Reviewer: Kiryn
Date: 07/26/08 3:56
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Summer That Year

No, it's fine, I don't mind at all. I check out people's profiles a lot too. I'm just surprised someone took the time to look at mine. Thanks for caring! =)

Author's Response: Oh good. Don't be surprised. I'm sure more people read it than you realize. I just read your first fic. Off to review it... cj

Reviewer: Xenophilius L
Date: 07/25/08 7:16
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Summer That Year

I think, this story is fantastic. You have a great talent for writing. Keep up the good work, and please update soon XD
PS excellent use of Harry and Ginny's row as the climax (or one of the climaxes anyway XD), but yeah brilliant ideas I love it!

Author's Response: Thanks very much Zac. And thanks, too, for the comment about this story under your favourites. I'm blushing here! Like any writer I go through periods when I think everything I write is just absolute rubbish, so it helps during those times to read remarks like yours. I truly appreciate it. And I'm thrilled you loved the argument climax. Can't have too much getting along, might get boring after a while! cj

Reviewer: Kiryn
Date: 07/24/08 4:26
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Summer That Year

How did you know my name? Do I know you, or did you just look it up on my profile? I don't mind, it just surprised me. And the story is still awesome and is now in my favorites!

Author's Response: I hope I didn't worry you by using it, like I'm some sort of stalker or something! I simply clicked on your username and it got me to your profile, that's all. I like to read a bit about the people who leave me reviews. I'm thrilled my story is now in your favourites! cj

Reviewer: StuckWithHarry
Date: 07/23/08 18:11
Chapter: Chapter 7 - Two Gifts and a Quarrel

Hello! I really enjoy your story so far. It's really realistic and a lot like what I imagined happening to Harry and everyone. When's the next chapter going to be up?

Author's Response: I'm thrilled you are enjoying it and that you find it realistic and what you would imagine. I got quite a bit of writing done this past week, so I'm hoping to just edit the next chapter and get it submitted this weekend. cj

Reviewer: Avada Kedavra815
Date: 07/22/08 21:47
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Summer That Year

When I say 10 or 11 chapters I meant chapters 10 and `11. Just wanted that to be cleared up.

Author's Response: No worries. I understood. And to clarify my last response - I'm just doing the first of those 19 years, so when I get to the end of the year, that's the end of my story, more or less. cj

Reviewer: Avada Kedavra815
Date: 07/22/08 15:51
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Summer That Year

I have a question: How many chapters do u plan on devoting to the first few months after the Battle? In your summary you said ur take on the 19 years in between, but u say its going to take at least 10 or 11 chapters before Harry even proposes, so if ur doing key points and developing them then its going to be pretty long. But as I say only a question, not trying to write ur story for u. Love ur story. Hoping for a fast update and ur back is feeling better. AV.
P.S. How's ur hubby doing, you said he was in the hospital for something? jw

Author's Response: Hi there! You actually had me go back and look at my summary to see what I'd written for it. I was worried I'd actually put "my take on the 19 years". I was going to tell you to go back and read it again (can you tell I'm in education?), but I'll save you the trouble. It actually reads "my take on the first of the 19 years". *phew* I'm relieved I wrote what I wanted it to say. My back is much much better, thank you for asking. It only gets sore if I sit for very long times now. And my hubby is back home and feeling fine as well. We've been camping these last two weeks and it was lovely to have him with us, that's for sure! He had been very ill and we were all worried about him. cj

Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 07/22/08 8:22
Chapter: Chapter 7 - Two Gifts and a Quarrel

hi there sry i havent left you any Obnoxious reviews lately my family just moved and my dad took forever to put up the computer but i'm back now soo yes
hey updade soon plz


Author's Response: Hey Lola! Glad to see a review from you again. I thought you forgot all about me! Hope the move went well. cj

Reviewer: xoxoZMHxo
Date: 07/17/08 17:54
Chapter: Chapter 7 - Two Gifts and a Quarrel

ahhh i cant wait for him to propose

Author's Response: Well, he may propose in the next chapter, but it won't do any good as Ginny isn't speaking with him at the moment, and would probably just hex him again. I'm afraid they have to get back together again first before any proposing can take place. At a rough guess, we have at least 4 chapters to go before anyone gets 'down on bended knee' so to speak. Remember, Zoe, patience is a virtue! cj

Reviewer: hngrock
Date: 07/15/08 21:34
Chapter: Chapter 7 - Two Gifts and a Quarrel

come onnnn
plss dont keep me wating
i cant take it =)

Author's Response: So sorry for the long wait. But after the setbacks I've experienced these past few weeks, I can safely say that chapter 8 is almost done! I then have some jolly good ideas up and running for the 9th and 10 is almost complete already, so shouldn't be much longer now... cj

Reviewer: Kiryn
Date: 07/13/08 19:49
Chapter: Chapter 7 - Two Gifts and a Quarrel

Great story so far. I can't wait for your next update!

