Reviewer: The Patornus
Date: 08/01/08 19:24
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Across the Water
Great Story! I can't wait to see what happens next! Don't worry, I am also beginer to at fan fiction but I am still writing my stories. Keep up the good work!
Reviewer: The Patornus
Date: 08/01/08 19:24
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Across the Water
Great Story! I can't wait to see what happens next! Don't worry, I am also beginer to at fan fiction but I am still writing my stories. Keep up the good work!
Reviewer: Carma Godsun
Date: 06/02/08 17:49
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Across the Water
Oh, that was really exceptional for a first fanfic! It's a new favorite, update soon.
Reviewer: taytay
Date: 04/14/08 19:35
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Across the Water
ooh awsome i love it!
Author's Response: Thanks! I've written chapter two. I'm going to try to get it uploaded again. Just in case you were wondering.
Reviewer: roonilwazlib123
Date: 11/28/07 21:00
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Across the Water
aww i like this its cute!!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: nightsky
Date: 11/27/07 23:41
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Across the Water
This is even better than the draft I read a few weeks ago when we were talking about this! I'm glad you got to post this, it is amazing! Keep it up, and remember, I get to read everything first! Teeheehee. See you Thursday! -Marissa
Author's Response: Well of course it is. You may bow to my genesis. Please don't feel embarrassed, there no shame in being amazed. :P
Reviewer: missgiggles316
Date: 11/22/07 18:18
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Across the Water
Great first chapter! Update soon! Please!
Author's Response: Thanks! My beta looking at chapter two right now!
Reviewer: shewolf2000
Date: 11/21/07 22:37
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Across the Water
You've got a great start! I hope to see your next chapter soon. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it. I've finished the next chapter - my beta is looking at it right now.
