Reviewer: mylifeisgranger12
Date: 07/19/11 20:08
Chapter: Yule in the Yucatan II

ahh! i was so excited to see this updated! flawless chapter, and thanks for the explanation about the agreements inconsistency. keep the chapters coming!

Reviewer: hpgploversforever
Date: 07/19/11 11:29
Chapter: Yule in the Yucatan II

That was another great chapter. Can't wait to see what else you come up with.

Reviewer: raquel
Date: 07/15/11 22:54
Chapter: Yule in the Yucatan

Very fun and interesting. I am glad I started it. hope you get to finish it soon. thanks for writitng

Author's Response: Thank YOU for reviewing! :) I hope so,too!

Reviewer: mylifeisgranger12
Date: 07/15/11 0:40
Chapter: Callie

ha i feel dumb leaving three reviews within like two seconds of each other, but i love ur story! ha it may be nearly for in the morning, but im rereading this lovely gem of a story! cant wait for ur update!!!!!(:

Reviewer: mylifeisgranger12
Date: 07/14/11 23:11
Chapter: Callie

by the way, ive been reading this all day, and have finally at 2 am finished. and is chomping at the bit for chapter 24!

Reviewer: mylifeisgranger12
Date: 07/14/11 23:08
Chapter: Callie

this story. is. AMAZING. wonderful. perfect. beautiful. *spews more flattering compliments* hehehe, i love C and L, and of course gred and forge. my favorite dramione so far! even better than the unseemly propsal!... if youve read that *she added as an akward afterthought*

Author's Response: Wow, that's uber high praise, Brianna! Of course I've read The Unseemly Proposal and I despair of its abandonment. *sigh* Thank you so mucho! Glad you loved this. Update should be in a week. Should have been already written and posted, but I got sidetracked by DH Part 2! Thanks again!

Reviewer: harrypotterfanforeva
Date: 07/12/11 8:32
Chapter: Yule in the Yucatan

so freaky!yet very cool.

Author's Response: Thank you, I think! LOL :D

Reviewer: Melina Malfoy
Date: 07/11/11 10:41
Chapter: Yule in the Yucatan

The ruse has been perfectly revealed- way to go! Love it when either the twins or their parents say the same things. Waiting for the next chapter!! :D

Author's Response: Thanks, Stefanie dearest! And I'm so glad you liked my version of the ruse. AND that you like that I make them unknowingly parrot each other, LOL. *hugs

Reviewer: hpgploversforever
Date: 07/10/11 15:54
Chapter: Yule in the Yucatan

That was a great chapter can't wait to see what you come up with next.

Reviewer: MagicMandy
Date: 07/07/11 7:52
Chapter: Omissions

Nice chapter. It was a little short, but that's no big deal. I like the fact that Callie, who was raised by a Slytherin, was sent to Gryffindor, and Lia, who was raised by a Gryffindor, was sent to Slytherin. Good work so far.

Reviewer: MagicMandy
Date: 07/06/11 6:44
Chapter: Callie

This sounds good so far. Is this based on a movie called The Parent Trap, by any chance?

Author's Response: Thank you, Mandy! Yes, it is. ;D

Reviewer: hpgploversforever
Date: 07/04/11 21:36
Chapter: Uh-oh, we're in trouble, something's come along and it's burst our bubble...

That was a great chapter. Can't wait to see who figures out they switched first. Next chapter soon i hope.

Reviewer: Misdemeanor1331
Date: 06/24/11 9:47
Chapter: Mistletoe Mayhem

Oooh, much longer this time, and wonderfully satisfying! The mistletoe moments were very well-crafted. I like how both Hermione and Draco shared in the kissing. First it was just to break the spell, then it was to emphasize a point, and then they actually missed it! Lovely, lovely, and very fitting for who they are. I'm very excited for this Christmas, too!

"Slytherin traits are the most catching." This is a very interesting point. The Slytherin traits are ambition and cunning. I don't want to include general self-interest, but they aren't Hufflepuff-loyal or Gryffindor-noble. And I think it's much easier to be self-serving than noble or loyal. After all, it's instinctual. Makes me wonder if the people in the other houses are more socially developed than the people in Slytherin. Maybe a nature vs. nurture problem. Hm...

Anyway, I'll save the theorizing for later! Great work - no bees for you this week! :)

Reviewer: kwoord
Date: 06/22/11 21:01
Chapter: Mistletoe Mayhem

Flawless.

Author's Response: Wow, I'm thankful you think so, Kaitlyn. :)

Reviewer: Revy-Rider
Date: 06/22/11 16:58
Chapter: Mistletoe Mayhem

I love this story so much!

Author's Response: So glad of that! Thanks!

Reviewer: hpgploversforever
Date: 06/22/11 15:15
Chapter: Mistletoe Mayhem

Awwww so sweet. Can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks, Kristin!

Reviewer: grangergirl35
Date: 06/22/11 11:26
Chapter: Mistletoe Mayhem

Awesome! Really like this story :)

Author's Response: Thanks, Joy!

Reviewer: georgeisholey
Date: 06/22/11 7:36
Chapter: Mistletoe Mayhem

"Mother and one daughter... father and one daughter..." Is your withholding of names a hint? Or am I just over-thinking this? Dying of curiosity, great chapter! :)

Author's Response: Nope, you are not over-thinking, Sarah darling. *high five!*

Author's Response: Nope, you are not over-thinking, Sarah darling. *high five!*

Author's Response: Nope, you are not over-thinking, Sarah darling. *high five!*

Author's Response: Nope, you are not over-thinking, Sarah darling. *high five!*

Reviewer: Glowworm93
Date: 06/18/11 8:47
Chapter: Lia

i love it

Reviewer: unjellify
Date: 06/17/11 13:50
Chapter: Dad

I just discovered this story and I'm really liking it so far. I have to admit that usually I despise the Dramione pairing, but in this case I think it's very realistic, especially the way you've developed all of the characters. I can't wait to read the rest of the story! Great job.

Author's Response: My goodness, thank you for sidestepping your dislike of the pairing and giving this story a try. Glad you're liking it! Thanks again! Also, I hope you'll try other Dramione stories. There are lots of them much, much better than mine. That's why I'm hooked. ;D

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