Reviews For I Choose You
Reviewer: Padfoot Patronus
Date: 11/27/07 11:47
Chapter: Chapter 1

it was sweet really, but the way it started out, i expected more, er- better.

there must at least have been some solid details and emotions attached with each time Ron made Hermione angry. i dont mean there wasnt at all, but a bit more would have made ur one-shot more realistic.

i though, loved the ending line and the title is awesome.

the content was not aboslutely up to the mark. nice attempt anyways, buddy.

Akay

Author's Response: Thanks for your feedback-- it was honest and constructive, which is just what I needed.

Reviewer: NeverTooOld
Date: 11/27/07 5:46
Chapter: Chapter 1

Very nice little story.Thank you

Author's Response: You're very welcome! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: SmartGryffindorGirl
Date: 11/26/07 19:52
Chapter: Chapter 1

That is AMAZING!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! Love the penname, by the way :)

Reviewer: sudeshna2kool4u
Date: 11/26/07 12:03
Chapter: Chapter 1

I love this!!!!! You are superb... mind blowing. Lovely...

Author's Response: Thanks so much! This is one of my fave one-shots I've written of these two, so it means a lot that someone else loved it, too.

Reviewer: noviwanwife
Date: 11/25/07 21:37
Chapter: Chapter 1

This was very good. You write well. I really enjoyed reading your story. I love Ron and Hermione they have such a quirky yet endearing relationship!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Their topsy-turvy roller-coaster of a relationship is definitely what I love about them, and it's what will keep me writing about them! Thanks again.

Reviewer: Buckbeak22
Date: 11/25/07 19:44
Chapter: Chapter 1

Yup! Hermione dictating Ron's proposal. Perfect! Probably happened too...

Author's Response: Haha, thanks so much! And, of course Hermione would have to take the reigns, and it was probably my favorite scene to write out of all of them.

Reviewer: AccioRon
Date: 11/25/07 19:20
Chapter: Chapter 1

I loved it! it was very sweet!

Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much!

Reviewer: siriusblackhead
Date: 11/25/07 16:48
Chapter: Chapter 1

Awwww! What a beautiful story!

Author's Response: Thanks so so much! I'm glad someone else enjoyed the fruits of my labor :D

Reviewer: Vicster
Date: 11/25/07 16:06
Chapter: Chapter 1

that was very good!!!! i loved ron's proposal, i thought it was very true to his and hermione's character ;]

Author's Response: Thanks very much. I figured that Hermione would have to spell things out for him!

Reviewer: Raeinflight
Date: 11/25/07 15:34
Chapter: Chapter 1

Well I loved it!

Author's Response: And I'm glad you did-- thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: mariami
Date: 11/25/07 15:28
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was a wonderful read. You got the characters down perfectly on every scene. I would had also rather seen some missing scenes from the books instead of the ones we already knew about, but it was still great!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the specific review. I always want to improve, and it's people like you that give me the aspects of my writing I need to work on. (tangent over). Thanks again!

Reviewer: Gin_Drinka
Date: 11/25/07 13:00
Chapter: Chapter 1

Awww...how wonderfully sweet and adorable! I loved the proposition scene. Very sweet fic!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm very glad you thought it was sweet...that was my intention!

Reviewer: Striped Candycane
Date: 11/25/07 11:28
Chapter: Chapter 1

Each moment was well-crafted, and you managed to pull it all together neatly with a good closing line. I would like to have seen more “missing moments” rather than what happened in the book from Hermione’s point of view…I think on the whole they would have made this one-shot a little richer.

One very little thing that I absolutely LOVED were Ron’s “sonorous snores”. I can’t tell you why I like this alliteration as much as I do, but I think it is brilliant.

Keep writing!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review; it's much better than "I loved it!" I'm always trying to improve. And I too was a fan of his "sonorous snores." Thanks again!

Reviewer: RonandMioneForever
Date: 11/25/07 11:20
Chapter: Chapter 1

This just made me very happy. Haha. Absolutely adorablee!

Author's Response: Haha, thanks so much, and I'm glad it made you happy! P.S. I adore your penname :)

Reviewer: Beeb
Date: 11/25/07 11:14
Chapter: Chapter 1

It was Brilliant. Can you help me? I love reading the Ron and Hermione fics and have wrote a few myself but they don't get put on! Please help me?

Author's Response: Thank you so much! And, sure, I'd love to help you with your Ron/Hermione fics. Just let me know how I can help!

You must login (register) to review.
Information
Find out everything you need to know about the site right here.


We have stories and authors in this archive.

:

RSS
Choose Theme:
SOCIAL MEDIA
     
MOST RECENT
Harry Potter and the Sinister Plot by weasley-malfoy-aficionado 3rd-5th Years
Patrolling the streets of Hogsmeade one snowy day Ron encounters an unexpected...
Out of the Blue by Secret Marauder 90 1st-2nd Years
This story weaves the tale of James and Lily from the day they met right up...
Have You No Idea That You're In Deep by littlebird Professors
"The problem, as Harry sees it, is he simply wasn't prepared."
FEATURED
Come Home by WrenWinterSong 1st-2nd Years
Three year old Teddy Lupin ponders the photographs on the living room side table.
But You Haven't Lost Me Yet by Dawnie 6th-7th Years
The war with Voldemort comes and goes, and James and Lily find themselves struggling...
broken brights by Padfoot11333 1st-2nd Years
Harry's breath catches when he thinks of Ginny. I am not JK Rowling and...
CATEGORIES