Reviewer: Padme4000
Date: 08/13/08 18:00
Chapter: Chapter Ten: A Divided Road

That was a great chapter and i really enjoyed reading it. please update soon

Reviewer: Poppy
Date: 08/13/08 9:51
Chapter: Chapter One: Surprise, Surprise

Thanks for the Update! Hope the writer's block is well passed. Osgood is a character I would like to know more about, you were great at building up his mystery. As a Mom I appreciate Shiloh's decision, as a reader, I hope she gets in deep in the next chapter.

Reviewer: Caledonia
Date: 08/09/08 23:55
Chapter: Chapter Ten: A Divided Road

Great chapter! I wonder if she'll ever get along with Osgood and if she will decide to help fight against Flint and the others who want to cause trouble for Muggleborns. I can't wait until you update!

Reviewer: claymor
Date: 08/07/08 14:40
Chapter: Chapter Ten: A Divided Road

Good Chap. Very impatient for more Snape action in looking for his daughter. Well written.

Reviewer: Caledonia
Date: 08/05/08 9:41
Chapter: Chapter Nine: Nothing But Black

This story is GREAT! I love her argument with Flint. Please update soon!

Reviewer: Poppy
Date: 07/17/08 23:06
Chapter: Chapter Nine: Nothing But Black

I love the story and can't wait to see the next chapter, thanks for all the effort you have put in for our pleasure.

Reviewer: I lovesmesomeHarry
Date: 07/16/08 2:43
Chapter: Chapter Nine: Nothing But Black

Oh snap! what's going to happen now? I'm scared!!!

Reviewer: snpdrgn
Date: 07/15/08 12:09
Chapter: Chapter Nine: Nothing But Black

What an evil cliffie!  I still really like this story.  I just wished you were able to update faster but at least you update which is more than I can say for some authors.  For a minute there I thought maybe George had sneaked into the Slytherin common room since the 7th year was described as having chocolate eyes and hair.  But maybe just a red herring?

Reviewer: sevylicious
Date: 07/15/08 11:37
Chapter: Chapter Nine: Nothing But Black

I have been dying for an update and finally, wow what a chapter! I really am enjoying the fic and I can't wait til Snape finds out about Shiloh (hope that's not too far away). Anyway I suppose I'l just have to keep busy until the next chapter. As an author I know its not the easiest thing to update extremely often but please try, I'm really anxious about the next chapter.
Okay I'll stop picking your brains now..

Reviewer: PadfootnPeeves
Date: 07/15/08 9:19
Chapter: Chapter Nine: Nothing But Black

Ooh, great chapter! It's starting to tie in with Chamber of Secrets quite nicely.

Oh my gosh, Shiloh is so lost when it comes to her own feelings! Hopefully the anvil will hit her soon...

The Quidditch match was very exciting. Symone cheered for Gryffindor because...? Is it because of the Heir of Slytherin and whatnot? Anyways, I love when Shiloh starts calling for Gryffindor as well. Although she is a bit hypocritical; she's supporting the house, but not the Seeker.

She saw him move, and quickly reassured Symone she wasn't dead.

'She' should be 'he'

Oh, no, Colin! *sniff* But Shiloh's fight with Flint... amazingly awesome. I love the line, 'Oh, yes, because repeating your sixth year makes you so much more qualified.' It's hilarious. However, the cliffie... not so awesome. What'd he do? And... did he just hurt Shiloh, or did he get Symone as well?

All in all, very good. This Osgood guy sounds pretty cool, too. I hope the next chapter's up soon!

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you like it. Yes, Shiloh is a bit oblivious, but that's part of her character. Let's just keep our fingers crossed that she'll figure it out soon. And I did explain the reason for Symone cheering for Gryffindor... back in in the sixth chapter. You might want to reread part of that if you don't remember. *headdesk* And sorry about the 'he' and 'she' thing. I sometimes get writing too fast and use the wrong pronoun. Thanks for catching it. I'm glad you liked the fight between Shiloh and Flint. And that line. I was hoping I'd get a few chuckles after that. And I know. Every reader hates a cliffie. But I, as the writer, adore them. I'm glad I finally got to use a really good one. :D Anyways, thanks for reading and reviewing. I really enjoyed hearing from you. ~Chanté

Reviewer: claymor
Date: 07/15/08 8:56
Chapter: Chapter Nine: Nothing But Black

I really like your writing. I am itching to see what happens when Snape figures out who his daughter is. I guess I will have to wait patiently for that to unfold.

Author's Response: Thanks. Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: ShEsArEbEl101
Date: 07/08/08 19:19
Chapter: Chapter Eight: In The Shadow Of Fear

i really like it. please post some more. i am trying to figure out the way snape would find out but i can never imagine it just right.

Reviewer: Insufferable_Know_It_All
Date: 07/03/08 11:55
Chapter: Chapter Eight: In The Shadow Of Fear

after re-reading the last chapter i realised i hadn't reviewed yet so . . .
GREAT chapter! This is my fave fan-fic and i can't wait to find out what snape does when he finds his daughter and vice versa! Keep updating please, i'm so interested that i can barely keep myself from quizzing you on all the details we don't know yet!!!

Reviewer: haydensnape
Date: 05/21/08 20:39
Chapter: Chapter Eight: In The Shadow Of Fear

Finally!A chapter that had Snapes POV in it!Anyways, this is my fave fanfic.This was another awesome chapter!But I don't think Shi being the smartest girl in school is the reason Malfoy is interested in him.Another job well done!

Reviewer: claymor
Date: 05/16/08 8:17
Chapter: Chapter Eight: In The Shadow Of Fear

I was so excited to see this update notice. Great Chapter. It doesn't seem like anyone is updating my favorites lately. I love this story. update again soon. I love Severus and soooo want him to find his daughter. I can't wait to see what you do with that relationship.

Reviewer: Pissenoffanis
Date: 05/03/08 21:11
Chapter: Chapter Seven: P.S. My Name Is Shadow

Love it! That name fits her perfectly.

Great job in getting Shiloh's actions to mirror Snapes's - particularly the image of her slender finger running down pages. Very Snape-like :D

Reviewer: Pissenoffanis
Date: 05/03/08 20:57
Chapter: Chapter Six: Doors Left Shut

Lovely chapter! It makes for a nice contrast to Snape's normally icy demeanour, and shows just how much he cares for his daughter.

Reviewer: fairiegirl
Date: 04/20/08 18:56
Chapter: Chapter Seven: P.S. My Name Is Shadow

So I manged to read frist yr to like two you need to get the next chapter up before i go crazy.....Its so funny, Symone reminds me of a old friend of mine and Shiloh reminds my sister of me...(oh i read your story to her after she read the frist two chapters by herself when i left the laptop on she loves it as much as me.

Reviewer: cocomaloco
Date: 04/19/08 7:02
Chapter: Chapter Seven: P.S. My Name Is Shadow

oooooh loving this chapter! i really hope George, and of course Fred, use their mischevious ways to discover who Shadow really is!...and soon too :P

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it so well, but you might have to wait awhile for that particular discovery.

Reviewer: snpdrgn
Date: 04/18/08 9:42
Chapter: Chapter Seven: P.S. My Name Is Shadow

Great new chapter! I can't wait to see how Fred and George react to her letter. My guess is they will get a kick out of having a secret potions helper. Love this story and can't wait for Shiloh and Severus to figure out who's who. I wonder who will find out first .. so much good plot either way you go! Thanks again for a great long update! : )

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm so glad you liked the chapter.

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