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Reviews For Half Memories

Name: HermitKnut (Signed) · Date: 05/26/12 15:42 · For: Half Memories
This is lovely. Very intense and stark to begin with, and the warmer ending is very smoothly done. Nice fic :)

HK


Name: dandy_like_a_lion (Signed) · Date: 02/20/10 18:29 · For: Half Memories
Lovely. Will there be more?


Name: grangergurl (Signed) · Date: 06/03/09 14:31 · For: Half Memories
That was really fantastic, actually. When I saw that it was your first fic, I was like, "Oh, no, get ready to start guiding a lost author to appropriate grammar and other literary habits." I'm grateful to say that I was pleasantly surprised. That was a really great story! I loved feeling awkward while reading; it really drew me into the story. You have a gift! Keep writing.


Name: liquid_silver (Signed) · Date: 09/13/08 15:06 · For: Half Memories
Wow . . . this is your first fic? It's great! I really hope you keep writing; it would be a shame to deprive the MNFF community of more stories like this.


Name: Elpeciss (Signed) · Date: 09/13/08 0:34 · For: Half Memories
Hmm...interesting little situation to explore there! Sirius coming back from Azkaban and what that would be like...not that pleasant as Remus discovered!
:)


Name: MerrryD (Signed) · Date: 06/23/08 16:32 · For: Half Memories
Hello!

I almost don't believe you when you say this is your first fanfic. It's incredible. Wow. I don't have much to say other than that. I love the emotion in it. I love how you describe Remus, it's like he's a shadow of a man, not really there, just going through his days in an empty routine.

Remus had stared.



Sirius had noticed.


I love this part. I love the way it builds up to it and I really like how you seperated them into two different paragraphs. It shows the importance of it and time seems to freeze just then.

Great job!

Peace out.

-Mere


Name: moonyschick (Signed) · Date: 04/06/08 14:23 · For: Half Memories
How sweet! Remus and Sirius are my two favorite characters, and it is so hard to find a decent story about just them without it being slashy. This was perfect. Particularly the characters actions. Wonderful.


Name: Ophelia Quinn (Signed) · Date: 04/03/08 15:30 · For: Half Memories
nice. smoothly written. seems very real.


Name: Metamorphmagusgil (Signed) · Date: 03/30/08 1:37 · For: Half Memories
I'm...lost...I mean, what exactly are you trying to say?


Name: Haley Lupin (Signed) · Date: 03/21/08 15:24 · For: Half Memories
Holy. Freaking. Crap. This person is bloody good! Remus and Sirius are my favourite characters, like, ever, and the awkwardness between them is, like, almost real! I have to remind myself I'm not watching this happen in front of my eyes? Good work, rev02a. Good work.


Name: Tallulah (Signed) · Date: 02/29/08 21:55 · For: Half Memories
Heh heh, sorry about my last post, I thought I had to use formatting.

Anyway, it really was an excellent story and I think it was very well written. I liked all the subtle little references and nuances to expressions, reactions, movements.

Author's Response: Thanks!


Name: Tallulah (Signed) · Date: 02/29/08 21:50 · For: Half Memories
[p]Hey![/p]

[p]I really liked this story! I've never really thought of how Remus and Sirius' first meeting after all thoses years would have been like. I think the way you've portrayed it was excellent! I imagine it would've been incredibly uncomfortable and awkward at first.[/p]



Name: Rhi for HP (Signed) · Date: 02/07/08 19:11 · For: Half Memories
Nice! Exceedingly well written, and you managed to make a very nice story out of a seemingly small incident. I like the frequent flashbacks; they seem natural, like when someone really is going through life and something reminds them of the past. Loved it!

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it! Thank you!


Name: kritchen (Signed) · Date: 01/28/08 21:35 · For: Half Memories
Oh my heavens. I honestly don't know what to say but I know I must because this was simply to fantastic to ignore.

Remus was spot on, I thought. He was mature, thoughtful; exactly the way I picture him. He was loveable too in his kindness to Sirius. The old friendhsip, while halting and unsure, was rekindled elegantly and I loved it. Every word of it. :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much, I love that Lupin, such a cutie that one.


Name: Meshugganuh (Signed) · Date: 01/13/08 2:30 · For: Half Memories
I loved it!

Author's Response: Thanks!


Name: Clare Mansfield (Signed) · Date: 12/24/07 11:07 · For: Half Memories
Bravo! Loved it! So bloody hard to find anything worth reading but you did a beautiful job!

xxx

Author's Response: Thank you, dear!


Name: Stubbornly_appeared (Signed) · Date: 12/02/07 1:25 · For: Half Memories
Woah. That was great.

Author's Response: Thanks!


Name: JustLikeHermione77 (Signed) · Date: 11/29/07 19:21 · For: Half Memories
*sniff* good story!

Author's Response: Thank you so much.


Name: Swallow_the_Coconut (Signed) · Date: 11/26/07 14:51 · For: Half Memories
That was pretty good! I love the way that they just start laughing all of a sudden. I hope that Padfoot remembered to scrub behind his ears!

Author's Response: Haha!! Thank you!


Name: Swallow_the_Coconut (Signed) · Date: 11/26/07 14:50 · For: Half Memories
That was pretty good! I love the way that they just start laughing all of a sudden. I hope that Padfoot remembered to scrub behind his ears!


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