Aww poor Ron and Hermione. It kinda makes you wonder if either of them will ever get over their insecurities. :) Good story.
Aww poor Ron and Hermione. It kinda makes you wonder if either of them will ever get over their insecurities. :) Good story.
Aww poor Ron and Hermione. It kinda makes you wonder if either of them will ever get over their insecurities. :) Good story.
awwwwww thats so sweet! a rly great story :)
Awwwww...that is so cute! Maybe an epilogue, like what happens after they get married...
That was treally sweet! You're a really good author, you rawk!
Really cute story. I really liked how nervous they were that the other didnt love them. "Harry gave him a Don’t-make-me-kill-you look" - Hilarious loved the fic
That was sooooo CUTE!!!...but it was too short...it was true though that the story made me want to click the review button...hehe...pleez make a sequel so it could be even more beautiful...<3
great, but short, i agree with some of the other reviewers it would be good if it was longer and went over more time, by the sounds of things that was in a time span of what half an hour. dont get me wrong it was a great story but short
I liked it, but I think you should have made it longer, like start from before he asked her to marry him or something. Well, you do what you want, it's your story.
It's very good, but too short. Is it finished? Please update or write a sequel.
It's really great so far! I can't wait for the next chapter!
its good so far, keep writing!
Lol yeah it did make me want to review ans say how chee...just kidding! I was awesome!! 10/10
I just love your writing!I can't wait to see what happens next. Please write soon...you could be the next J.K!! And I love the way you portray Hermione. TWO THUMBS UP!
