Parsel sounds quite nice for a snake, a comforting presence. And i loved the make believe, isn't it awful when you have to grow up?
Oooh, a post-DH Severus story from you! :D Very well-done, though, in any case. I liked seeing Lily's feelings and Severus's - and how different they already are. Poor Sev. (Hehe... "Sev"...) The idea of him catching her a snake was very sweet, and very IC. A nice one-shot, with a bit of a bittersweet tinge. I don't know how you do that! :)
grea job. it was cute. even though i really hate Snape you make me ffeel sorry for him. anyways nice job!
As always your stories are a treat to read.
It is really good!!!!!! Good luck on the challenge!!!!!:)
Oh, another splendid glimpse at Severus and Lily! I do think you must be the best SS Fanfiction writer out there (and I say that as I prepare to post my own SS story!). Do keep writing: a LOT!!! Love your view of the HP world: all of it!
Eeeh. It isn't fair. Everytime I read one of your stories, it makes me want to keep reading, but then...there's nothing more to read because I believe I've read all of them up 'til now...so I have to wait. :(
But seriously, I love your writing. And this story is adorable.
Author's Response: Aww. Thanks. There's a fair number of readable writers on this site (including the ones on my thank-yous for betaing) so they may be able to keep you contentedly reading while I write my pesky end-of-semester papers. Enjoy! I'm glad you liked this one!
Lovely story! I can ship Lily/Severus when it's written like this. And you know that's saying something.
Sorry for the lack of constructive criticism. I'd give it to you if I had any. :-)
Author's Response: Hey, stranger! Thanks! You know I have to laugh a bit about SS/LE now that it's all canon and stuff, right?
Oh, Merlin, but I do love your Severus. I came here with the intention of working, I'll have you know and then spied your name on the Recent stories list.
As usual, you breathe life into Lily and Severus in a manner that others can only aspire to. A very lovely glimpse into their relationship. Well done (as if you need me to say that). :p
Author's Response: Thanks! Hopefully you managed some working anyway, since this is't terribly long. I love both of these characters, as it happens, which makes it ever so much easier to write them. (And now back to the pesky papers I'm supposed to be writing. Nothing like procrastinating to get me to answer reviews!)
