Reviews For Angels Fall First
Reviewer: CakeorDeath
Date: 09/05/08 14:53
Chapter: Prologue: Falling

Repaying you for my review!

This is really great. I love the characterisation and the very dark tone. Please update as soon as you can. :)

Author's Response: haha thanx for the review im glad you like it. I have a first chapter already written but i still have to edit it... Ill try to update as soon as I can :)

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 01/14/08 23:48
Chapter: Prologue: Falling

Great story. I absolutely love the narration and the issue you wrote about, not many people can pull of a Ton at this age wihout making him sound all out evil mastermind. I liked how you made him bad in an uncertain manner. 10/10 for characterisation.=Sammy

Author's Response: Thank you! I know it sound soverused but you just made my day!:)Thanks for the review and i hope you continue to read it:) -amzing;)

Reviewer: red haired mom
Date: 01/13/08 20:35
Chapter: Prologue: Falling

Hello,
I'd like to start with saying I was a bit confused with the way you jumped around in this. It being so short, I would've expected it to be more to the point instead of so vague in places.
I am not a fan of narratives in general, but someone pointed out your story to me, and I decided to read and see for myself.

I do like that you had him showing his tendencies so early in life, but, for the most part it was just not my cup of tea.
Good luck on anything else you decide to write.

~RHM


Author's Response: thank you for your review... i realize i jumped around a bit but i guess that's just my style of writing..srry you don't like it...-amzing

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 11/27/07 20:30
Chapter: Prologue: Falling

DUN DUN DUN!! good story!

Author's Response: thanx...this is really my first fic that got past the moderators so you're my first reviewer eva...*huggles*

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