I really loved this. It was written very well and I thought you did a great job expressing Ginny's feelings and showing how hard it is to move on after losses like that. Again, Good job and keep it up, because this was really good!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind review!
that was sooo sad.... i gues a past like that can make even a strong gal like ginny to breakdown! harry was an angel though...... like always!
Author's Response: Is it good or bad that it's sad? I agree with you... Ginny is a strong person, but her bottled-up emotions finally got the best of her. Harry...sweet Harry... he was such the perfect husband for her. They make such an awesome couple!
sooo good! i saw the banner on forum and absolutely LOVED this fic! really good!
I have one more thing to say:
Fred = :-(
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked this story. And yeah, it was really sad when Fred died. When Jo announced that some characters would be dying, I never would've imagined that he was going to be one of them. =(
*sniff* good story!! poor fred!! :-( is this a oneshot??
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I hated the fact that Tonks, Lupin, and Fred all died in the final battle. Oh, and yes, this is a one-shot, but I'm thinking about writing a separate story to go along with this one.
Beautiful!It was sad but sweet!!!Keep writing!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind review!!!! =) I will most certainly keep writing, and right now I'm thanking my mom for instilling into me the love to read and write.
absorbed within the second paragraph, i was like 'how is she?'
within the third line of second paragraph i was like 'damn! who is she!!!'
my first guess with the scrap book was lily, harry's daughter, complete with the his glasses and all. but then came ginger hair and i was like, thats probably ron's daughter.
then came 'defeat of the darkest wizard in history' and i was sure it was lily potter, the second!
but you didnt stop tormenting me there, because the third paragraph was next and i couldnt help saying 'on no'
finally in the fifth one, i smiled. ah, Ginny.
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nice one, really.
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i liked Harry a lot. supportive, caring and sweet. ginny, being a mess of emotions was sad.
Akay
P.S: now i see what you mean by the warning 'DH spoilers and Book 7 disregarded'!
Author's Response: Sorry for tormenting you. =) It did kind of sound like either Harry's or Ron's daughter. Yeah, the fifth paragraph was a HUGE tip-off to who the narrator was. o.0 I'd actually be surprised if someone didn't get who she was after reading that paragraph. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my story!
