Reviewer: Nostalgic128
Date: 06/19/08 12:38
Chapter: Chapter 6 - Errands

what a lovely story!
i can't believe it...i was smiling nearly the whole time that i was reading it, it's so good!!
please please please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much Pam! I am thrilled you're enjoying it. The next update won't be too long, but I do still have to write most of the next chapter. A few after it are nearly finished though. Thanks for reading and reviewing! cj

Reviewer: HPFanatic101
Date: 06/18/08 22:00
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Summer That Year

Hey! love the story, as you probably already know, but got an email telling me that you had updated, but the 7th chapter won't show up!

Author's Response: It's crazy isn't it? I got an acceptance letter today (timed at about 1:30). My daughter got an update message shortly after. But since then, *phftt* nothing up on the site. I did email the mod who accepted the chapter to see if he had any ideas when it would be up on here. I know that last time it took a while. I hope it's up soon! cj

Reviewer: ginnygirl16
Date: 06/16/08 15:58
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Summer That Year

good luck! hopefully they accept it quickly! :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I hope so, too. Should be about a week I'd wager. cj

Reviewer: LilyJ
Date: 06/15/08 14:11
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Summer That Year

Hey... Just wanted to see if you got it submitted?

I don't wanna sound impatient or anything.. I'm just wondering. :)

Author's Response: Am about to submit it. Wish me luck!! I'm a little nervous, what with the rejection the first time and all... cj

Reviewer: smileatme890
Date: 06/09/08 10:09
Chapter: Chapter 6 - Errands

I really like the story so far! When will you update?

Author's Response: Thanks very much! I am still working on chapter 7 as we speak, but unfortunately until my final is over this Wednesday (yes, still taking courses at my age) I'll not be able to submit. I'll have it in to the mods by this weekend. cj

Reviewer: smileatme890
Date: 06/09/08 10:09
Chapter: Chapter 6 - Errands

I really like the story so far! When will you update?

Author's Response: Aw, thanks. Glad you enjoy it. I am about to submit chapter 7 as we speak. Wish me luck. It was rejected the first time. cj

Reviewer: rosemerta
Date: 06/05/08 22:27
Chapter: Chapter 6 - Errands

wow, i just have to say your writing is excellent! your depictions of jo's characters are true to form. i often got lost in your fan fiction .. really believed i was reading another harry potter novel! can't wait to read chapter 7. i wasn't yet a member and i actually signed up to be a member, just so that i could comment u!! :)

Author's Response: Why, thank you so very much Rose Chea! It warms this author's heart to hear such praise for my work. And thank you so much for taking the time to sign up so you could review. I truly appreciate that! Enjoy the rest of the story and the other great ones on the site. cj

Reviewer: GinnyAtHeart129
Date: 06/02/08 19:07
Chapter: Chapter 6 - Errands

This story is my favorite I have read on Mugglenet so far!!!!!! It has a fanatastic plot and uses the characters very well. Its also very amusing in certain parts. I look forward to reading more!!! Write On!!!!

Author's Response: Aw, thanks, Analiese! I'm thrilled that my story is your favourite so far. Of course, you've only joined today, so I bet you'll find other favourites soon enough as you explore the site. You should check out my favourite stories, there are some wonderful authors on here. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. cj

Reviewer: ginnygirl16
Date: 05/31/08 16:40
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Summer That Year

What? They rejected it? That sucks! I hope you can get the new-improved chappie up soon!

Author's Response: Yeah. I thought it was pretty much in the sucky department myself. After having so many chapters and other fics just sail through, it caught me by surprise. It's almost finished though, just working on the last bit (which I'm technically not supposed to be working on as my paper is due soon). cj

Reviewer: FriendofMolly
Date: 05/31/08 11:16
Chapter: Chapter 6 - Errands

I hope you will have an update soon . This is a terrific story.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! The latest chapter was rejected :(. Unfortunately, I haven't had time to work on it as I'm working on a paper that's due soon for my night course. Wish me luck with both! cj

Reviewer: ginnygirl16
Date: 05/22/08 16:41
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Summer That Year

Hope the next chapter is up soon!

Author's Response: I'm glad you're anxious for it! I hope so, too. cj

Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 05/20/08 18:16
Chapter: Chapter 6 - Errands


please *bats eyelashes in irresisteble way*


Author's Response: Wondered when I'd hear from you! irresistible, huh? I submitted Sunday my dear, so now we're just waiting on the fabulous mods (do they monitor responses?).

