Reviewer: choscorneredkiss
Date: 01/16/05 3:09
Chapter: Underneath the Rug

omg omg omg omg, your stories a stroke of genius! i love it. im a reviewer for this site and id like to get in contact with great writers. So please email me at thank you for a great story keep it up! (oh and i love h/d slash! it makes me feel tingly! lol) cb *to bad 10s the highest rating your story deserves 10000000*

Reviewer: Roza
Date: 01/15/05 11:28
Chapter: Underneath the Rug

How can he be no one's son? :) hmm... I think Draco was Harry's past lover but maybe I missed some hints... I'm curious :) keep up the good work, this fic is great (though I already said that, I think :D)

Author's Response: Because he isn't! Thanks! I love when people get the fic and don't get irritated with the literary devices ;-).

Reviewer: fawks
Date: 01/14/05 12:36
Chapter: Underneath the Rug

although i think there is obvious tention between SS and HP i always thought that DM and HP had to have had at least one close incounter as it's so obvious that teddy(adorable,hugable cutie)is harrys and dracos son. messy dark hair does gorgeous draco eyes update soon need more ilve the snake and the way draco freaked out

Author's Response: No Teddy's no one's son.

Reviewer: cespotter
Date: 01/14/05 6:05
Chapter: Underneath the Rug

wow just read chapter five, amazing, so cool. I love how the story is developing and how it flashes between all the different time periods, so cool. I still can't decide if draco or snape was his lover?? Both?? Its so cool, can't wait for the update. And i can't wait to find out what is blocking his magic and what happend to do that?

Author's Response: You'll find out in Chapter 6 who his past lover was. There have been hints already ;-) if you read carefully you'd pick it up.

Reviewer: cespotter
Date: 01/14/05 5:02
Chapter: It's Friday Again

WOW this story is fantastic, i love the subtle use of snape and draco, with all the less evil glances that harry gets when Dumbledore is not around and draco touching harry all the time, with his scar and on his face, totally cute, its great.. I love it, can't wait for more

Reviewer: L Phoenix
Date: 01/14/05 1:52
Chapter: Underneath the Rug

okay, okay, you've got me sucked in. i need to know everything and i need to know it now.. well soon.. update quick.

Author's Response: Great ;-)

Reviewer: fawks
Date: 01/12/05 12:26
Chapter: A Serpent's Tale

i love the fic and would like to mention that both snapey and dra are enigmas(of the best kind) i love teddy and still think he's harrys son how old r they both ??? update soon 100000000000000000000%

Reviewer: L Phoenix
Date: 01/12/05 9:14
Chapter: A Serpent's Tale

i am actually quite captivated by this story. this last chapter has really peaked my interest, with the more interaction with Draco. i look forward to the next chapter!!

Reviewer: Roza
Date: 01/09/05 6:22
Chapter: Second Meetings

This is a great fanfic, one of the best I've ever read :) I'm trying to figure out who Harry's old boyfriend could be... I'm looking forward to Harry meeting Draco!! Hope you're updating soon :)

Author's Response: I'll update about once a week, but the next few should come sooner.

Reviewer: L Phoenix
Date: 01/08/05 21:10
Chapter: Second Meetings

much like!! keep it up!! 4 soon??

Reviewer: darkness_falls
Date: 01/08/05 12:09
Chapter: The Doctor's Office

This is good but really confusing becuase you jump back and forth. I mean, one minute hes fine, he's working at a shelter, and the next, hes woken from a a coma?

Author's Response: I already warned to pay attention to tenses, one happens in the past, and one in the present and from the scenes you're suppose to piece his world together. It gets clearer as the threads given get woven together.

Reviewer: cespotter
Date: 01/06/05 6:03
Chapter: It's Friday Again

wow this chapter was great, although its so sad that teddy can't stay with harry and its so sad that harry doesn't remember ron and hermione and is there something with snape and harry and if so its so sad that he doesn't remember, are they going to get together?? Hope so, its really good so far

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you're getting what is being written ;).

Reviewer: fawks
Date: 01/03/05 17:59
Chapter: It's Friday Again

love it update soon teddy is harry son draco is also his dad?? harry wanted to forget the horrible life he had so got his memory wiped and replace and the pills help to repress them ron and mione went along that's why they exchange all those knowing glances lov it

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. You're on the right track (your thoughts); however, you're overanalyzing Teddy.

Reviewer: I iz Snape and Hedwig
Date: 01/03/05 17:10
Chapter: It's Friday Again

It iz Dumb

Reviewer: cespotter
Date: 01/01/05 5:24
Chapter: It's Friday Again

great start, can't wait to read more, poor harry for losing his memories, can't wait to see what happens

Reviewer: darkness_falls
Date: 12/28/04 15:54
Chapter: It's Friday Again

This is great! Harry working at a Shelter is amazing, seeing as you make clear some similarities in this. I mean, Porter and Potter? Too similar!

Reviewer: hpwebbie
Date: 12/27/04 21:31
Chapter: It's Friday Again

This is a great story so far. One thing I admire about your writing is your skill at insinuating. You make things clear without outright saying them. So, something happened to Harry that has given him some form of amnesia. He doesn't remember his past or anything. Has everyone lost their magical abilities?

Author's Response: Thank you. I tried very hard to hint at things that make you, the reader, have to think. Everything's implied and will get clearer as the story fleshes out more. And I appreciate the review.

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