Reviewer: Padme4000
Date: 05/01/09 13:45
Chapter: Chapter Sixteen: Aftermath

extremely brilliant chapter and I really enjoyed ever word of it. I can't wait for the next chapter :D

Reviewer: RWHGHP_51892
Date: 05/01/09 13:06
Chapter: Chapter Sixteen: Aftermath

i love this story. I have to say Jacob is my favorite.

Reviewer: claymor
Date: 04/24/09 14:37
Chapter: Chapter Fifteen: The Black Lake Party

When oh when will he find his daughter?? It just breaks my heart that he wants to find her so badly and she is just a hair out of his reach.

Reviewer: RWHGHP_51892
Date: 04/17/09 0:50
Chapter: Chapter Fifteen: The Black Lake Party

Im not meaning to be rude, but how much longer for more chapters?

Reviewer: Padme4000
Date: 04/16/09 17:04
Chapter: Chapter Fifteen: The Black Lake Party

This was another fantastic chapter and aww Shiloh has a crush on Jacob as well as George. bless her.

I can't wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: Saif
Date: 03/04/09 12:42
Chapter: Chapter Fourteen: Love From The Heretics

Awesome! I have to know what happens next! UPDATE!!!

Reviewer: Padme4000
Date: 02/21/09 18:10
Chapter: Chapter Fourteen: Love From The Heretics

The best bit had to be what was written on the paper.

fantastic chapter, I can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: hermonine
Date: 12/13/08 14:44
Chapter: Chapter Thirteen: Pink and Purple Pigtails

Great story! I really am enjoying reading it. I look forward to your next update. Keep up the great work and update soon!

Reviewer: Checkerspot
Date: 12/08/08 8:07
Chapter: Chapter Thirteen: Pink and Purple Pigtails

What a great story! I just discovered this story and year one and read them all in a weeks worth of lunch breaks. Who needs fresh air right? I'm looking forward to learning more about our little gang of Slytherin Heretics and to seeing Shiloh and Snape's reactions when they find out who they are. Keep the chapters comming!

Reviewer: Padme4000
Date: 12/05/08 17:27
Chapter: Chapter Thirteen: Pink and Purple Pigtails

fantastic chapter, I can't wait for the next. I loved the title of the chapter and everything within the chapter.

Reviewer: beaternumber1
Date: 11/06/08 15:20
Chapter: Chapter Twelve: They Called Us Heretics

Oh Oh i hope what i think is going to happen happens! But i'm not gonna say what i think because if i'm wrong it'll sound really stupid....

Your story so far is absolutly amazing! I think my favorite character is Jacob right now i wanna know more about him. He seems like he has a secret. Are Nicolette, Persephone and Valient in their third year or are they second years too?

Any way, Great story! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: claymor
Date: 11/03/08 7:24
Chapter: Chapter Twelve: They Called Us Heretics

This is a good story. I like the storyline with the kids but I guess I have been hoping for more progress for Snape figuring out who his daughter is. I am sure that you can support both.

Reviewer: Padme4000
Date: 11/02/08 17:51
Chapter: Chapter Twelve: They Called Us Heretics

brilliant chapter and the whole crush things is so funny. i can't wait for the next chapter i always enjoy reading them.

Reviewer: Sdogg
Date: 09/03/08 15:36
Chapter: Chapter Eleven: Where Loyalties Lie

Great story, although I still find the first one my favourite. And I do like the George/Shiloh ship, and I wonder where it will go in future years. :) And please don't leave Severus in the dark for too much longer :P

Reviewer: Poppy
Date: 09/03/08 12:14
Chapter: Chapter Eleven: Where Loyalties Lie

Good Chapter! I am thrilled that Shiloh chose the path that made sense. I am looking forward to learning more about Osgood's motivations. I know that the primary focus is Shiloh, but I am missing the Snape interactions, I hope more are coming soon. Thank for all your work on this story.

Reviewer: snpdrgn
Date: 09/02/08 11:51
Chapter: Chapter Eleven: Where Loyalties Lie

Thanks so much for the wonderfully long chapter!  I really like Jacob and wonder what his part is in this story.  I first thought he was someone polyjuiced, but now I'm pretty sure he's just a 7th year Slytherin with a special interest in Shiloh.  Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Padme4000
Date: 08/31/08 6:03
Chapter: Chapter Eleven: Where Loyalties Lie

amazing chapter i enjoyed reading it a lot. I can't wait to see what happens next

Reviewer: slytherins_queen2
Date: 08/31/08 2:43
Chapter: Chapter Eleven: Where Loyalties Lie

I re found this story after months of not coming to this site...This is seriously one of the best stories ever. I think I've already stated this when I reviewed many chapters back, but seriously it's awesome. I just love Shiloh as a character and now especially her interactions with Jacob who is becoming quickly one of my favorite characters. I'm glad you've updated and I can't wait to see what happens next! :)

Reviewer: rayasunshine
Date: 08/30/08 16:07
Chapter: Chapter Eleven: Where Loyalties Lie

Ooh! Nice twist, I thought she was seriously going to join him, and then WHAM! that was hilarious!

Reviewer: PadfootnPeeves
Date: 08/30/08 10:29
Chapter: Chapter Eleven: Where Loyalties Lie

This was my favorite chapter yet. I loved it! Jacob's so cool, and Shiloh punching Malfoy was hilarious. But what's up with Valiant, other than her not liking Shiloh?

This chapter was defienetly worth the wait, and I can't wait for the next one.
~PnP

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