congrats on another chapter well done.
will you write more? please? pleeeeeeeese?
i hope so!
Well done and keep writing
Author's Response: Thank you very much for keeping up with me and reviewing each chapter, it means more than I can say. I am very glad that you like my stories and in case that you haven't noticed yet, I have another chapter of The Final Choice validated! See you there *wink*
yay^^ Another AWSOME chapter. I loved the conversation between the sorting hat and Victoire weasley. I think its great how it gives and inside look into a ten year old girl. You made it seem really real!(well, as real as Harry Potter can seem, hehe)
I simply must read the next chapter right away!
Author's Response: Ha-ha, I adored writing the conversation too. Thanks for reviewing!
this was a very very very very..... very good first chapter.
I really love your style of writing!
I also think that you really hammered the characterizations. I can't wait to read on! It a really really good idea and the story is so interesting!
Well I must continue reading strait away!
Author's Response: Hey, nice to hear from ypu again! I must admit that I love this fic as much as you do. It was started as a oneshot, but then, the characters just refused to leave me alone! Nice to know that people love this.
James still refused to say anything. The woman sighed exasperatedly and walked away. James stood, waiting for his turn to be Sorted, not knowing that he’d just broken a tradition, as old as Hogwarts itself – the tradition of quiet and frightened first years who did their best to remain unnoticed before their Sorting.
BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! great fic! the woman was mcgonnagal wasnt it? BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. It's always good to see that people like my fics.
*goes to read next chapter*
that was great, loved it how James stood up for Remus and Teddy
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing twice! I loved writing the whole James on the warpath part too.
that's a great start, very descriptive depection of the problems boys face dealing with temperamental girls, and the large families.
Author's Response: Yeah, poor boys...
i love all the chapters!
OMG THIS IS MY FAVV!
i cant wait till you write more :]
Author's Response: As I said, writing is not the problem - there are many other problems. For example, I just received a rejection of a Sirius story not because of its content, but because the mod thought that the warnings were not enough strong. One never knows... Anyway, thank you!
OMG CANT WAIT TILL YOU WRITE MORE :]
that was a really good chapter.
PLEASE WRITE MORE!!
loved it :]
Author's Response: The problem is not with writing - the next two chapters are already ready. It's just, validating takes time with this glitch and so on. Fred's chapter is in the queu.
aww i love the first chapter!
cant wait to read more :]
Author's Response: Thanks! I am quite fond of this story myself - fond of writing it and receiving reviews for it!
i love James and Fred being the same age not to mention James being so protective
Author's Response: Yeah, James is a loyal guy, isn't he? Thanks for your review, you really made my day.
I loved this chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for sticking with my story! Happy New Year!
Great chapter! Even though it did cost him, I'm glad that James stood up for Teddy.
Please, update soon!
Author's Response: I've already posted the new chapter in the queue. Thank you for your review. I hope you had a lovely Christmas. Happy New Year!
these are really lovely little vignettes--I think you've captured aspects of the children's characterization that is quite believable, and in a refreshing way. my only criticism is that you have a few inconsistencies in verb tense, and other small grammatical errors (i.e. preposition and word choice...) anyhow, I look forward to reading more!
Author's Response: Thank you, it's always good to see new people signing reviews and likung my story. I'll post the new chapter at 3th January, I promise.
nice :-) please write some more soon! its a good idea...
Author's Response: Thank you for your review, I really appreciate it. The next two chapters are ready, so don't worry. Merry Christmas!
ammmazing!!!! I loved it so much. Your really talented and should be proud!! I can't wait for an update. This story is pure genius!!
Author's Response: Oooh, thank you! Such reviews are the best Christmas present you can give me. Don't worry, the next chapter is ready and will be in the queu as soon as the mods open it. Merry Christmas!
Oh, such a great job on this chapter, it is so cute. I love the ending when Lily, Hugo and Albus gather around Teddy to watch him change his face. (Just like his mum used to do for Hermione and Ginny) The last paragraph was so sad, especially the line where it says "everyone would be with their parents, and he would have only his grandmother seeing him off." And the picture: that makes me want to almost cry, because it sounds like it would be so real, and there would have been many more like that had they survived. (Why did JK kill them, why?) Anyway, that was a very good job on this chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, it means a lot! I fell in love with Teddy and I am happy to write about him, he's a great material to write about. I love all second generation children and I have chapters for all of them, only if my fic ever reach the top of the cue! I hope you'll read the second chapter too (and review it, of course!)= Bye
Wow, that was beautiful ceremony. she seemed so determined! I love Victoire already!!!
Author's Response: I loved writing the ceremony part. Victoire really was determined, wasn't she? She'll meen all her determination to catch one Teddy Lupin after a few years. Thanks for sparing time to review, it is really important to me.
this is a really interesting first chapter!!!!!!! Great start!:)
Author's Response: Thanks! It was initially planned at a Teddy oneshot, but then Victoire and the others seemed to refuse to be neglected and here we are.
god!! that sorting hat almost gave poor victoire a heart attack!!.....
great fic!! very real..... like the fact that teddy didnt sit with victoire.... i mean he's a 12 yr old boy!! wat do u expect!!
love to c where dis goes.... keep updating!! i hate waiting!! especially for a fic dis good!!
u know u guys are a step ahead of jk!! atleast she gives us 37 or so cahpters at a time!! u guys make us wait after every chappie!!
Author's Response: It's not my fault, I swear! The fics have to be approved by the moderators, you know. I'm glad that you are enjoying my work this far. Thanks for your review. James' chapter is coming soon, I promise... wel, after the moderators have another story, The Snake and the Flower, approved first. Bye!