Reviewer: claymor
Date: 04/18/08 8:25
Chapter: Chapter Seven: P.S. My Name Is Shadow

Thanks for the update. I have been waiting for it (not so patiently). It is really hard waiting for Shiloh or Snape to get a tiny clue of who they are to each other. I will continue to wait (not so patiently).

Author's Response: LOL, well thanks for waiting, even if it wasn't so patiently - for both the chapter, and the discovery. Thanks for reading and reviewing. It feels really good to hear from my fans.

Reviewer: PadfootnPeeves
Date: 04/17/08 17:21
Chapter: Chapter Seven: P.S. My Name Is Shadow

Ooh, she's trying to find her father! I wonder who will find each other first- Snape or Shiloh. (That sentence didn't make a lot of sense, did it?)

There were bunches of good parts- the "The door and I were just becoming acquainted” line, Fred and George, her code name being Shadow... it's really getting exciting. I wonder how Fred and George will react to the letter.

Sorry for such a short review for a brilliant and long chapter, but saying all my favorite parts woulfd probably have me copy and pasting just about all of the chapter ^_^

Author's Response: Don't worry about this not being a long review. I absolutely loved the review; it made my day. rnrnOf course, as you already know, I can't spoiler the story, so you'll just have to wait to see who find who. rnrnI'm glad you loved that "acquainted" line. I chuckle every time I think of it, and I'm glad other people got a kick out of it, too. And the codename too - I was actually worried that everyone would hate it. I'm glad you think it's getting excited; I was afraid I was boring people. rnrnThanks again for the review; I really enjoyed it!

Reviewer: snpdrgn
Date: 03/26/08 10:35
Chapter: Chapter Six: Doors Left Shut

I love your story ... thanks for the update and thanks also to Emily and Sandy! : )

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Pissenoffanis
Date: 03/24/08 2:59
Chapter: Chapter Three: Exploding Snap

Haha nice chapter. Love the bitchy comments - they got me smiling. Annadel was pretty thick not to get that joke... which made it all the more funnier :D

Great sense of humour you have there *wink*

Reviewer: Pissenoffanis
Date: 03/24/08 2:28
Chapter: Chapter One: Surprise, Surprise

Oooh, I didn't know you had done so much of Year 2 already! *goes on to read next chapter*

BTW, nice I like the line where Symone is like "It reminds me of Snape's office" Says a lot. *wink*

Reviewer: RebecceDragon
Date: 02/10/08 7:28
Chapter: Chapter Five: Ribbit!

This is really cool! I loved the vid of it on youtube!

Author's Response: Thanks - for the compliments to my story and my video!

Reviewer: OliveOil_Med
Date: 02/07/08 9:12
Chapter: Chapter Five: Ribbit!

Oh, chica, I'm DYING to read the next chapter! Are you almost done? I suppose it doesn't matter anyway, with the hacker glitches and all. *mutters profanities under breath*

Anyway, please, please, PLEASE let me know!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Molly. Knowing their are readers like you who will very likely kill me if I don't finish the next chapter is what keeps me writing, haha. :D

Reviewer: PadfootnPeeves
Date: 01/29/08 16:28
Chapter: Chapter Five: Ribbit!

Millicent was currently befriending a practically huge frog that looked close enough in resemblance to be Millicent's sister.
HAHAHA! That was the best line.

Love the chapter, deary. Great details, great plot- great everything! I loved how you added the bit about Theo Nott. He's one of the lesser characters and I'm glad someone remembered him.

Can't wait for chapter six! (Wow, we're on five already)
~Padfoot

Reviewer: AntigoneScorned
Date: 01/29/08 11:50
Chapter: Chapter Five: Ribbit!

Ok, so I just thought of something, and thought I had to post it, even though it probably has nothing to do with the plot. Since it's 2nd year, and the Chamber of Secrets gets opened, Snape will have to look into the familes of all the Slytherins!!

Author's Response: I'm not going to comment on this, for the risk of spoiling things. *shifty gaze* You'll just have to wait and see.

Reviewer: AntigoneScorned
Date: 01/29/08 11:48
Chapter: Chapter Five: Ribbit!

Good chapter, I can't wait for more!! (Especially Snape finding out about Shiloh!!!)

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Mser22
Date: 01/29/08 6:35
Chapter: Chapter Five: Ribbit!

yea!
new chapter! great work on the story and on Lockhart. I can't stand him. e is so full of himself.
anyway, great work. can't wait for the next chapter. ;)

Author's Response: Yeah, Lockhart is conceited, but he's also a very easy (and fun) character to play around with. I'm so glad you like the story.