Reviewer: TheNinthHorcrux
Date: 05/19/08 10:35
Chapter: Chapter 6 - Errands

really enjoyed the story so far, harry is just so...harry. great that he kept his promise to griphook... i wondered, why doesnt harry give arthur the motorbike maintanance book that was in grimmauld place haha. thinking way too much sat here i think. really love your writing, all of your stories are truly magnificant. well done, cant wait to see whats next :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm thrilled that you are enjoying it. Yes, Harry is quite Harry, isn't he? At least, that is my goal anyway. There was a motorbike maintenance book in DH? CRAP!! I must not be at that part with my ds yet, and had forgotten it from when I read to my dd! Oh well, I'll call the next chapter poetic license or something! Thanks for your glowing review. I truly appreciate it! cj

Reviewer: ravenclawgirl93
Date: 05/19/08 4:13
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Summer That Year

Both this fan fic and your other 'Aftermath' are the best ones I have every read! Please keep writing because I need to keep reading!

Author's Response: Thank you very much Helen! Of course, part of me is whining *but what about the other ones?*. I am definitely continuing to write, so no worries. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Go Ravenclaw! cj

Reviewer: foofoobejinkins
Date: 05/18/08 14:11
Chapter: Chapter 6 - Errands

This is great so far! Keep writing!

Author's Response: Thanks very much! I've just finished chapter 7 and submitted it, so hopefully it won't be in the queue for too long. Thanks for reading and reviewing. cj

Reviewer: Hermiones BFF
Date: 05/12/08 21:45
Chapter: Chapter 6 - Errands

Cliff hanger!!! Dun dun dun!!!!! Write more Write more WRITE MORE!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Oh no. If that's a cliffhanger, some other endings coming up will kill you! I'm writing, I'm writing! Almost done chapter 7. Thanks for reading and reviewing. cj

Reviewer: bondman007
Date: 05/10/08 20:17
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Summer That Year

Haha yeah, I did. It's almost as if you have a view into J.K.'s mind as to how she would have written it. I realize that I sometimes prefer reading post-DH-chapter-36 H/G stories that are a little more adult-oriented, but more often than not, it comes at the expense of the story's quality. Your style is a seamless balance between readability for adults (or late teenagers, like me) and the semi-younger set (but I agree with the notion that you wouldn't want your 9-year-old to read it.
P.S. You don't actually have to keep putting disclaimers in each chapter's notes. All you really need is one in the story notes. I know it may not seem that way, but trust me, it's fine. All you really need to do that for is if you pull a quote out of the book(s).

Author's Response: Disclaimers - yeah. It seemed to be getting a little much to be honest. It was getting tough to say the same thing in different ways! LOL! Thanks for the comments about having a view into Ms Rowling's mind. How sweet to say. I actually have the more 'adult-oriented' version on these chapters in my head but as I know the children I work with (grade 6) and my own children read these stories, I had to keep it clean. After all, it's just as easy to click 'yes I'm of age' as it is to click 'no, I'm not', right? I'm pleased you think my writing is a balance between readability for adults and young 'uns. Thanks so much for taking the time to review Sean! cj

Reviewer: bondman007
Date: 05/10/08 12:06
Chapter: Chapter 6 - Errands

*chants as if cheering on Superman* UP-DATE!! UP-DATE!! UP-DATE!!

Author's Response: I take it you liked it then. I'm doing my best to update asap. When my dh was in the hospital I was dying to write and now that he's out and things are slowly getting back to normal, I have a bit of time but I've been hit with the biggest writer's block. Very disheartening! It's lovely to know people are still anxious for the next chapters, though. cj

Reviewer: lioness_of_magic
Date: 05/06/08 8:24
Chapter: Chapter 6 - Errands

More more more!!! I laugh whenever I read this fanfic and you really captured the characters personalities which makes reading your story so enjoyable. Your story, in my opinion, is the best fanfic dedicated to filling those nineteen years. Keep up the good work!!!

Author's Response: *blushes profusely* Thank you so much for your kind words. You sure know how to warm an author's heart! More is on its way - I need to get through an exam tomorrow night and then all my free time will be devoted to writing chapters 7 and 8. Thanks very much for reading and reviewing. cj

Reviewer: alex_gough
Date: 05/05/08 17:09
Chapter: Chapter 6 - Errands

I really enjoy reading your story! It's quite enjoyable to read a well-written fanfic with proper grammar and good sentence structure for a change. Do update soon, I can't wait to find out what Harry's got up his sleeve for the unsuspecting bookshop keeper... =)

Author's Response: Thanks very much, I'm thrilled you find my writing to be well-written and grammatically correct. Honestly, I'm well-known as the grammar police in my circles. A former co-worker actually had a badge made up that said just that and used to flip open his blazer, revealing it, whenever someone made an error. We were the only two who found it at all humourous! I'm still working on the next chapter; with dh out of the hospital, I may get some more time to finish it soon. cj

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