I really like your story!!!
I think you need to really update soon....I can't wait for the next chapter....
I really like the fact that someone noticed that their sisters, I mean, at first I thought no one was ever going to noticed....also I'm glad that one of them knows that they are sisters....
It was so obvios that Lia was going to be a Slytherin (i mean it's in her blood after all...) and that Calllie would be in Gryffindor (she had to be brave without a mother growing up...), anyways thanks for the updates on the story, overall I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you, Ashley! I think I will have to update really soon, too. ^_^ And nice comment about Callie there. I didn't think about that!
All right, so I usually stick to canon ships. But I love the parent trap, so I thought I'd give this a shot. and I LOVE IT. It's so enthralling and I can't wait to find out what happens, although I've seen the movie enough times to hazard a few guesses... I'm assuming polyjuice will make an appearance, no? but I could be entirely wrong. But it's a lovely story. you may well convert me to Dramione yet. Update soon! ~ saveginny417
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, thank you, Juli! Oh my, there are many stories here that will more than convert you, but will drug you as well. I'll update soon and I'll do my best.
You made my day this this chapter. I love teh idea of huggers instead of howlers.
i am loving it!! please keep us smiling!
ahhhh omgahhh.they finally know.
gahh theyre sooo adorable.
update update update! :D
I loved this chapter. the meeting was perfectly randam yet clearly well thought out. This has become my fav. fic because it is so different and i just cant wait to read more. I love how you built the tension with the 2 letters. cant wait for the next chapter. keep up the good work :)
I love this fic! Personally I'm hoping that Draco and Hermione get back together at some point. Perhaps Callie and Lia can do a parent trap on them? I know they aren't identical but a few colour change spells might help, or polyjuice? Sorry, getting carried away. It's weird to think of Ginny hating Harry, hopefully when the baby comes she'll revert to type. And Fred and George are a tonic! Hey, they've inventred eye colour changers, maybe they'll help the girls out, I know much of the story is Callie and Lia but no reason why they can't ask for assistance. Hope you update soon, can't wait to see if Callie does end up a Gryffindor and Lia a Slytherin.
Author's Response: Hey, Marie! Thank you, thank you, thank you! Get carried away all you like. I love it. You have a keen eye on details, don't you? ^_^ The next chapter's in the queue.
Ha ha. Draco being outsmarted by an eleven year old, who would have thought? I love this story!
I've always loved Hermione/Draco stories, and this one is so much fun! I'm intensely curious about how they split....good work with the suspense mongering!! ^^
one thing i was wondering though...how did Callie know to ask that about her mother's name? just because Hermione happened to be mentioned in the papers? there have to be a bajillion different prominent witches mentioned in the Prophet, so how did Callie zero in on Hermione?
Author's Response: Hey Meg, I'm glad you're liking this. *hugs* When the site is stable again, the updates will come.
As to your question, this is where our Callie zeroed in on 'Her/Herm': “Your mother and I were enemies. We had a reckoning. But the reckoning was only on my part. Her – hmmm, ehem, she wasn’t the vengeful type..." See? She's very observant, she kinda guessed/hoped his Dad almost said her mum's name then. ^_^
okay, i'm seriously enjoying this. good work!! update soooooon!! ^^
I can just *feel* how adorable this story is going to be. You're a great writer...one of the better ones I've stumbled upon...and I've been lurching around for a while!!
Well, it takes a lot to impress me, and I'm impressed. Loving it! Update soon.
ayeee!!!ahhh hmm watch theyll be in the same room in the train.
update soon! :]
Update, update, update! Please!! I know, I'm a little impatient, but please update.
I have to say, this is really, really good! Normally, I don't like Hermione/Draco stories, because they make no sense. But I really, really like this one! Can't wait for the next chapter!
yeah, i have a guess lia will be a slytherin and callie will be a Gryffindor, just to be ironic
its the best HG/DM i have ever read, probably coz i absolutely adore lia and callie...
Any bets on who goes to which house?
Thalia in Slytherin; Calliope in Gryffindor. At least that's what I want. I can just see the drama that will come from Thalia in Slytherin. Besides, I think those houses fit their personality. I'll keep my fingers crossed, because that's what I'm really hoping for.
Anyways, I really enjoyed that chapter and I hope you'll get to update soon, after all this mess with the glitches is taken care of, of course.
I really like this story, though at times I wish you'd be a bit more detailed, but we've already know how we both like different stories. Please update soon. I don't really have any criticism or anything, not that I can think of at least, just that I'm really enjoying this story and these characters, and I hope you'll continue the good work.
Author's Response: Thanks, Chante! I'll see if I'll be inclined to make it meatier, yes.
Wow. That's almost all I can say!
This story is extremely good. I would have never thought that the father in the story was Draco Malfoy. It was a complete shock. I like how you threw that in there though, right towards the end of this chapter.
I have a question though. Why would Draco move his family to England, and then try and keep his daughter form going to Hogwarts? That part kind of confused me a little bit. I mean, it was all written excellently, but that was one part that really didn't make any sense to me. I would have thought that Draco would have been obsessed with the idea that his kids were going to go to Hogwarts, and were going to be placed into Slytherin.
That might just be me, but oh well.
Alright. Just one last thing. I kind of thought that the beginning was a little confusing. Maybe if there weren't as many commas, and you just combined a few of the things in the sentences? I don't know. I think by doing that it would make it easier to read, and people won't get facts mixed up.
I'm done. :) I really did think that this story is really good. I've only read the first chapter, but I have a feeling I'm going to have to go read the rest of it!
Author's Response: Hello, Tiffany, thank you so much. I'm glad you like it.
Draco and Callie are in France. I don't want to spoil anything to you, but they're in France and Draco isn't keen about Callie going to Hogwarts for a reason. Read on and come back to me for more. I'll heed your advise about commas. ^_^