Reviewer: mysiriuslove
Date: 08/08/11 22:56
Chapter: Chapter Thirty-One: Made to Be Broken

I love this book, it is one of the best fan fictions I have ever read, how soon will we get more of it? Cause I can't wait!

Reviewer: IceyFyre
Date: 07/29/11 12:54
Chapter: Chapter Thirty-One: Made to Be Broken

I love that song too! Oh, and great chapter by the way! LOVE IT! I'm glad there was a bit more Snape in the story too. Can't wait to see what unfolds between George and Shiloh! ;)

Reviewer: hpgploversforever
Date: 07/29/11 9:54
Chapter: Chapter Thirty-One: Made to Be Broken

That was a great chapter, I'm so excited to see what happens next. Are you going to do all seven years?

Reviewer: MetamorphmagusLupin
Date: 07/28/11 21:19
Chapter: Chapter Thirty-One: Made to Be Broken

I liked this chapter. I think the interaction between Shiloh and Snape has been a bit lacking in past chapters, but I can see now that you've just been biding your time with those two. I hope they can have at least some semblance of a relationship. So glad to know that Jacob doesn't hate Shiloh and I am still very curious as to what is going on with him... Well done. I look forward to the update.

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 07/28/11 14:37
Chapter: Chapter Thirty-One: Made to Be Broken

Love it!! Can't wait for the Snape/Shiloh sit down!!!!

Reviewer: DestinyMoonStar
Date: 07/28/11 10:34
Chapter: Chapter Thirty-One: Made to Be Broken

That song is the best song. I always think of Severus when I hear it.

Reviewer: Stella98989
Date: 07/26/11 16:42
Chapter: Chapter Thirty: Silent Lies

I almost started to cry for Shiloh. She really messed up.

Reviewer: FiendFyre_357
Date: 07/19/11 8:52
Chapter: Chapter Thirty: Silent Lies

I love this story soo much and poor Jacob and poor Shiloh but i really need more Snape; his thoughts have been absent for far too long in my opinion but you are the author and u have the master plan but ...please? and update the next chapter soon PLEASE!!!

Reviewer: k8yhalman
Date: 07/17/11 19:57
Chapter: Chapter Thirty: Silent Lies

Two updates so soon? Two?!?! :D Ekkk! I love them! I hope you include some more Snape perspective or even possible some Jacob??? Anyway, would it be too much to ask you to update again soon? ;)

Reviewer: hpgploversforever
Date: 07/17/11 19:53
Chapter: Chapter Thirty: Silent Lies

That was another great chapter. Keep the updates coming.

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 07/17/11 17:56
Chapter: Chapter Thirty: Silent Lies

Wow!! Great chapter!

Reviewer: hpgploversforever
Date: 07/12/11 12:06
Chapter: Chapter Twenty-Nine: Hot Damn!

I'm so happy you finally updated.
That was a good chapter.

Reviewer: Takatalvi
Date: 07/04/11 21:35
Chapter: Chapter One: Surprise, Surprise

I just stayed up all night reading year 1 as well as year 2. I couldn't stop! I have to say, this is without a doubt, the best fan-fiction I have read. Your writing is fantastic. I was expecting this to be just another mary-sue type story, but Shiloh seems like a real person, and I think you're the first fanfiction writer I have noticed who can actually pull off writing Snape, and you do such a fantastic job. Some of your descriptions have actually given me shivers they were so good.

Anyway, sorry for rambling! I've been up all night reading ;)

Reviewer: Niki_Cameron
Date: 07/01/11 9:19
Chapter: Chapter Twenty-Eight: Shoot the Messenger

This is an amazing story! I really enjoyed reading it! I can't wait for the next update, and I kind of want to see more from Snape's point of view.

Reviewer: Stella98989
Date: 06/26/11 17:23
Chapter: Chapter Twenty-Two: Her Daddy's Eyes

I have just now died from Albus's last comment!lol

Reviewer: Stella98989
Date: 06/26/11 17:08
Chapter: Chapter Twenty-One: All They Ever Wanted

You didn't make me say oh my Godric...you made me say HOLY SHIT!!!

Reviewer: Jessabelle
Date: 05/14/11 1:02
Chapter: Chapter Twenty-Eight: Shoot the Messenger

Thanks thats another good read :) cant wait for more . . . please dont keep me waiting for long!

Reviewer: hpgploversforever
Date: 05/10/11 18:20
Chapter: Chapter Twenty-Eight: Shoot the Messenger

Another great chapter.

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 05/10/11 6:20
Chapter: Chapter Twenty-Eight: Shoot the Messenger

Wow! I can't wait to see this prank play out!!!!

Reviewer: I lovesmesomeHarry
Date: 05/10/11 1:56
Chapter: Chapter Twenty-Eight: Shoot the Messenger

Yay! an update! It's good to see the relationships between the characters growing and changing. The character development is also really ace! I would like to see some more Snape action soon! Great job!

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