Reviewer: I lovesmesomeHarry
Date: 11/28/10 21:35
Chapter: Chapter Twenty-Three: A Long Road Home

Lovely. I think you could use beta help in looking for little mistakes. You are obviously a great writer, but little things like missing words, and the wrong words really throw me out of the story. This chapter was better than those in the past in terms of this.Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: I lovesmesomeHarry
Date: 11/27/10 9:30
Chapter: Chapter Twenty-Two: Her Daddy's Eyes

I'm glad to see that you have picked back up the series. I've just found the time to read this again and I am very excited to see more!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you've come back to read.

Reviewer: Elocin13
Date: 10/30/10 22:45
Chapter: Chapter Twenty-Two: Her Daddy's Eyes

Gah! The angst is wonderful. I'm looking forward to the slow and steady gain of trust Shiloh will hopefully develop. Nice touch of humor at the end there too. Please update soon! =D

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked.

Reviewer: EmRose17
Date: 10/25/10 20:37
Chapter: Chapter One: Surprise, Surprise

I absolutely love this story, better than the first year I say. So are you going to write all 7 years?! That would be totally epic if you did!! :) I'm so attached to this story, Shiloh and Severus are great, detailed characters. Keep up the good work!! :) Oh and keep updating please!! I'm dieing for the next chapter :)

Author's Response: Yes, I do plan to write all seven years. *Plan* meaning that I have a plotline for all of them. Whether I manage to reach them or not is something completely different. I would love to finish the entire series but I really don't want to make promises I can't keep. I'm glad you like it so much though!

Reviewer: Saif
Date: 10/20/10 16:42
Chapter: Chapter Twenty-Two: Her Daddy's Eyes

Haha! Classical finishing line!
I can't thank you enough for posting this! It's 2:43 a.m and I've spent the last hour and a half catching up! And I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you for reading. I'm glad that you liked, especially the last line. I've had that planned since the birth of this story and I'm so glad I finally got to use it.

Reviewer: Saif
Date: 10/20/10 16:25
Chapter: Chapter Twenty-One: All They Ever Wanted

OMG!!! I have been waiting for this moment for years! Perfect! Am not writing any more so I can rush to the next chapter!

Author's Response: lol I'm glad you liked. And I DID make you say OMG. Haha!

Reviewer: Saif
Date: 10/20/10 15:00
Chapter: Chapter Eighteen: No Air To Breathe

I'm so glad you're back! I came to MNFF after quite some time and was delighted to see that you've resumed writing this awesome story!

Anyway, that cat part was genius! It ties in with Hermione taking a cat hair off Millicent's body by mistake and thinking it was Millicent's cat.

Loved the whole chapter and off to the next one!

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you liked the part about the cat. Not everyone made the connection. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Elocin13
Date: 10/18/10 12:03
Chapter: Chapter Twenty-One: All They Ever Wanted

I had remembered reading this story and the previous one about a year ago. I took a break from fanfiction and a couple days ago found these fics again. I read both of them so fast, and this time around, the chapter had been updated where they find out! I was soooo excited. The scene is so much better than I always imagined, and totally in character. You are a brilliant writer!

I also really love the relationship between Jacob and Shiloh. I can't wait to find out what's wrong with him though.

I also hope that there's more to the George/Shiloh substory!

Please update soon! I can't wait for Shiloh's reaction!! =)

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you liked. I love the relationship between Jacob and Shiloh. It's extremely important. And there is plenty more of the George/Shiloh substory to come. I solemnly swear!

Reviewer: silver slippers
Date: 10/17/10 17:45
Chapter: Chapter Twenty-One: All They Ever Wanted

Yes. Yes I did say OMG and it was certainly worth the wait. And I will absolutely continuing to read - I've been following Shiloh's story for years.

Thank you for making the revelation scene so authentic. Both Snape and Shiloh really stay true to character, and I like that they don't all of a sudden melt in a pile of sugary father-daughter-bonding-goo. Their trepidation is spot on.

I also like Jacob and Shiloh's heart-to-heart. I hope at some point Shiloh shares her secret with someone like Jacob or Snape!

