Reviewer: raquel
Date: 07/15/11 22:54
Chapter: Yule in the Yucatan

Very fun and interesting. I am glad I started it. hope you get to finish it soon. thanks for writitng

Author's Response: Thank YOU for reviewing! :) I hope so,too!

Reviewer: mylifeisgranger12
Date: 07/15/11 0:40
Chapter: Callie

ha i feel dumb leaving three reviews within like two seconds of each other, but i love ur story! ha it may be nearly for in the morning, but im rereading this lovely gem of a story! cant wait for ur update!!!!!(:

Reviewer: mylifeisgranger12
Date: 07/14/11 23:11
Chapter: Callie

by the way, ive been reading this all day, and have finally at 2 am finished. and is chomping at the bit for chapter 24!

Reviewer: mylifeisgranger12
Date: 07/14/11 23:08
Chapter: Callie

this story. is. AMAZING. wonderful. perfect. beautiful. *spews more flattering compliments* hehehe, i love C and L, and of course gred and forge. my favorite dramione so far! even better than the unseemly propsal!... if youve read that *she added as an akward afterthought*

Author's Response: Wow, that's uber high praise, Brianna! Of course I've read The Unseemly Proposal and I despair of its abandonment. *sigh* Thank you so mucho! Glad you loved this. Update should be in a week. Should have been already written and posted, but I got sidetracked by DH Part 2! Thanks again!

Reviewer: harrypotterfanforeva
Date: 07/12/11 8:32
Chapter: Yule in the Yucatan

so freaky!yet very cool.

Author's Response: Thank you, I think! LOL :D

Reviewer: Melina Malfoy
Date: 07/11/11 10:41
Chapter: Yule in the Yucatan

The ruse has been perfectly revealed- way to go! Love it when either the twins or their parents say the same things. Waiting for the next chapter!! :D

Author's Response: Thanks, Stefanie dearest! And I'm so glad you liked my version of the ruse. AND that you like that I make them unknowingly parrot each other, LOL. *hugs

Reviewer: hpgploversforever
Date: 07/10/11 15:54
Chapter: Yule in the Yucatan

That was a great chapter can't wait to see what you come up with next.

Reviewer: MagicMandy
Date: 07/07/11 7:52
Chapter: Omissions

Nice chapter. It was a little short, but that's no big deal. I like the fact that Callie, who was raised by a Slytherin, was sent to Gryffindor, and Lia, who was raised by a Gryffindor, was sent to Slytherin. Good work so far.

Reviewer: MagicMandy
Date: 07/06/11 6:44
Chapter: Callie

This sounds good so far. Is this based on a movie called The Parent Trap, by any chance?

Author's Response: Thank you, Mandy! Yes, it is. ;D

Reviewer: hpgploversforever
Date: 07/04/11 21:36
Chapter: Uh-oh, we're in trouble, something's come along and it's burst our bubble...

That was a great chapter. Can't wait to see who figures out they switched first. Next chapter soon i hope.

Reviewer: Misdemeanor1331
Date: 06/24/11 9:47
Chapter: Mistletoe Mayhem

Oooh, much longer this time, and wonderfully satisfying! The mistletoe moments were very well-crafted. I like how both Hermione and Draco shared in the kissing. First it was just to break the spell, then it was to emphasize a point, and then they actually missed it! Lovely, lovely, and very fitting for who they are. I'm very excited for this Christmas, too!

"Slytherin traits are the most catching." This is a very interesting point. The Slytherin traits are ambition and cunning. I don't want to include general self-interest, but they aren't Hufflepuff-loyal or Gryffindor-noble. And I think it's much easier to be self-serving than noble or loyal. After all, it's instinctual. Makes me wonder if the people in the other houses are more socially developed than the people in Slytherin. Maybe a nature vs. nurture problem. Hm...

Anyway, I'll save the theorizing for later! Great work - no bees for you this week! :)

Reviewer: kwoord
Date: 06/22/11 21:01
Chapter: Mistletoe Mayhem


Author's Response: Wow, I'm thankful you think so, Kaitlyn. :)

Reviewer: Revy-Rider
Date: 06/22/11 16:58
Chapter: Mistletoe Mayhem

I love this story so much!

Author's Response: So glad of that! Thanks!

Reviewer: hpgploversforever
Date: 06/22/11 15:15
Chapter: Mistletoe Mayhem

Awwww so sweet. Can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks, Kristin!

Reviewer: grangergirl35
Date: 06/22/11 11:26
Chapter: Mistletoe Mayhem

Awesome! Really like this story :)

Author's Response: Thanks, Joy!

Reviewer: georgeisholey
Date: 06/22/11 7:36
Chapter: Mistletoe Mayhem

"Mother and one daughter... father and one daughter..." Is your withholding of names a hint? Or am I just over-thinking this? Dying of curiosity, great chapter! :)

Author's Response: Nope, you are not over-thinking, Sarah darling. *high five!*

Author's Response: Nope, you are not over-thinking, Sarah darling. *high five!*

Author's Response: Nope, you are not over-thinking, Sarah darling. *high five!*

Author's Response: Nope, you are not over-thinking, Sarah darling. *high five!*

Reviewer: Glowworm93
Date: 06/18/11 8:47
Chapter: Lia

i love it

Reviewer: unjellify
Date: 06/17/11 13:50
Chapter: Dad

I just discovered this story and I'm really liking it so far. I have to admit that usually I despise the Dramione pairing, but in this case I think it's very realistic, especially the way you've developed all of the characters. I can't wait to read the rest of the story! Great job.

Author's Response: My goodness, thank you for sidestepping your dislike of the pairing and giving this story a try. Glad you're liking it! Thanks again! Also, I hope you'll try other Dramione stories. There are lots of them much, much better than mine. That's why I'm hooked. ;D

Reviewer: Vginny
Date: 06/16/11 9:12
Chapter: Rhyme and Reason

The story got updated the day i Reviewed! :D The way you describe the relationship of Draco and Callie and Hermione and Lia is amazing, Callie and Lia's too. The love and affection that you have shown is magical... Cannot wait to see all four together as a happy family (though it will mean the near end of story which is sad:( )

Author's Response: Thank you, my dear Vee!

Author's Response: Thank you, my dear Vee!

Reviewer: Melina Malfoy
Date: 06/16/11 6:59
Chapter: Rhyme and Reason

Ok, by far this has been my favorite chapter!!!!!! Draco with baby Callie was so painfully, blissfully sweet that my heart kept fluttering and I actually teared up. And Hermione with baby Lia was just the same; and funny thanks to her little Slytherin child! I have two girls and you took me back to when they were my babies. My favorite line: "...when infants still smelled like angels." So true! KUDOS!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks, Stefanie! Aww, you teared up? That's my job done, hehe. Glad you loved that line. I looove sniffing-kissing babies. Thanks again!

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