Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 07/31/08 15:32
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Summer That Year
ah so nice to know im understanable :)
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XOXO
~lola~
Author's Response: :) cj
Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 07/31/08 9:14
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Summer That Year
by story i meant next chapter and i guess it's not b/c i'm reviewing this huh
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XOXO
~lola~
Author's Response: I knew what you meant, don't worry. cj
Reviewer: chet
Date: 07/31/08 6:50
Chapter: Chapter 7 - Two Gifts and a Quarrel
This is one of the first stories i have come across on this website, and i have to say that it’s great, it reads so fluently and it seems so realistic. This is one of those scenarios where I can say that ‘this is how it could have happened’ :) . Is it already/ or have you ever thought about putting this story on any other fanfiction websites? :) . Hope the next chapter is up soon!
chet
Author's Response: Thanks very much. I'm thrilled it's one of the first you've come across and you liked it enough to review! It warms my heart that you believe it to be fluent and realistic. That's what I like to hear!
It is not on any other fan sites and I have thought about it, but have decided to just leave it here. I have enough trouble keeping up with one site, let alone a number of them! As a busy wife and mother who works full time outside the home, volunteers part time, and is attending night courses as well, this is plenty for now! The next chapter has been submitted and I hope it will be validated soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing! cj
Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 07/30/08 22:09
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Summer That Year
yes exactly what i was thinking H/G would've been good but alas ah well
so is life (i've been trying to make that my moto but im too much of a drama Queen ha so is life *singgers at own joke*)
sooo perhaps the next time i reveiw your page it'll be for the storyy
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XOXO
~lola~
Author's Response: I was trying to figure out why you were 'singing' until I realized you meant 'snigger'. lol! Yes. A review of my story. That would be different than our own little chat board, eh? See ya later. cj
Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 07/30/08 15:25
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Summer That Year
yes, yes i know but we can still cross our harry potter loving fingers and hope...hope...hope...
ooh have u looked at the trailer yet even my mom said it made her heart pound out of her chest (although thats not saying much b/c she's been a major harry potter fan forever and cried w me when dumbledore died)
but ya gotta watch it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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XOXO
~lola~
p.s. i will bug you to all of heck untill you watch it TO ALL OF HECK!!
Author's Response: Lola, Lola, Lola. Of COURSE I've watched the trailer. I viewed it through the MuggleNet main site about three minutes after I responded to your last comment! I AM a huge fan, remember. Someone on another site I frequent posted the link as well. Some people say they keep watching it over and over again. I thought it was kind of cool, and I like who they got for young Voldemort. However, I was hoping for more to the trailer than just Voldemort stuff (like H/G to be exact!). cj
Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 07/30/08 7:26
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Summer That Year
eeeeeeee definatly more squealing thats exiting yay now for the accepting...
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XOXO
~lola~
Author's Response: Oh good. I'm glad there was more of the squealing! About the accepting ... Not much I can do about that unfortunately. cj
Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 07/29/08 20:46
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Summer That Year
ahhh OMG I JUST WATCHED THE TRAILER FOR HBP EEK I AM SO EXITED i was like jumping aroud the house screaming my mother (of course) wanted to know what was wrong *sighs* she thinks im crazy AND RIGHTLY SO I AM SOOOOO EXITED AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH have u seen the trailer yet? if u havent go look it up on Youtube it'll probably be there
EEK SO EXITED gonna go squeal some more
see ya
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XOXO
~lola~
Author's Response: Ooooh. That is exciting. I haven't seen it yet. I'll have to check out YouTube later. Guess what? I submitted chapter (oh my goodness, I've lost track what chapter we're at), well, the next chapter, whatever number it is. Hopefully it will be accepted soon! Did that make you squeal some more? Tell me it did, even if it didn't, 'kay? cj
Reviewer: FriendofMolly
Date: 07/27/08 16:01
Chapter: Chapter 7 - Two Gifts and a Quarrel
When is the next chapter coming? I'm really enjoying it.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you are still enjoying it. I am working on the next chapter as we 'speak'. I have one more paragraph to write to tie up two different scenes, and then need to edit some repeated words (a pet peeve of mine). For instance, Harry is helping himself to a second helping of pancakes. Arrgghh! Can't have that! Stay tuned. I just hope this one doesn't get rejected. I'm a little submitting-shy after the last one. cj
Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 07/26/08 17:44
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Summer That Year
wow 200th i had no idea i had timing THAT impecible
oh and congrats on the 200th review *throws more confetti*
Author's Response: Thanks sweetie! cj
Reviewer: hpfangirl2300
Date: 07/26/08 17:43
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Summer That Year
this story is awesome so far!
Author's Response: Thanks very much. I don't get tired of hearing that! Thanks for reading and reviewing. cj
Reviewer: PeaceLovePotter
Date: 07/26/08 11:36
Chapter: Chapter 7 - Two Gifts and a Quarrel
I can't wait for the next chapter! You're a great author!
