Very fluffy, but kinda cute. I can definitely see why this was rated 1st-2nd Years.
I love this story!!! You did an exellent job! Keep up the good work!!! I expect more wonderful works like this! I can't wait to read all of your stories!!! You Rock!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad to hear you liked it. Please keep up with me as my other stories get validated.
Aww! So sweet! That must've been a perfect birthday for him!
Author's Response: Yes, that was what I wanted for him, especially compared to his past birthdays.
“Hermione you’ve had half your lives of time over this. You almost got together during that war! What’s changed? Why are you staling?!”
you spelled stalling with one l. other than that, great fic :)
Author's Response: Thank you for that. I have made that change. Thanks for reading!
Lovely. As I'd almost imagined. :-)
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it. Good reviews are so nice, it means I'm doing something right. I hope my next fic is to your liking!
i adore this fic
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm quite fond of it myself...;)
Omigosh this was so cute! The whole time I read this I had this stupid grin on my face (you know the one you got when Harry kissed Ginny in HBP and when Ron finally kissed Hermione in DH, but it lasted the whole entire story). H/G makes me so happy, and this was one of the better ones I've read!
"'I can’t think of anywhere else I’d rather be than right here with you.' 'Really? Cause just a few minutes ago you where nearly shoving me out the door'"
^That line mad me laugh :). I definitely wouldn't be able to tell that it was your first fic if you hadn't told me!!
Author's Response: Oh good, I am so glad you liked it! I have a chaptered story in que, so hopefully that comes out as well as this one.
Yay!!! I love it!!!!
Author's Response: Thank You!
This was great! We'd both love to see another one like this. Thanks for writing this story and making us smile. Have Fun and Happy Writing!
~A&H {The GryffindorGals}
Author's Response: Thanks girls! I'm working on a few ideas so we'll see what happens.
Nice sweet one.
Author's Response: Thanks, glad you liked it!
I totally adored it. It's so sweet and mushy, yet not over the top. A great mix of everything I love- Harry & Ginny + Ron & Hermione
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Be sure to watch out for my new story "The Missing" which should be validated soon. It's got both R/Hr and H/G. I'm also working on a short R/Hr. Sorry to advertise, Thanks for the review!
*sniff* awww... good story!! harry and ginny foreva!!!
Author's Response: Thanks, I agree!
aww. this was so sweet.
Author's Response: I'm glad you think so! Thanks for the review.
That was awesome! i loved it. I loved how you made Harry and Ginny help each other pick up the pieces of their lives, and the "i love you" at the end was amazing. Kudos!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Very cute =)
Author's Response: Thanks!
Yay! Harry finally has a happy ending. Way to go. =D
Author's Response: I feel the same way. Thanks for the review!
Cute. It almosts seems to belong in the Harry/Ginny AND Ron/Hermione though. But still, good job.
Author's Response: It's hard to place them sometimes. Maybe I should write one for that category.
This was a really lovely, sweet, fluffy idea. Harry seemed to be mostly in canon, but Ginny not so much. She doesn't seem the type that would cry so easily, over a silly comment - maybe if it had been said a week after, but not a good few months.
Also, there was a repeative grammar mistake - when a character is speaking to another, a comma should come before the name or term of endearment, eg:
"Happy birthday, Harry."
"Sure, hunny," And since when does Mrs Weasley call Ginny hunny?! That's something that young mothers or American mothers usually call their children, not quite an old English woman. ;)
Apart from those little nit-picks, I really enjoyed it, and look forward to your future works. :)
~Evie
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your suggestions! I have made a few changes, but as for Ginny being in cannon.....I think that when someone you love dies, it takes a very long time to recover. Ginny is a very strong character and wouldn't cry for just anything, but I think Hermione's comment brings about the reality of her brothers death, but that's just my take on it. Thanks so much for your honesty!
*Sniff* Bravo! That was beautiful! I loved the way that Harry and ginny were helping each other move on. Great job! :)
Author's Response: Thank you! That's exactly what I was trying to portray in them!
