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Name: siriuslovechild1 (Signed) · Date: 05/17/12 18:56 · For: Chapter 1
I'm sitting in class reading this and crying like a sap D': but this is beautifully written

Name: RavenclawDiamond (Signed) · Date: 02/25/08 14:12 · For: Chapter 1
Wow that was so amazingly sweet, IU'm almost crying and I don't usually cry at things!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, I really do appreciate it. I'm glad to hear people are enjoying it. *hands tissue* Thanks once again! ~~Soph

Name: Bookwormy (Signed) · Date: 02/17/08 1:12 · For: Chapter 1
Awww that was so beautiful. God, I have tears in my eyes right now. Poor Ginny. It must hurt so much. You've done a brillaint job. The ending was good!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! It means a lot to me! :) -- Soph

Name: A_Pink_lady (Signed) · Date: 01/14/08 14:27 · For: Chapter 1
Okay, first things first, i really enjoyed reading that! Im a big fan of angst and also romance, so i love reading stuff like this! This is very differnt to most fics i read where harry dies, its always just Harry dying, no letter or anything like that, this is so original!
Just a few typos i saw:
Molly’s eyes focused on anything, but her own daughters’ while she said in a barley audible whisper “It’s from Harry,”
I assume you meant barely....
Give them my congratulations and I am forever sorry that I will never get to me their twins.
Is that meant 'meet?'
Anyway, on with the review!
I loved Harrys letter, how he adressed people seperatly in the letter, but my fav was to Ginny, of course! I also loved the mentions to previous books, like the pigs tail and the first train ride, it really added depth to it. I also loved how you had harry saying how he knew how Ginny was feeling, it showed how deep their love was, they knew each other so well.... *sob!* i want to put down all of my fav lines, but then id have to put down all of it, with empathis on the section from harrys part of the letter adressed to Ginny until the end. I also think that Ginnys reaction to Harrys letter to be spot on, both devastated but still angry and fiery in her own way. As a last note, i want to say that i was very very close to tears (which is a very rare thing, i dont cry easy) when i read the last line. Oh even re-reading it as i write this makes me scruch up my face and almost start crying! I think i will copy that last bit coz i love it so much!
This man had been to Hell and back. This man had seen and done things unimaginable and now this man waited, waited for his true love to join him.
Oh and also, this is another of my fav fav lines, its just so heartbreaking and amazing!
Please remember me more than “The Boy Who Lived”, for I shall not live.

*SOB* wonderfully written, you have a wonderfully crafted writing style, you have a strong structure, and i cant wait to read your next story, which is sounding brill so far :D keep the angst going!
Hmm, is there anything you can improve? *puts thinking cap on* Erm.... Oh i cant think of anything! Maybe look out for any typos? Oh that was quite pathetic! I cant think of anything else...... 10/10. Loved it.

Author's Response: *tackle hugs!* Thank you so so so so so much! I'll be sure to go back and fix those typos. Never was the best speller. :P Your review made me feel all fuzzy inside! Hahah. I just cant put into words what your review means. It just made my day! This man had been to Hell and back. This man had seen and done things unimaginable and now this man waited, waited for his true love to join him. I love that part too! :) Thank you so much, it's greatly appreciated and I hope that my next story is done soon. 10/10 for an awesome review and awesome person!!! Look forward to hearing from you! Sophia R. HogwartsGirly124 :P

Name: undrtkr (Signed) · Date: 01/05/08 19:47 · For: Chapter 1
excellant loved it thank you

Author's Response: No, thank you :P

Name: Pottergirl (Signed) · Date: 12/14/07 22:11 · For: Chapter 1
This fic reminded me of Tim McGraw's "If You're Reading This," mostly because of these lines:

"I won’t be there to see the birth of our little girl. I hope she is as beautiful as you are. I hope she fights like me and stands up for the innocent and the weak."

"There’s going to come a day when you move on and find someone else and that’s okay. Just remember that I’m in a better place."

Have you heard that song? Because I think its a wonderful song, and you did it justice in this story. 10/10

Author's Response: Yes, I have heard that song. It's where I got my insparation for this story. Your the first to notice. Congrats! :) Thanks for the review i appreciate it! :) Soph

Name: Colores (Signed) · Date: 11/23/07 21:51 · For: Chapter 1
Oh my god. This fic was truly heartbreaking. I just read it to get a feel for the banner, but oh my god this is really sad. My favorite line, the one I feel best sums up this story: "Please remember me more than “The Boy Who Lived”, for I shall not live." Great writing there! *sniff* You have me in tears and that's saying a lot. Great work.

Author's Response: Wow, I must be really silly because guess what? I'm crying now too. Thank you so much, I really appreciate it and I couldnt agree more with you. Wow, just wow. :) You have just made my day and I couldnt be happier. Great Review. -- Sophia

Name: snapey_rapeyx3 (Signed) · Date: 11/20/07 18:21 · For: Chapter 1
this is the most amazing thing i have ever read. wow, it made me cry. great job =]

and please write more!

Author's Response: Aww, this one has definitely got me smiling. *hands tissue* Thanks so much I just love reviews like yours! :) -- And you can count on it! More are on the way!

Name: MJ_Padfoot (Signed) · Date: 11/20/07 17:54 · For: Chapter 1
Absolutely delightful. Very touching in every way possible; also this is beautifully written!
*huggles* ~MJ

Author's Response: Aww! Thanks so much! I truly appreciate it! I have to say yours was just as sweet as my fav. beta harry_victoria. Thanks so much! :) *huggles right back at you*

Name: Dissendio (Signed) · Date: 11/20/07 17:00 · For: Chapter 1
That is truly heart-breaking. I'm crying now. So beautiful! *sob!*

Author's Response: Aww, thanks so much!!! I just love reviews!! :) You made me smile :)

Author's Response: oh and how silly of me almost fogot *hands tissue*

Name: Dissendio (Signed) · Date: 11/20/07 16:59 · For: Chapter 1
That is truly heart-breaking. I'm crying now. So beautiful! *sob!*

Author's Response: Aww thanks you def. made me smile!! It just means so much!

Name: harry_victoria (Signed) · Date: 11/20/07 16:54 · For: Chapter 1
SOPHIE!!!!! *hugs to death* I can't believe that it got validated-- this is SO COOL! :D I love this story so much, and it was so awesome working with you! *hugs again* Your beta, victoria

Author's Response: VICTORIA!!! *hugs right on back* Oh geez! Thanks so much!!! I literally love you! :) You're just the best!!! Thank you so much for helping me!!! :):) *hugs once again**

Name: in love with harry (Signed) · Date: 11/20/07 16:41 · For: Chapter 1
ong that was grate but you could have put the letter in italecks

Author's Response: Thanks so much!! I appreciate it!!! Even you're simple review as made me smile!! I shall now continue to jump off the walls for this is my first fic and well *JUMPS*

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