Author's Response: Thanks very much! I can't wait for the next chapter either. *sheesh* I wonder when that cjbaggins person will update, huh? Oh wait. That's me. ;) cj
Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 07/26/08 10:15
Chapter: Chapter 7 - Two Gifts and a Quarrel
me forget about you ha never i could never forget that this story is not over i want to read it too much
*hem hem hint hint*
*silly grin*
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XOXO
~lola~
Author's Response: Aww...that's sweet. I'm glad you'd never forget me or my story! And guess what? You're the 200th reviewer for this story! *throws confetti* cj
Reviewer: Kiryn
Date: 07/26/08 3:56
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Summer That Year
No, it's fine, I don't mind at all. I check out people's profiles a lot too. I'm just surprised someone took the time to look at mine. Thanks for caring! =)
Author's Response: Oh good. Don't be surprised. I'm sure more people read it than you realize. I just read your first fic. Off to review it... cj
Reviewer: Xenophilius L
Date: 07/25/08 7:16
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Summer That Year
I think, this story is fantastic. You have a great talent for writing. Keep up the good work, and please update soon XD
PS excellent use of Harry and Ginny's row as the climax (or one of the climaxes anyway XD), but yeah brilliant ideas I love it!
Author's Response: Thanks very much Zac. And thanks, too, for the comment about this story under your favourites. I'm blushing here! Like any writer I go through periods when I think everything I write is just absolute rubbish, so it helps during those times to read remarks like yours. I truly appreciate it. And I'm thrilled you loved the argument climax. Can't have too much getting along, might get boring after a while! cj
Reviewer: Kiryn
Date: 07/24/08 4:26
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Summer That Year
How did you know my name? Do I know you, or did you just look it up on my profile? I don't mind, it just surprised me. And the story is still awesome and is now in my favorites!
Author's Response: I hope I didn't worry you by using it, like I'm some sort of stalker or something! I simply clicked on your username and it got me to your profile, that's all. I like to read a bit about the people who leave me reviews. I'm thrilled my story is now in your favourites! cj
Reviewer: StuckWithHarry
Date: 07/23/08 18:11
Chapter: Chapter 7 - Two Gifts and a Quarrel
Hello! I really enjoy your story so far. It's really realistic and a lot like what I imagined happening to Harry and everyone. When's the next chapter going to be up?
Author's Response: I'm thrilled you are enjoying it and that you find it realistic and what you would imagine. I got quite a bit of writing done this past week, so I'm hoping to just edit the next chapter and get it submitted this weekend. cj
Reviewer: Avada Kedavra815
Date: 07/22/08 21:47
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Summer That Year
When I say 10 or 11 chapters I meant chapters 10 and `11. Just wanted that to be cleared up.
Author's Response: No worries. I understood. And to clarify my last response - I'm just doing the first of those 19 years, so when I get to the end of the year, that's the end of my story, more or less. cj
Reviewer: Avada Kedavra815
Date: 07/22/08 15:51
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Summer That Year
I have a question: How many chapters do u plan on devoting to the first few months after the Battle? In your summary you said ur take on the 19 years in between, but u say its going to take at least 10 or 11 chapters before Harry even proposes, so if ur doing key points and developing them then its going to be pretty long. But as I say only a question, not trying to write ur story for u. Love ur story. Hoping for a fast update and ur back is feeling better. AV.
P.S. How's ur hubby doing, you said he was in the hospital for something? jw
Author's Response: Hi there! You actually had me go back and look at my summary to see what I'd written for it. I was worried I'd actually put "my take on the 19 years". I was going to tell you to go back and read it again (can you tell I'm in education?), but I'll save you the trouble. It actually reads "my take on the first of the 19 years". *phew* I'm relieved I wrote what I wanted it to say.
My back is much much better, thank you for asking. It only gets sore if I sit for very long times now. And my hubby is back home and feeling fine as well. We've been camping these last two weeks and it was lovely to have him with us, that's for sure! He had been very ill and we were all worried about him. cj
Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 07/22/08 8:22
Chapter: Chapter 7 - Two Gifts and a Quarrel
hi there sry i havent left you any Obnoxious reviews lately my family just moved and my dad took forever to put up the computer but i'm back now soo yes
hey updade soon plz
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~lola~
Author's Response: Hey Lola! Glad to see a review from you again. I thought you forgot all about me! Hope the move went well. cj
Reviewer: xoxoZMHxo
Date: 07/17/08 17:54
Chapter: Chapter 7 - Two Gifts and a Quarrel
ahhh i cant wait for him to propose
Author's Response: Well, he may propose in the next chapter, but it won't do any good as Ginny isn't speaking with him at the moment, and would probably just hex him again. I'm afraid they have to get back together again first before any proposing can take place. At a rough guess, we have at least 4 chapters to go before anyone gets 'down on bended knee' so to speak. Remember, Zoe, patience is a virtue! cj
