Reviewer: Kerichi
Date: 12/04/07 18:13
Chapter: Curiosity Killed The Cat

Hey, it was nice to see your story up! Good question to leave in the reader's mind at the end of the chapter. What *does* Andromeda want with a Mudblood? :)

Author's Response: Haha thanks Kerichi. You've really been a driving force behind this story even if you didn't know it. :]

Reviewer: Chaser921
Date: 12/04/07 18:07
Chapter: Curiosity Killed The Cat

This is a really great beginning to what looks like a fantastic story. I'm always looking for good Andromeda/Ted stories, and this one is wonderful so far.

I really like that it's in Ted's point of view; most of the stories I've found are from Andromeda's, which is fine, but it's refreshing to find something different. I like that he's messy and clumsy; we see where Tonks gets it! Granted, we knew that already, but you work it into your story very well.

I also like the way that Ted and Andromeda's encounters aren't earth-shattering. You're building their relationship in a believable way, particularly for them to have been in different houses. I can see it being very tentative and slow in the beginning, and you've managed to capture that nicely.

Aveline seems like a good OC. She's believable, and not too quirky, like many are. She also seems like she'll be a good friend for Ted.

I'm very much looking forward to reading the rest of it!

Author's Response: Thank you. Writing this story, I came to love the pairing and they've become my OTP. I plan on taking this relationship very slow. I don't imagine that either one are the type that rush into things. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story as much as you did the beginning. :] Be warned, the rest isn't all in Ted's point of view. It alternates between him and Andromeda.

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