I love this story. I can't wait for the next instalment!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I love WRITING the story. :D This pair are blissfully fun to write. :D I'm glad you liked it.
yay.. took u a while but i still luv ya
hahahaha :D keep goingg its reallyyyy good
Author's Response: Everyone keeps saying that. :P Lol. I'm terribly sorry for the wait. There's two more chapters ready to be accepted so, hopefully you guys won't say that next time. :D
Author's Response: Thank you.
erm.. you took your time.. but it was worth to wait this LONG ;)
an amazing chappy, as always, you sure know how to write Ted and Dromeda, all these feelings.. it's very realistic! Ted is such a loveable character, it's a shame he isn't real :)
Just a little side note: I don't really think, that Bella called her parents mum and dad, it's more likely they were father and mother to her..
I hope you update next time little quicker! ;) Can't wait till that..
Author's Response: Well, this time, it took longer than expected to get through the queue. I submitted it the day that MNFF was back up after the hacker incident & update. Thank you very much for your words and lol. You're totally right. I'll keep that in mind next time. :D
i dont know if u realized, but this chapter is titled chapter 1 , not 2.
Author's Response: Thank you for letting me know. I changed it. :D
i love the name raphael!
Author's Response: thanks. :)
Awww... There are very few Andromeda/Ted fics and this one's really good!
Author's Response: Awwwah, thank you very much. :] One of the reasons why I chose this pair, actually. lol.
Hey! I'm sooo sorry I wasnt' abe to review this before!! And I call myself a fan :( Shame on me! BUT for was it's worth, this last chapters have done nothing but increase my need for more of your AMAZING writing! The way Andromeda gave that kiss on the cheek to Ted was so cute! And Ted...I am in love with him. I've always wanted to read about this two, but I never actually thought I'd find something so good, it was gonna make me wonder why they are only on ONE bloody chapter in the books u_u
I cant wait for the next chapter! What's she up to?? And loved Av and Ted's realtionship...though I can't wait to see her get jealous of Andromeda (she will, wont she? :P)
Author's Response: Lol. As long as you get to it eventually, Indhira, I don't mind at all. :] The next chapter is being written now. It's a bit slow, but I'm getting here. Only about 1000 words left to write. Lol.
Kritch, love! aw, I was going to review this a while ago, but I forgot. >.< but now that finals are over I remembered! I love it, dear, just love it. lol. Of course, you already know that. :] I want you to write chapter six because I get to read it before everyone else! That is my favorite part of beta-ing, I'll admit. :] Which remind me, I should do FED now that I don't need to study ... :]
p.s. I forgot to say last chapter: thank you for calling me amazing, love, when truly, you are the brilliant one. I do appreciate the ego-boost, though, as always. lol. :]
Author's Response: Lol. I bet I'd love that too! I already knew you loved it but its nice to hear. And lol, you're welcome. I don't know about brilliant all the time but I'll admit that I have my moments. ;]
KRITCH! I love that you showed the relationship between Aveline and Ted in this chapter. It was so cute :] They seem like me and one of my friends... ANYWAY! As always, your writing astounds me. It really is beautiful. I can't wait for SIX. *pressure to write* You've got me falling for Ted here. And the questions at the end are making me anxious for the next installment! I command you to write quickly! Lol. Lub it.
Author's Response: Lol. No pressure at all, right?
WOW, how can you write something this amazing and beautiful? (though, I don't know, can you say beautiful about a story? well I guess, I just don't care and say it! )
It's trully great! I LOVE IT!
I hope You continue it soon!!
Author's Response: Awwwah, that's so sweet. Thank you. :] I do plan on continuing it.
OMG! major cliffie!!
more more more!!
reallyyyy goooddd :):):)
Author's Response: Lol sorry. :D I'm glad you're enjoying this so much. I've currently waiting for a one-shot to be accepted, but I haven't even started chapter six yet. I'll get to it soon, I promise.
D'oh! No editing reviews! I was going to put 'better not to see his family' and decided on "best to avoid his family" and didn't delete the "not". Oh well, to be constructive :D, one thing I noticed, a comma missing between "Hello, Ted."
Author's Response: Lol, silly Kerichi. I'll change that. [bounces off] I've got a one-shot coming up soon. :D I'm really proud of it.
Weeks passed and autumn turned into winter without much fanfare. I enjoyed that line, but you make me wonder if the line "we knew better though" doesn't apply to Aveline, :D, who now wants Ted to be her boyfriend, and sad to think Ted believes it's best not to avoid his family!
Author's Response: Lol, no. The pair of this discovered they aren't made to be a couple a long time ago. Aveline's too easily jealous. :D
I was struck by how often she refers to Ted as 'the Hufflepuff' or his qualities as 'Hufflepuf' this or that. Andromeda's trying to maintain distance but then kisses his cheek. I think she's outsmarted herself! ^_~
Author's Response: Lol. You're the first to catch that, even before myself! :D
I like this fic VERY VERY MUCH!
The characters of Dromeda and Ted, and the whole "atmosphere" is really well written! Congrat!!!
And I would really like to read the next chap, but I get the following from the site:
"Access denied. This story has not been validated by the adminstrators of this site"
Come on, I want to READ it!!!
And Kritchen keep on writing, you are very talented!
Author's Response: Thank you. [blushes] Lol. Chapter five hasn't been accepted yet. It should be very soon.
NITPICK: I felt a shiver go down my spin that had nothing to do with the cold. >>> Should be spinE.
Kritchen. I loved this chapter. The tension and emotion you created between the pair was unbelievable. When they were hiding in the niche, I'm pretty sure my heart was pounding just as hard as theirs >.< I love the Ted that you have created throughout these first four chapters. He's absolutely wonderfully amazing in every way! I can't wait to see what chapter five holds!
Author's Response: I'm surprised no one caught that sooner. I must have read that chapter through a million times. Oh well, it's fixed now. Thanks darling. I'm soooooo glad you loved it. I simply love this story. :D I think somone is falling in love with Ted as well. ;]
i luv it
and i luv the use of 'oh the cleverness of me'
i really like peter pan
this story is really, really good
can't wait for more!! :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you loved it so much. :]
yay! chapter is up. :] and I'm the first review. :] I've already toldyou everything I love about this, kid. good job! :]
Author's Response: Lol. That you did silly goose. :D
That's so sweet of you! Thank you so much, just for thinking of it. And yes, I am now obsesively checking for the validation of chapter 4.
Author's Response: It's the least I can do. Chapter four is now waiting to be validated. I can't imagine that it'll be much longer.