Reviewer: Misdemeanor1331
Date: 06/15/11 10:52
Chapter: Rhyme and Reason

Oh gosh, Draco's flashback was too precious. "But I doubt she loved your poor daddy, because if she did, she wouldn’t have walked away from me, would she? Wouldn’t have turned us out and preferred to not see you than see me." Oh that just about killed me! And I think I may call my future spawn "pretty little puffskeins" - such an adorable endearment!
I am curious to find out why Lia isn't more upset. I'll admit, I'd definitely be taking the "Callie" approach to this whole situation, but I guess someone needs to the reason to her passion. Just like their parents! Aw!
Great chapter, of course, but too short! Don't keep us waiting too long! ::gestures to field of minions:: :P

Author's Response: I had several close calls with your minions, I'll have you know. I think I need a smoker. :P Callie was due an explosion. Maybe Lia will also have her turn. Quien sabe. You're right, they're sort of countering each other, a dynamic between them-- when one's angry, the other's calm. Unless they're pissed off at each other, that is, hehe. Or maybe they just take it in turns to be the cool and collected twin. Will update with a longer chapter later! It doesn't help that my slave-driver (you) is diverted with the dramione remix, too, you know! Haha. Goodness, nothing's as bad to a story as a new story, you agree, Mel? :D

Reviewer: hpgploversforever
Date: 06/15/11 10:40
Chapter: Rhyme and Reason

That was an amazing chapter. How many do you think their will be in this story. Well with how ever long it is I love this story. Keep the chapters coming. Thank you.

Author's Response: Thanks, Kristin! I thought there would be 25, and so far I've uploaded two chapters not included in the outline. Let's just see where C and L lead us, but I doubt this'll exceed 30 chapters. Thanks again, hon!

Reviewer: liao123
Date: 06/14/11 22:51
Chapter: Callie

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Reviewer: Kaiserin
Date: 06/14/11 21:27
Chapter: Rhyme and Reason

Impeccable. Refresh my memory, have I ever used it to describe any of your chaps? They all are great, but I do try to find new adjetives to keep it fresh.
And you don't make it easy. There are only so many synonims for 'perfect', you know?
But I am in pain to know WHAT was that made all hell break loose on our favourite couple... the wait, oh, the wait!
The reason, my realm for the reason!
Alrighty, very random attempt at a review over. Keep the great chaps coming, even the unexpected ones! LOL!

Author's Response: LOL, thanks, Ceci! There's an online thesaurus for your synonym needs! Hehe. Thanks so mucho. I can only hope to deliver good enough chapters. I'm so glad you like them and even think them perfect! ;)

Reviewer: Vginny
Date: 06/14/11 12:04
Chapter: Things and Dastardly Things Afoot

i have read the chapter almost thrice now... Please update the next chapter! i have been waiting for soo long. I check everyday to see if it has been updated...

Author's Response: Thank you, vee! And I've updated! :D

Reviewer: Melina Malfoy
Date: 06/05/11 20:27
Chapter: Things and Dastardly Things Afoot

Yay- I was dying to know what would happen to them if they broke the agreement. Glad you added this part- it sets up a bunch of things nicely.
Keep em' coming! :)

Author's Response: Thanks as ever, Stefanie! Will do! ;)

Author's Response: Thanks as ever, Stefanie! Will do! ;)

Reviewer: Misdemeanor1331
Date: 06/05/11 9:16
Chapter: Things and Dastardly Things Afoot

I do like the build up and am very satisfied with this chapter, as well as your use of the word "misdemeanants," which, in my self-absorption, I am choosing to take as an an in-story shout-out. LOL. Anyway, I'll tell my minions to buzz off (HA! Get it?! Bee-related puns... Who knew it was my forte??) and the honey cookies are en route!
Draco's proposal was sweet-ish, but who adds "cow" to the end of a proposal?? He gets so discombobulated around her! It's hilarious. I like that Hermione is actually considering it, too. For Callie, she says, but it'll be for her, too, in the end. She'll see that. She'd better. ::shakes fist::
Menis just screams "scumbag" and I can't wait to see what you do with/to him. And the Polyjuiced conversations will be great. Will they go home with their opposite parents for the hols?? Maybe Grandmas Weasley and Malfoy will discover their secret?? Or maybe they'll remain one big, happy family at Hogwarts, with a family picnic (in the snow, why not?) thrown in for good measure?? Whatever you decide, I know it will be good!! :)

Author's Response: *munches the honey cookies* Yes, that's an in-story shout-out, and I'm so glad you saw it, Miss Bee, if only because of your self-absorption, hehe! :D My gosh, you are a treasure. Thanks for the vote of confidence, Mel. You noticed what I wanted to be noticed. *nods fervently* *shrugs and winks*

Reviewer: DarkSunflower
Date: 06/05/11 3:55
Chapter: Things and Dastardly Things Afoot

I am very proud (and thoroughly exhausted) to say that I have offically stayed up all night reading this, and I don't regret it at all. Minus the fact that I have finals this week, and have yet to do an ounce of studying... But, I digress. I don't think words could possibly describe how much I'm enjoying this story. So far, a job well done!