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: It was important that this moment, the one that everyone had been waiting for, that these two characters stayed true to character. And also because piles of sugar are NOT allows in my story, unless it involves the characters eating too much Halloween candy. lol I'm glad you liked. thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: haydensnape
Date: 10/10/10 21:32
Chapter: Chapter Nineteen: Snow Angels

OMG! You can't imagine how excited I was when I decided to log into Mugglenet FF randomly(haven't been on in a long time), checked my favorites, and find that this has been updated! I had absolutely loved this story, and was so sad when it got put on hiatus, and had pretty much given up on it. It had actually inspired me to write a Snape-daughter fanfic of my own(not on here, on Anyway, I'm so happy this is back! This review is going to be on the last few chapters because, like I said, I had kinda abandoned the story.

You are such a brilliant writer. The personality of Shiloh is amazing, so like Snape(my favorite character!). I hope he finds out that she's his daughter soon! You keep everyone in character very well, I'm impressed. I wish Snape had come to Shiloh's rescue when that hex hit her, but then I'm just sentimental like that. I wonder who did it? I'm thinking Marcus Flint, but that seems too obvious. Or maybe Annadel and her friends. Oh, I don't know, lol. I laughed when Shiloh accidently hit Snape with the snow ball. (: Finally, some more scenes with the two of them! If you choose to write it....

Oh, I would've been so pissed if I were Shiloh and Jacob had stolen that letter. I like him, but that was pretty jerkish.

Anyway, this review has gotten really rambly, so I'm going to stop. Fantastic job, and update soon, or you'll have a Howler sent your way! (:


Author's Response: I'm so glad that you like it. In a perfect world, it would have been Snape that came to Shiloh's rescue, but realistically there was a lot of mayhem and Snape was quite busy. Plus we would have missed Demi slapping Lockhart which would have been such a shame. And yes Jacob's action was pretty jerkish. But he is a guy and they all have a tendency to be that way. Thank you for reviewing. I hope you continued to enjoy.

Reviewer: harryhermioneronhogwarts
Date: 09/24/10 15:28
Chapter: Chapter Eighteen: No Air To Breathe

i love your writing!!! but please update! i want to know what happens!

Reviewer: sevylicious
Date: 08/25/10 5:23
Chapter: Chapter Seventeen: Simply Scandalous

hey, good chapter, it has been a while. Just btw, is this an error?
“You should really look up the definition of the words. You clearly don't know the meaning, because if you did, you'd know they described me. Not you
shouldn't that be th other way around?

Reviewer: Luna_Midnight
Date: 03/03/10 18:02
Chapter: Chapter Sixteen: Aftermath

but snape didnt figure out his daughter or did he?
did u write the other one and if not can u

Reviewer: Luna_Midnight
Date: 03/03/10 17:37
Chapter: Chapter Fifteen: The Black Lake Party

ahh when is it coming its taking forever but i can wait this was such a good chapter thanks for writting them :D

Reviewer: Luna_Midnight
Date: 03/02/10 22:37
Chapter: Chapter Six: Doors Left Shut

Your such a good writer. When i read your chapters I think im Shiloh.

Reviewer: OliveOil_Med
Date: 01/24/10 13:20
Chapter: Chapter One: Surprise, Surprise

This is my review written for the Recommended Stories thread.

I loved the first story so much, and I was so happy to see that there was a second story written about Shi-Shi. It might stop just before the OMG moment, but it is still a great story to read none the less. And I have read it again, and again, and again. I have also drawn pictures for it, made videos for it, and even beta read it. It is plain to see that I am obsessed with Shiloh Sanders and once you read this story, you will be to.

Reviewer: DestinyMoonStar
Date: 01/21/10 11:58
Chapter: Chapter Sixteen: Aftermath

Just wondering if you're still writing this story? If you are that's awesome; if you're not, well that stinks and you should lol.

Reviewer: starspark112
Date: 12/27/09 18:30
Chapter: Chapter Sixteen: Aftermath

update please pretty please!

Reviewer: hermonine
Date: 05/05/09 15:47
Chapter: Chapter Sixteen: Aftermath

Great chapters. I look forward to your next update. Keep up the great work and update soon!

Reviewer: rayasunshine
Date: 05/02/09 12:35
Chapter: Chapter Sixteen: Aftermath

It was brilliant, once again. I can't wait for the next chapter. You are such a talented writer.

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