Reviewer: roonilwazlib123
Date: 11/28/07 21:26
Chapter: Chapter 1: Home Again

i really like the story, its cute! i just got confused a few times when it would switch from Lily and friends to the marauders and back, but then i noticed the star squiggly line things meant that it was switching!!
keep up the good work!!
cant wait for the next chapter!!

Reviewer: KaileeA42
Date: 11/19/07 22:45
Chapter: Chapter 1: Home Again

Congradulations on your first fic! This is a nicely written, and I think you have a good idea of the Marauders personalities. I am also working on my first marauder-era fic( yet to be posted) so it's always nice to see other people who are starting theirs too. Good job, can't wait to see how you write the rest. =)

Reviewer: Hermione Clone
Date: 11/19/07 19:56
Chapter: Chapter 1: Home Again

Good start! I loved the part about being home at the end.
Please, update soon!

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