Author's Response: And I am very tickled (I always end up saying this, haha) over another reader who slapped sleep away in favor of reading. :D I hope you still do well on your finals! Thanks so mucho, Kylie!

Reviewer: Kaiserin
Date: 06/03/11 19:43
Chapter: Things and Dastardly Things Afoot

Build up? This chapter was bloody brilliant!!
I looooooved Minerva's letter! It was the cherry on top of the ice cream!! ^^
Love your story! I'm loving the upperclassmen for meddling in the twin's dilema so much, as well! I'm basically overflowing with love for all your story. Portrait-Albus and Peeves included!

Author's Response: Yay! Glad someone noticed the letters and Peevesie! :) Thanks as ever, dear Ceci!

Reviewer: Misdemeanor1331
Date: 05/31/11 9:47
Chapter: Halloween Scares

Oh, those two vixens have done it now. Clever Gred and Forge pranks, of course, but your end note (with the agreement's wrath being triggered) has me feeling antsy about what will come next. And only seven more chapters? Seven?? Gah, that's not nearly enough! I want mooooooore! Hahahaha

In other news....
“Oh, I wish.” Hermione kept her eyes on the game. She pretended that her eyes itched a little because of the wind. “I haven’t really gone out at all. Julius just asked to see me about some things from the Ministry. I went just so he’ll stop hounding me.”
“We were young. We are young. Hell. Was it-- did you have a hard time during those first years? I didn’t ruin your life, did I?” - I feel like this bit could've used more of a transition. I had to re-read a few times to make sure my eyes didn't skip. But I liked their Quidditch scene (though Hermione should've said yes, obviously...).

You've set up a lot in this chapter - Albus' plotting, Hermione's roses, Draco's (ahem) admirers, and Quillian's and Priscilla's tete-a-tete. I'm very excited to see where it all goes!!

And I'm off to read "Abduction." Eeeee, so excited!!

Author's Response: All this is thanks to your prodding and support, you know! Thank you, Melissa-kins! Yep, only seven more, and then it's Lucie's turn! You'll have to play slave-driver again on me on that one, or else I might take a vacation again. :D "Oh I wish," pertains to Hermione wishing that Callie does have her mother, as Draco said. Does that clear it, Mel? Next chapter is half done! *hugs

Reviewer: Melina Malfoy
Date: 05/29/11 0:36
Chapter: Halloween Scares

This is a lovely, adorable, wonderful story! Just like Callie, I started this tale several hours ago and just "couldn't put it down"- it's nearly 4am! Sooooo looking forward to the next installment! :)

Author's Response: Thank you so mucho, Stefanie! My gosh, go to bed! LOL ;D Next update should be next week!

Reviewer: Vginny
Date: 05/28/11 11:19
Chapter: Halloween Scares

Simply Hilarious! the idea of including Dumbledores portrait is very creative...including the Blob and the WWW products are too... and yes in real life if this happens smbody will surely get an heart attack cos we are not wizards. they are used to unusually scary and wierd stuff but it will be great fun i agree :)

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it, vee! :D

Reviewer: Kaiserin
Date: 05/28/11 7:59
Chapter: Halloween Scares

Loved the Bloob!! Hehehehe!! Uncles Gred and Forge rock and roll. I wish I had a couple of those of my own! LOL!

Author's Response: I love the Blob, too. Geez, I want one. :D Thanks as ever, Ceci!

Reviewer: georgeisholey
Date: 05/18/11 18:26
Chapter: ...and apoplectic.

wOw. Can somebody say awkward?? Actually, that totally cracked me up... such painful memories brought to the surface and all. :) Very funny.

Author's Response: It cracked me up, too, while I was writing it. :D Thanks for reading and reviewing, Sarah!

Reviewer: Vginny
Date: 05/17/11 11:06
Chapter: ...and apoplectic.

OMG! I read the whole story in 2 days! I am totally in love with it. All the characters are so adorable! especially C and T! Definitely one of the best stories I have read here...:)

Author's Response: Thank you, vginny! That's high praise considering the many goodies here! Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: MidnightBlue_22
Date: 05/17/11 9:04
Chapter: ...and apoplectic.

I am absolutely in love with your story! Like I started and just couldn't stop reading it. can't wait for next chapter by the way this one was wonderful having Draco put in this situation just MARVELLOUS!!

Author's Response: Wooh, glad you're in love, Stephanie! Thanks so much! Next chapter should be next week, and while you're waiting, you can read the companion story, The Abduction of Persephone. ;)

Reviewer: fairy_lights27
Date: 05/17/11 0:12
Chapter: Callie

Awww! Little Calliope is growing up....
Anyway, LOVE this chapter! I almost died laughing when Draco fainted.... Great work! :)

Reviewer: LunaLvegoodgirl
Date: 05/13/11 17:27
Chapter: Dad

This is awesome!

Reviewer: Tiger-Lily
Date: 05/13/11 5:11
Chapter: Waxing poetic...

I absolutley love this story so please Please please can you up date soon :)

Reviewer: LunaLvegoodgirl
Date: 05/12/11 15:00
Chapter: Callie

I wonder who Lia will look like?Her dad or her mom?

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