Reviewer: RealmofShadows
Date: 09/27/11 16:08
Chapter: Chapter 17 - Yuletide

Seems I missed like Four chapters here! Loved the engagement scene. Excellent.

Author's Response: Thank you! cj

Reviewer: RealmofShadows
Date: 09/27/11 16:04
Chapter: Chapter 20 - Interlude

I can't tell you how surprised I was to see an update to this. It was a very pleasant surprise though and I'm glad to see that you are back at writing it!

Excellent chapter, loved the spawn of a new relationship. Interesting thing with Malfoy... seems that everyone wants to redeem him... except Ron.

Author's Response: Aw, thanks. I'm pleased that people are still reading this, despite the terribly long delays in me updating. I won't mention the Malfoy thing, as I see you've left some more reviews ... cj

Reviewer: Maggie_Weasley-Tonks
Date: 09/25/11 18:19
Chapter: Chapter 12 - Routines and Risks

"You might laugh. Bellatrix Lestrange did. Right before I killed her."
Effing genius. I will start saying that :)

Author's Response: lol I'm thrilled I'm going to be quoted! I've always loved that line as well. cj

Reviewer: Maggie_Weasley-Tonks
Date: 09/25/11 15:33
Chapter: Chapter 10 - Birthdays, Deaths, and Tournaments

Omg. Loved the ending. Ron is such a geek! I can't stop laughing :)

Author's Response: I'm so pleased you liked Ron's romantic (albeit geeky) gesture at the end there. Keep reading! cj

Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister
Date: 08/24/11 23:44
Chapter: Chapter 13 - Popping the Question, revisited

About a month ago I read the little short story of what really happened in the common room when Harry proposed. And I released it was for this story from the description of the ring.
Anyways I really liked this chapter it was really funny (just like the other ones! - Hallarious!). I really like were you're going with the story it's really interesting; and it's making it hard for me to put my IPod down - Even at 2:00 am! - you see great story's make people do things like that - Well at least me! -
Loving the story!

Author's Response: I am thrilled that you think my writing is funny, and that it is 'un-put-down-able'. Stay tuned - the next chapter is finished, and I hope soon-to-be accepted. cj

Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister
Date: 08/24/11 22:53
Chapter: Chapter 11 - In Memoriam

The Cedric Diggory Memorial Inter-School Tournament ... Boy is that a mouth full!

How do you come up with these things?!?!?!?!

Author's Response: Um - too much hot cocoa or raspberry tea when I'm writing? You ask a good question. Sometimes things just pop into my mind, other times, I struggle with coming up with a simple name or activity. *shrugs* Nature of the beast, I guess. cj

Reviewer: Arial Felchem
Date: 08/24/11 21:12
Chapter: Chapter 19 - Fear, Flowers, and Forgiveness

Good story! Loved the part where Ron asked Hermione to the ball and where he proposed. This part with Draco was really good too. Can't wait to see how it all turns out!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you are enjoying it. The parts you mention are favourites of mine, as well. Stay tuned - the next chapter should be accepted soon, I hope. cj

Reviewer: GinnyPotter711
Date: 08/20/11 23:18
Chapter: Chapter 19 - Fear, Flowers, and Forgiveness

This is such an amazing story! I'm really looking forward to the next update.
Happy writing!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I just finished the next chapter this past week - hopefully it will be accepted soon. cj

Reviewer: GinnyPotter711
Date: 08/20/11 17:02
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Summer That Year

Cute chapter! It's been so long since I read this fanfic, I thought it was time for a re-read!

Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to re-read! cj

Reviewer: I Heart Harry
Date: 08/02/11 22:37
Chapter: Chapter 19 - Fear, Flowers, and Forgiveness

I love this story ! You have the characters pretty much perfect, which is the most important thing for me in fan fiction, and I know it must be tricky to do, so well done. I have been reading Mugglenet stories for a while, and this is definitely one of my favourites.
I just signed up so I could tell you how great a writer you are ! (:
I'm so excited for the next chapter, I'll be checking every day :D
Jamie (:

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your positive review. I am thrilled that you feel I have got the characters close to perfect. That means a lot to me, as I do work hard to keep them as close to Ms Rowling's characters as possible. Stay tuned. I hope my next chapter will not be too much longer. cj

Reviewer: Prongs_Luver
Date: 07/26/11 15:50
Chapter: Chapter 2 - Muggle Studies

:) Nice chapter! You've got a gift!

Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you enjoy the rest of the chapters as well. cj

Reviewer: Gone_2_Honeydukes
Date: 07/25/11 15:52
Chapter: Chapter 19 - Fear, Flowers, and Forgiveness

Absolutely love this story!
One little thing is that although Ron does love his food, I think he doesn't mention quite as often as in your story. The characters are all very true to the books though, and I love that you can keep their personalities true while extending from Jo's work.
Can't wait for the last few chapters! I really do hope you finish. I'm on my toes...

Author's Response: *groan* I agree about Ron. There's a fine line between keeping a character true to the original books, and going overboard. I admit I mentioned it too often in that case. In my defense, for me, the chapters are very far apart; for my readers, they can see them all at once, lol! Thank you so much for the review. I love hearing that I've kept the characters true to Ms Rowling's work! cj

Reviewer: Alice Elizabeth Greenfield
Date: 07/19/11 12:04
Chapter: Chapter 19 - Fear, Flowers, and Forgiveness

It's bloody brilliant!! Can't wait till it's finished(:

Author's Response: Thanks, Meagan! Stay tuned. cj

Reviewer: ravenclaw1997
Date: 07/19/11 6:41
Chapter: Chapter 19 - Fear, Flowers, and Forgiveness

This is such a great story. I read it all in two days, twice I believe. I remember it from reading another time, so I assume this isn't the first time I've read it, and not that it's like another story. If that makes sense.

I loved Ron's explanation of Hermione's engagement ring; I had to hold in my laughter so nobody else thought I was nuts. Great job on both of the rings, actually.

Overall, this is just an amazing story. I'm looking forward to more eventually!

:) Manda

Author's Response: Thank you you so much for your review. I did understand what you were trying to say: you figure you've read my story before, and not just that it seems like another. I'm pleased you liked the rings, and found Ron's description amusing. Those two are so antagonistic towards one another always ... Thanks again. Stay tuned cj

Reviewer: eio
Date: 07/17/11 23:45
Chapter: Chapter 13 - Popping the Question, revisited

I am thoroughly enjoying this... At first I thought you won me over with the mention of hockey and the Pittsburgh Penguins, however I need to be awake in 4 hours, and I can't stop reading. You made me cry and laugh out lout! Thank you

Author's Response: lol! My daughter is a big Penguins fan, too. I'm thrilled that although you had to get some sleep, you were enjoying my story so much you stayed up to read it! That warms this author's heart, that does. cj

Reviewer: Deathly Hallows Hunter
Date: 07/11/11 16:40
Chapter: Chapter 11 - In Memoriam

this actually made me cry, it was great

Author's Response: Awww.... sorry I made you cry. But I'm pleased that I was able to elicit an emotional response! cj

Reviewer: Lily_Missy0909
Date: 07/08/11 16:08
Chapter: Chapter 19 - Fear, Flowers, and Forgiveness

Hey! I love your story! The first story I read, and i loved it! I cant wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it. Stay tuned cj

Reviewer: Lasselanta
Date: 06/22/11 21:04
Chapter: Chapter 19 - Fear, Flowers, and Forgiveness

Really enjoying this story so far - any chance for an update soon? Thanks for sharing your creativity. :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! Sorry for the delay in responding - I often don't get notifications anymore when I get a review. I actually will have some uninterrupted time to write this summer. I'm so excited! I will be able to finish my story finally! cj

Reviewer: Nummytud
Date: 06/13/11 13:41
Chapter: Chapter 13 - Popping the Question, revisited

Hahaha this chapter was HILARIOUS!!!!! :)

Author's Response: I'm pleased you thought so! Thanks for the review. cj

Reviewer: shortay931
Date: 06/06/11 23:51
Chapter: Chapter 19 - Fear, Flowers, and Forgiveness

are you going to finish this story? please do!

Author's Response: I will. When is another question. I am halfway done the next chapter, and then I think there is one more after that that is unwritten. I then have three more already done. Please stay tuned, despite the terrible delays! cj

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