Reviewer: jessip
Date: 01/29/08 5:51
Chapter: Chapter Five: Ribbit!

and i''ll add another review just because I love to read this fiction. You have done a great job on Shiloh in her first year and so far in her second year. I am always checking for newchapters to come up.

Author's Response: thanks so much! I'm glad you like the story, and the character!

Reviewer: jessip
Date: 01/29/08 5:44
Chapter: Chapter Five: Ribbit!

great chapter. I love shilohs reaction to Lockhart and the lesson.
It will be good to see what happens between Shiloh and Snape, now that Snape has his eye on her.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Potty wee lad
Date: 01/19/08 10:00
Chapter: Chapter Four: Sweetly Green

AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I TOTALLY LOVE IT...
But somehow I don't like shiloh/george ship

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you like it! And you'll just have to wait and see where I go with the Shiloh/George ship!

Reviewer: AntigoneScorned
Date: 01/18/08 12:02
Chapter: Chapter Four: Sweetly Green

Please update soon!!!
I love your writing style, great work!

Author's Response: Next chapter should be in queue today. I'm glad you like it. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: Mser22
Date: 01/17/08 20:28
Chapter: Chapter Four: Sweetly Green

do more!
i love your story. it inspires me to write.
i'm a fan.

Author's Response: thanks so much! It feels so good to have a fan!

Reviewer: PadfootnPeeves
Date: 01/12/08 10:00
Chapter: Chapter Four: Sweetly Green

It's so interesting how you can have a story during Harry's time that doesn't involve some child being friends with Harry and helping save the world. It's like a breath of fresh air that Shiloh doesn't really like Harry, refers to him as 'Potter', and thinks that he should get punished like any other student in a total un-Hermioneish way.

Roommate? What happened to best friend?

I like how Shiloh won't admit she's jealous, whether it's about Symone's friends or George Weasley. It gives her more depth than most OCs, and makes her believeable.

It was all over the Prophet a year ago. Everyone was talking about it. How'd you manage to miss it?

I bet Nicolette's a Muggle-born! It's a crazy guess, yeah, but otherwise she would know about Harry.

This was a great chapter, and I hope the next one's up soon!
~Padfoot


Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked that chapter - and yes, I love having a story that doesn't involve Potter. It's makes it very uncliche I think. And I'm glad I can have her think that Potter deserves to be punished in a 'un-Hermioneish' way. I'm also thankful that having her be jealous worked, because I actually took it out at one point before reasoning that she, who has never been in a friendship like this before, could easily get jealous. If she wasn't, she wouldn't be believable. And Nicolette, a Muggle-born? It's an interesting theory, but she's a Slytherin. I don't even know if a Slytherin Muggle-born is possible. Good thinking, though, and I promise that I will eventually reveal why she was acting like that, because you're right about one thing. There is more to her than meets the eye...and she's not the only one with secrets. *giggles* Next chapter should go into queue today. Thanks so much for a wonderful review.

Reviewer: PadfootnPeeves
Date: 01/12/08 9:59
Chapter: Chapter Four: Sweetly Green

It's so interesting how you can have a story during Harry's time that doesn't involve some child being friends with Harry and helping save the world. It's like a breath of fresh air that Shiloh doesn't really like Harry, refers to him as 'Potter', and thinks that he should get punished like any other student in a total un-Hermioneish way.

Roommate? What happened to best friend?

I like how Shiloh won't admit she's jealous, whether it's about Symone's friends or George Weasley. It gives her more depth than most OCs, and makes her believeable.

It was all over the Prophet a year ago. Everyone was talking about it. How'd you manage to miss it?

I bet Nicolette's a Muggle-born! It's a crazy guess, yeah, but otherwise she would know about Harry.

This was a great chapter, and I hope the next one's up soon!
~Padfoot

Reviewer: AntigoneScorned
Date: 12/16/07 22:33
Chapter: Chapter Three: Exploding Snap

I can't wait to read more of this year. Looking forward to snape finding out about shiloh too!
Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked!

Reviewer: PadfootnPeeves
Date: 12/16/07 9:30
Chapter: Chapter Three: Exploding Snap

Wow! That was written really well. It's really interesting to see Draoc portrayed from Shiloh's point of view instead of Harry's. Will there be more of Harry& Co. in this book?

Wonderful chappie- can't wait for the next one!

~Padfoot

Author's Response: Yes, it was fun to finally have a Shiloh/Draco moment. I knew I had to have a scene like this for a while and it was incredibly fun to finally get to write it. Besides, giving everything a different point of view is one my reasons to be writing this. To answer your questions, there will probably be as much as Harry&Co. as there was in the last book. Thanks for reading and reviewing. ~Chante'

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