Reviewer: teddyvictoirefreak
Date: 11/07/10 11:17
Chapter: Chapter 19 - Fear, Flowers, and Forgiveness

Very good. I am happy you took a slightly good light on the Malfoys. Some seem to forget that Draco was scared of Voldemort and that Narcissa helped Harry in DH and then tend to go off on angstly adventures of them gathering Death Eaters and ruining weddings. However, yours was a very fresh take and made me happy. Once again, a very good chapter! Update soon...

Author's Response: Thanks very much, Theresa. I am thrilled that you found my chapter to be a 'fresh take'. Your comments are stuff that author's dreams are made of! cj

Reviewer: abm9009
Date: 11/01/10 0:08
Chapter: Chapter 18 - The Second Task

Fabulous! :]

Author's Response: Thank you! cj

Reviewer: Potter27
Date: 10/30/10 22:08
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Summer That Year

I love this fanfic and want to read more!! I spent 3 hours reading this and I'm dying to read the next chapter!! Keep up the good work!!

Author's Response: I am so flattered that you spent 3 hours reading my whole fic. Thank you so much for taking the time to do so and then letting me know. Add me as a favourite and you may (or may not - see previous review :( ) receive notification when I update. Stay tuned! cj

Reviewer: hpmommie97
Date: 10/28/10 19:29
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Summer That Year

New reader!! I love your story so much!!!! I always wonder what would happen after the last book. And your doing a wonderful job and making it come true!!! Thank you!!! I can't wait for more!!!!

Author's Response: So glad to have a new reader! Thank you for your kind review. Stay tuned. If you add my story as a 'favourite', you will get a notification when I have posted the next chapter. Of course, it may not work. I know I am not receiving emails when people review, darn it. cj

Reviewer: teddyvictoirefreak
Date: 10/28/10 14:38
Chapter: Chapter 18 - The Second Task

You made another chapter! And a delightful one too! Worth the wait! It was very very good. Update sooner this time. Please?

Author's Response: I did, I did make another one! I'm so glad you thought it worth the wait. I am endeavouring to finish the next one this weekend. cj

Reviewer: Hopes Mom
Date: 10/26/10 17:17
Chapter: Chapter 18 - The Second Task

I have just found your story. It is fun to read - the characters are very believable (and likable). Thanks for writing!

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I am pleased you are enjoying it and think the characters believable. cj

Reviewer: pinklilyflower
Date: 10/24/10 19:38
Chapter: Chapter 18 - The Second Task

please finish soon! i really like this story :) good job!

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I have half a chapter and then one more left to write. There are then 3 more already written in full. cj

Reviewer: hermy008
Date: 10/23/10 17:45
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Summer That Year

i absolutely loved it! your style of writing is perfectly suited for this sort of thing. the dialogue was very witty, i laughed out loud at some times. this is one of the best fanfics that ive read, i just hope you add more to it!

Author's Response: Oh, I am so pleased that you are enjoying it. And I am blushing at your praise; I work hard at the dialogue, so truly appreciate your comments. Thank you so much for your review. cj

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 10/18/10 17:55
Chapter: Chapter 18 - The Second Task

yayyyyy!! this story's back! great job, and please update soon =]

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm so pleased everyone is still wanting to read this. cj

Reviewer: ILoveHarry 3_14
Date: 10/17/10 18:06
Chapter: Chapter 18 - The Second Task

Welcome back! I have missed this story so much. Update soon!

Author's Response: Aw, shucks, thanks. Stay tuned. cj

Reviewer: NymphydoryTonks
Date: 10/17/10 14:32
Chapter: Chapter 18 - The Second Task

Keep on wriring :)

Author's Response: Will do! cj

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 10/17/10 14:32
Chapter: Chapter 18 - The Second Task

Yay for the update!!!! Too bad Ginny had such trouble with the challenge :-(

Author's Response: Don't worry. I'm sure she'll find something she's good at. Basket-weaving perhaps. ;) Stay tuned. cj

Reviewer: kyriela6669
Date: 10/12/10 11:37
Chapter: Chapter 17 - Yuletide

Love it! Please write more!

Author's Response: Glad you like it. I'm about to submit the next chapter! cj

Reviewer: IndieV
Date: 09/02/10 0:57
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Summer That Year

CJ, I'm so glad you sent me that link! I love your story and don't worry I'm not just saying that! The 19 years in between is a timeline not very successfully explored by writers, I think, so when I find a well written fic that deals with that subject, I certainly appreciate it. Off to read some more. Well done!

Author's Response: Aw shucks, thanks, Vera. I hope you enjoy the rest. cj

Reviewer: iyellintothefellytone
Date: 08/17/10 1:30
Chapter: Chapter 17 - Yuletide

I absolutely love this story! It's so creative and your writing is amazing. Update soon please.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words. A writer never tires of praise. (at least, this one doesn't, lol!). Stay tuned - I am back from holidays and ready to resume my story. cj

Reviewer: Charmed-Buffy
Date: 08/08/10 17:44
Chapter: Chapter 13 - Popping the Question, revisited

This chapter was EXTREMELY funny! I loved Harry's and Ron's exchanges over Ginny.

Author's Response: I am so thrilled that you found it funny. Sometimes I worry that the humour is only funny to myself, lol! I love those comments myself, to be honest! Make me chuckle. cj

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 07/14/10 10:53
Chapter: Chapter 13 - Popping the Question, revisited

I personally loved the rubies in Ginny's ring, and you are right it was a unique idea/design...

Author's Response: I am thrilled that you loved the rubies. I figured it was appropriate as they're both Gryffindors! cj

Reviewer: cantlivewithoutit
Date: 07/07/10 21:55
Chapter: Chapter 17 - Yuletide


Author's Response: I'm so pleased! cj

Reviewer: Jason Bennett
Date: 07/03/10 18:29
Chapter: Chapter 2 - Muggle Studies

I just finished your story and I have to say it was amazing! I feel that JKR would be proud of were you took her characters. The only thing I would have done differently is in this chapter. Instead of Ginny saying Harry was good at cleaning I would have but a comment about Ketcher. It delivers the same joke and ties in the original works at the same time. Now I am not a writer at all and I am new to the fanfic world so I don't know if my comment is totally off base. But I still think that this story was excellent and can not wait to read more of your work.

Yours in fellowship,
Jason, Melbourn FL

Author's Response: Thank you, Jason, for your review. I am so pleased that you have enjoyed it (so far). I think you are the only reviewer to mention the cleaning section. Thinking back to writing that chapter, I think I was going for the fact that Harry had to do so much cleaning for his aunt when she would order him around and force him to work, that I figured I was tying it in to the original work already. Interesting idea about Kreacher, though. I don't think your comment is off-base at all. I welcome all suggestions and comments! Stay tuned! cj

Reviewer: macweasle
Date: 06/29/10 4:11
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Summer That Year

love it!! I actually sat and read all 17 chapters in one sitting! I can't wait for more!!! (: LOVED Hermione's ring, by the way :)

Author's Response: I am so pleased that you bothered to sit down and read all of this in one go. Thank you so much for taking the time to do that and then tell me about it! And I'm thrilled that you liked Hermione's ring. Pearls seemed the only logical choice! ;) cj

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