Reviews For Half Memories
Reviewer: HermitKnut
Date: 05/26/12 15:42
Chapter: Half Memories

This is lovely. Very intense and stark to begin with, and the warmer ending is very smoothly done. Nice fic :)


Reviewer: dandy_like_a_lion
Date: 02/20/10 18:29
Chapter: Half Memories

Lovely. Will there be more?

Reviewer: grangergurl
Date: 06/03/09 14:31
Chapter: Half Memories

That was really fantastic, actually. When I saw that it was your first fic, I was like, "Oh, no, get ready to start guiding a lost author to appropriate grammar and other literary habits." I'm grateful to say that I was pleasantly surprised. That was a really great story! I loved feeling awkward while reading; it really drew me into the story. You have a gift! Keep writing.

Reviewer: liquid_silver
Date: 09/13/08 15:06
Chapter: Half Memories

Wow . . . this is your first fic? It's great! I really hope you keep writing; it would be a shame to deprive the MNFF community of more stories like this.

Reviewer: Elpeciss
Date: 09/13/08 0:34
Chapter: Half Memories

Hmm...interesting little situation to explore there! Sirius coming back from Azkaban and what that would be like...not that pleasant as Remus discovered!

Reviewer: MerrryD
Date: 06/23/08 16:32
Chapter: Half Memories


I almost don't believe you when you say this is your first fanfic. It's incredible. Wow. I don't have much to say other than that. I love the emotion in it. I love how you describe Remus, it's like he's a shadow of a man, not really there, just going through his days in an empty routine.

Remus had stared.

Sirius had noticed.

I love this part. I love the way it builds up to it and I really like how you seperated them into two different paragraphs. It shows the importance of it and time seems to freeze just then.

Great job!

Peace out.


Reviewer: moonyschick
Date: 04/06/08 14:23
Chapter: Half Memories

How sweet! Remus and Sirius are my two favorite characters, and it is so hard to find a decent story about just them without it being slashy. This was perfect. Particularly the characters actions. Wonderful.

Reviewer: Ophelia Quinn
Date: 04/03/08 15:30
Chapter: Half Memories

nice. smoothly written. seems very real.

Reviewer: Metamorphmagusgil
Date: 03/30/08 1:37
Chapter: Half Memories

I'm...lost...I mean, what exactly are you trying to say?

Reviewer: Haley Lupin
Date: 03/21/08 15:24
Chapter: Half Memories

Holy. Freaking. Crap. This person is bloody good! Remus and Sirius are my favourite characters, like, ever, and the awkwardness between them is, like, almost real! I have to remind myself I'm not watching this happen in front of my eyes? Good work, rev02a. Good work.

Reviewer: Tallulah
Date: 02/29/08 21:55
Chapter: Half Memories

Heh heh, sorry about my last post, I thought I had to use formatting.

Anyway, it really was an excellent story and I think it was very well written. I liked all the subtle little references and nuances to expressions, reactions, movements.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Tallulah
Date: 02/29/08 21:50
Chapter: Half Memories


[p]I really liked this story! I've never really thought of how Remus and Sirius' first meeting after all thoses years would have been like. I think the way you've portrayed it was excellent! I imagine it would've been incredibly uncomfortable and awkward at first.[/p]

Reviewer: Rhi for HP
Date: 02/07/08 19:11
Chapter: Half Memories

Nice! Exceedingly well written, and you managed to make a very nice story out of a seemingly small incident. I like the frequent flashbacks; they seem natural, like when someone really is going through life and something reminds them of the past. Loved it!

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it! Thank you!

Reviewer: kritchen
Date: 01/28/08 21:35
Chapter: Half Memories

Oh my heavens. I honestly don't know what to say but I know I must because this was simply to fantastic to ignore.

Remus was spot on, I thought. He was mature, thoughtful; exactly the way I picture him. He was loveable too in his kindness to Sirius. The old friendhsip, while halting and unsure, was rekindled elegantly and I loved it. Every word of it. :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much, I love that Lupin, such a cutie that one.

Reviewer: Meshugganuh
Date: 01/13/08 2:30
Chapter: Half Memories

I loved it!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Clare Mansfield
Date: 12/24/07 11:07
Chapter: Half Memories

Bravo! Loved it! So bloody hard to find anything worth reading but you did a beautiful job!


Author's Response: Thank you, dear!

Reviewer: Stubbornly_appeared
Date: 12/02/07 1:25
Chapter: Half Memories

Woah. That was great.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 11/29/07 19:21
Chapter: Half Memories

*sniff* good story!

Author's Response: Thank you so much.

Reviewer: Swallow_the_Coconut
Date: 11/26/07 14:51
Chapter: Half Memories

That was pretty good! I love the way that they just start laughing all of a sudden. I hope that Padfoot remembered to scrub behind his ears!

Author's Response: Haha!! Thank you!

Reviewer: Swallow_the_Coconut
Date: 11/26/07 14:50
Chapter: Half Memories

That was pretty good! I love the way that they just start laughing all of a sudden. I hope that Padfoot remembered to scrub behind his ears!

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