You call it a romance, but it's as much a mystery... I've put it on my favorites list. When do we get to find out the significance of Harry's 'dream' about Draco a few chapters back? You're killing us!
Teddy is wicked and i love reading him but good god girl u end your chapters on the edge of a cliff i thought i was finally going to get the good stuff with dray and Harry and noooooooo end of chapter. your a fantastic writer and i love reading it. you rock baby.
is teddy harry's brother or related to harry coz i think the simalarity's are just to much to put it down to a coincidence. i mean the slight indication that teddy might be parcel tongue(i mean its not the most common abilty) the fatc that you describe teddy looking so much like harry even down to the way his hair sticks up at the back, and that teddy's parents died and he had to go live with his aunt and uncle. im not sure how but i have convinced myself that teddy is somehow related to harry!!!!
Teddy is so cute, but i'm wondering about the 'hissing yesss thing'...first reaction was holy crap he's voldemort's son! then i was like no, it can't be...i'm so confused! i really like this chapter. harry's having to come to terms with everything that's happened, i think the chess game symbolizes him being confronted with everything and having to make decisions one way or other (my thinking is between snape vs. draco and whether he can really forgive ron and hermione). i feel really bad for draco, sounds like he had it pretty hard dealing with his parents and all his stress etc. kinda wonder where snape went, and wonder what it will mean for his and harry's relationship. again, EXCELLENT chapter, please update soon!
This chapter was the best ever...seriously! I love Teddy! He is awesome and makes the story whole and complete. I had said in a review earlier that he and Harry are very much alike and history is doomed to repeat itself. I think I might be right. The opening scene was awesome! Teddy is very perceptive. But that scence...I can't even put into words how awesome I thought it was. There was only one thing that I'm confused about. It's the scene where Snape and Draco are wispering about Draco running away and all that. Snape was angry because he took up ranks with Voldie. Well, I thought that earlier in your story you talked about how Snape had turned back to the Dark Arts and Harry did too. I don't know. Maybe I'm just getting it confused with another story. Excellent. To bad you can only rate up to a 10, because this chapter deserves much better! (10)
teddy is great and i'm guesing he is a wizard then wonder if he will go to hogwarts? and draco is human but who will harry choose poor guy he is in so much turmoil once again this is a great chapter
Don't beat yourself for not being on the top of your writing skills everydays... I think this fic is pretty good and I enjoy it really much, so, please, update quickly ! ;o)
this is another great chapter i'm sure draco is still only using harry but as for snape i dont fullt trust him either but at least they are attempting to help harry with his memories i still can't believe ron and hermione though
I think your story has a fairly good plot and some of the home life narratives between Hermione, Harry and Ron are pretty good... some analysis is good, but I think some of your tenses are a bit confused (just a few here and there) - though that doesn't really matter - but your continuous crude language gets really tiring, some references are obscene, and anyway... keep on trying and I think you could really work this plot out very well.
I love this story and this chapter was another cracker. Keep the updates coming honey, i just love your writing.
Excellent! You have wonderful beta's I must say. I didn't catch a single mistake. That was awesome! Everything is falling into place!
my goodness i love this chapter- this is quite possibly the best fanfic i have ever read. im so glad harry finally talked to ron and hermione, although i understand how things can't ever be the same between them again. i love harry's relationship with teddy, it's so so cute. and i still don't like draco too much, for some reason i think he's only hanging around harry to benefit himself. i wish snape would just tell draco to leave them alone. please please please update soon!!!!!!
Author's Response: It's really awesome that you're enjoying this story so much, b/c I certainly didn't make it reader friendly. But then I'm not trying to make it commercial :). I'm trying to improve my writing skills and use device and see what works or not for my own novel. I'm glad you're anxious! And it's udpated. I just hope it doesn't take a week for the mugglenet staff to get it up like it did this time. As long as they don't reject it for... "tense usage" as they've done several times in the past... don't they get it's intentional?
That was a wonderful chapter. The story is amazing altogether. I hope you're school work improves.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm on spring break :). Getting some necessary hw stuff done and lots of writing!
yet another story i wonder about that dream concerning draco though and i dont think harry will get his wand back from dumbledore so easlily somehow
Author's Response: You'll see about how Dumbledore reacts. It's coming soon.
Wowzers! Excellent! I think that dream about Ron and Hermione is an actual one......I mean, they know he found out and they've already talked to him about it before.....I don't know about the other two. I think the Draco dream might be in the future, just because Snape has said it before in real life, not in just Harry's memories. Update soon! (10)
Author's Response: Thanks. The dreams are dreams, not foretellings of the future. This time the symbolism isn't quite hidden. They're just Harry's fears of Draco and Severus.
the dream about ron and hermione- not real sure what to make of that one. i think it's actually a memory, or like a 'future' memory of something that's going to happen. idunno how that works but it seems pretty real and very plausible. i think maybe that 'nightmare' of draco using harry was probably real, like maybe he just heard it while he was passed out then he remembered it like a dream after he woke up. im not real sure about snape though since he apologized and all, and that's very un-snapish, so i'm kinda thinking maybe snape has good intentions. as for the last question- i got nothing...i await your next chapter to find out!!!! update soon, u rock
yay new chapter i really love this story it rocks so much, now whats going to happen? I have no clue whats so ever really i think thats maybe snape and draco do somewhere in them have harry's best interests at heart but there's somthing about that vision of draco thats making me think that this has happened before maybe a couple of times kinda like Albus kept obliviating him and Snape and draco are trying to yet again break harry. Anger will always lead to unpridictable wandless magic, after all its happened before and if his memories and his magic are coming back i'm guess it will only be a matter of time before harry performs some of that magic and causes some serious harm to either snape or draco, which ever one really pisses him off first. I'm really looking forward to your next update in fact i can hardly wait.
This story has me confused but in a good way. I can't decide if............. I don't know what I cant decide but this is really good!!
i think this is one of the best stories i've ever read!!!! the thought and set up behind the storyline is incredible!!!!!
woohoo he is getting his memories back this fic is brill