Reviews For My Lost Sense
Reviewer: NeverTooLate
Date: 05/17/09 22:52
Chapter: Chapter 1

Took me awhile to figure out who you were talking about! Good poem though. I wish I could do poems that well but I'm a sole story writer.

Author's Response: Wow, I never expected another review for this. I wrote it such a long time ago, or it feels like it anyway. I'm starting work on some old fics I abandoned when my exams are over. Thanks for the comment, SS.

Reviewer: Noel Weasley
Date: 11/28/07 17:47
Chapter: Chapter 1

What of my fifth sense,
Itís hidden from me,
Will my dream come true,
And bring pleasure in me?

He is so confusing to look at,
His darkness and evil is not complimented well,
By the angelic glow,
Like an angel from Hell.
--------------

Wow, that part there really shot out at me. I like it well enough, but, it just really didn't click. I couldn't really picture what was going on. I'm sorry, but, well, I'm being truthful. Maybe you could use more descriptive words, vivid words. Like, words that you usually don't see, but look and sound cool, has rhyme, and means what you need it to mean.

It was interesting. Was the "Angle from Hell" perhaps... Draco Malfoy? ;)

~Lindsay

Author's Response: Thanks for your advise, it is my first poem, or first fic if I can call it that. I'll keep your thoughts in mind when I write anything else. And yes it is Draco. Thanks SS.

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 11/23/07 8:57
Chapter: Chapter 1

Its a Hermione/Draco right?=Sammy

Author's Response: Yes!!!! :)

Reviewer: Wicked_Quill
Date: 11/20/07 21:47
Chapter: Chapter 1

good but who's she talking about?

Author's Response: She's talking about Draco, there is a brief description in the 3rd stanza :)

You must login (register) to review.
Information
Find out everything you need to know about the site right here.


We have stories and authors in this archive.

:

RSS
Choose Theme:
SOCIAL MEDIA
     
MOST RECENT
The Weird Sisters - B-Sides and Rarities, Vol. 2 by ToBeOrNotToBeAGryffindor 1st-2nd Years
The Weird Sisters are back for an encore. Ten more tracks from your MNFF authors.
on this side of heaven by Nagini Riddle 1st-2nd Years
Ariana Dumbledore is struck by a stray curse, and she suddenly finds herself...
The Youngest Death Eaters: Year III by DestinyMoonStar 6th-7th Years
Year 3 A year of hard choices and tough talks: Destiny learns about...
FEATURED
Oread, Walking by Seren
Cedric was just as odd as Hermione, because he liked to walk. Cedric/Hermione
The Effect of Gamma Rays on Two Terrifically Trapped Gryffindors. by Fenixaze 3rd-5th Years
From the "Stuck where for the weekend?" Challenge on Portkey.org ... Our two...
Drunk on Him by armagod679 Professors
For me, he was an obsession, a burning obsession, one that I could never let...
A Broken Hallelujah by epiphany212 Professors
You have always loved the chase. The pursuit of Quaffles and dragons have carried...
In the Hufflepuff Way by 1000timesingoldenink 3rd-5th Years
Did anybody really appreciate Hannah's mum?Because Mrs. Abbott was a heroine...
And Now... by Oregonian 3rd-5th Years
Moments after the death of Voldemort, Harry gazes at the corpse of the Dark...
The Weird Sisters - B-Sides and Rarities, Vol. 1 by minnabird 1st-2nd Years
Welcome back to another rousing round of rambunctious rock!However, a new act...
CATEGORIES