodness, I laughed aloud over this one. And your last lines are just as good, too. Very Trio-worthy.

Hmm, for nitpick, I guess I can point out that you should use a period before adding a sentence not related to the character's speech. As in this one:

“She did a fairly good job of that when she wasn’t angry,” he chuckled.

Here, 'he chuckled' should be 'He chuckled' after a period in "...when she wasn't angry." Chuckling isn't speech, after all. It's a different verb altogether.

But I hope you don't mind my one criticism, hon, I am tasked to be thorough, that's all. The trick is to gobble the praise and savor the nitpick. And see, I found only one. You did a wonderful job. Write more!

~Joanna

Author's Response: Hey! :D No, I don't mind at all! Thank you so much - I appreciate your criticism! I won't get any better if I can't improve something, right? :)

You must login (register) to review.
Information
Find out everything you need to know about the site right here.


We have stories and authors in this archive.

:

RSS
Choose Theme:
SOCIAL MEDIA
     
MOST RECENT
The Weird Sisters - B-Sides and Rarities, Vol. 2 by ToBeOrNotToBeAGryffindor 1st-2nd Years
The Weird Sisters are back for an encore. Ten more tracks from your MNFF authors.
Severus's Prince by DestinyMoonStar Professors
What does Severus Snape do when a one night stand turns into a baby boy? ...
Other Lives and Dimensions and Finally a Love Story by MoRoCcAnAnDpRoUd Professors
The year is 1977, and the Wizarding World is in turmoil, but it doesn't really...
FEATURED
Oread, Walking by Seren
Cedric was just as odd as Hermione, because he liked to walk. Cedric/Hermione
The Effect of Gamma Rays on Two Terrifically Trapped Gryffindors. by Fenixaze 3rd-5th Years
From the "Stuck where for the weekend?" Challenge on Portkey.org ... Our two...
Drunk on Him by armagod679 Professors
For me, he was an obsession, a burning obsession, one that I could never let...
A Broken Hallelujah by epiphany212 Professors
You have always loved the chase. The pursuit of Quaffles and dragons have carried...
In the Hufflepuff Way by 1000timesingoldenink 3rd-5th Years
Did anybody really appreciate Hannah's mum?Because Mrs. Abbott was a heroine...
And Now... by Oregonian 3rd-5th Years
Moments after the death of Voldemort, Harry gazes at the corpse of the Dark...
The Weird Sisters - B-Sides and Rarities, Vol. 1 by minnabird 1st-2nd Years
Welcome back to another rousing round of rambunctious rock!However, a new act...
CATEGORIES