Author's Response: Thanks Ashley! I'm hoping my next update will be soon. After a few computer and health setbacks, I have just about finished the next chapter and have some great (I think anyway) ideas for chapter 9 as well. Thanks for reading and reviewing. cj

Reviewer: wingsofathestral
Date: 07/11/08 19:09
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Summer That Year

This story is fantastic!! Your writing is so close to JK's its wonderful :) I can't wait for the new chapter to come out...I love this story!!

Author's Response: Thanks very much. I never tire of hearing that people love this story! I'm thrilled that you think I've captured Ms Rowling's style. Thanks for reading and reviewing. cj

Reviewer: ginnygirl16
Date: 07/07/08 18:47
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Summer That Year

Oh Darn! and I was hoping to see it up this week. Oh well.. I hope you got lot's written in hand, then it will be a breeze to update the chapters when you can! Can't wait! lol

Author's Response: Yeah. Sorry Sara! I sure hope it will be breezy now! lol! cj

Reviewer: hngrock
Date: 07/07/08 10:33
Chapter: Chapter 7 - Two Gifts and a Quarrel

how much longer?

Author's Response: Sorry for the delay. I threw my back out last week and it is still painful to sit for anything other than very short periods at the computer. Fortunately, my arms still work and I have been writing in long hand. Just need to get it all onto the computer though. Also, I realized the next chapter would be waaaaaaay too long, so have split the next into two different chapters. Not much longer I hope! Thanks for your patience. cj

Reviewer: FaithPotter
Date: 07/06/08 18:21
Chapter: Chapter 7 - Two Gifts and a Quarrel

Love this chapter! You go, Ginny! lol

Author's Response: Great! Yeah, Ginny's a hoot, isn't she? cj

Reviewer: FaithPotter
Date: 07/06/08 17:42
Chapter: Chapter 5 - Popping the (First) Question

Great story so far!

Author's Response: Thanks very much. I'm glad you think so. cj

Reviewer: seeker15
Date: 07/04/08 21:48
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Summer That Year

great story! very well-written! it's so realistic for the series! i could totally see all this happening afterward!

Author's Response: Thanks very much! I'm so pleased by your positive review. Thanks for taking the time to leave it. cj

Reviewer: Icedearth15876
Date: 06/30/08 22:19
Chapter: Chapter 7 - Two Gifts and a Quarrel

Best chapter yet, can't wait for the next one.

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it. Hopefully the next chapter will be finished soon. cj

Reviewer: Icedearth15876
Date: 06/30/08 22:09
Chapter: Chapter 7 - Two Gifts and a Quarrel

Best chapter yet, can't wait for the next one.

Author's Response: See above. (I'm always so glad to see that I'm not the only one that makes double posts sometimes) cj

Reviewer: mugglenetaddict813
Date: 06/30/08 18:42
Chapter: Chapter 7 - Two Gifts and a Quarrel

Wow! I definitely wasn't expecting that ending. But, I guess I can see Ginny's side of the story too. I probably would have felt the same way if I thought that my boyfriend was keeping something from me, especially after everything Harry and Ginny have been through. I know that even now, I get upset when my husband doesn't share something with me. :) Anyway, I loved the chapter and can't wait to read more! Update soon! :)

Author's Response: I'm pleased I surprised you with the ending. Ginny's at the end of her rope, I think. She is extremely sensitive about anyone treating her like a child and is the one thing she's immature about. Harry, unfortunately, (for reasons that will be apparent in upcoming chapters) has been inadvertently treating her in such a way. They'll work it out. She's just got the wrong end of the stick as to why he excluded her from the battle the year before and why he's keeping things from her now. I'm so glad you're enjoying the story. Thanks for reading and reviewing. cj

Reviewer: hngrock
Date: 06/30/08 14:06
Chapter: Chapter 7 - Two Gifts and a Quarrel

omg whenis the next chapter soming out
im dyiiiiing to read it
its awesome

Author's Response: The chapter will come out after I've written it. ;) I have ideas but they're not on paper yet I'm afraid. For some reason, I'm fixated on chapter 9 right now. Must get that down before I can concentrate on chapter 8. Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm thrilled you think it awesome! cj

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