Reviewer: bubblyperfection
Date: 02/14/13 15:10
Chapter: One-Shot

Nooo ;____; the ending is so sad. :( your story was really well written. The "blue eyes and perfect teeth" part is really cleverly done

Reviewer: MissCheyMalfoy
Date: 09/04/11 18:36
Chapter: One-Shot

Heeey this is really good, could u finish it pleasee :D

Reviewer: mindenaubrey
Date: 02/15/11 18:13
Chapter: One-Shot

Haha, that was brilliant. Nice short. :)

Reviewer: Russia Snow
Date: 06/19/09 12:13
Chapter: One-Shot

I really like this story, It had a really original plot and it was really well written. This is the second time I have read this story, and I was still suprised at the ending! I loved how you explained the background to the story, and it made the ideas behind Draco's thoughts really believable. There were maybe a few sentences that could have been improved by extra punctuation, but over all it was very well written, and I really enjoyed it.
Russia xxxxx

Reviewer: twilightfan101
Date: 06/11/09 10:49
Chapter: One-Shot

aawwww so sad:(

Reviewer: padfoot_returns
Date: 06/07/08 15:22
Chapter: One-Shot

Wow. That was certainly different from your average one-shot, but I liked it. Its great to see something different out there.

Reviewer: padfoot_returns
Date: 06/07/08 15:21
Chapter: One-Shot

Wow. That was certainly different from your average one-shot, but I liked it. Its great to see something different out there.

Reviewer: XLR8
Date: 04/05/08 2:58
Chapter: One-Shot

wow, i bet i'm not the only one thinking that they should've met. but its your story and it was a really good ending. i kind of thought that they werent going to met when i began to read it but i still kinda hoped that they would.
oh well.
great job! :]

Reviewer: ebony midnight grey
Date: 03/06/08 7:57
Chapter: One-Shot

okay. this is a one-shot. what a tragedy!! its wunderful, don't u think theres any hope for a sequel??!!!pplllllllllzzzzzzzzzz

Reviewer: SlytherinBlood
Date: 03/05/08 14:09
Chapter: One-Shot

What an amazing one-shot. What I liked the best was the surprising ending, I hadn't expected that at all! So short, so emotional and so perfect.

Reviewer: whatwehopefor
Date: 03/04/08 20:03
Chapter: One-Shot

beautiful. I adore it.

Author's Response: Thankyou very much.

Reviewer: lilacviared
Date: 01/11/08 19:10
Chapter: One-Shot

Oh good, very good. That was really great. I thought it was going to be sappy romance, but I like this much better! :)

Author's Response: Aha- thankyou. Personally, I don't feel much for the sappy romances either. :)

Reviewer: Naide
Date: 01/01/08 16:01
Chapter: One-Shot

i liked it but it was kinda sad cuz it wasnt even her lol :(

Reviewer: Naide
Date: 01/01/08 16:01
Chapter: One-Shot

i liked it but it was kinda sad cuz it wasnt even her lol :(

Author's Response: Thankyou, but that is the point my dear. :)

Reviewer: Nauf_dude
Date: 12/31/07 11:44
Chapter: One-Shot


Author's Response: Haha, i'll take that as a compliment.

Reviewer: FenrirG
Date: 12/18/07 20:22
Chapter: One-Shot

This was an excellent and very beautiful story. =] I think you characterized Draco very well, and the build up of tension and excitement to the ending--a bit anticlimatic for Draco, perhaps, but shocking for the reader--was very well done. You're an excellent author, and I look forward to reading more of your work. Very well done. =]

Author's Response: Gosh, thankyou very much. I'm actually heading into my final year of high school this year, so posting more work might prove a bit difficult. But I will try my best. Thankyou again. :)

Reviewer: the leaky cauldron
Date: 12/10/07 0:43
Chapter: One-Shot

i enjoy that story r u going to write a sencond chapter lol i loved the ending

Author's Response: Quite possibly. Keep your eyes peeled.

Reviewer: sweetaresnickisses
Date: 12/02/07 1:08
Chapter: One-Shot

Does this mean shes dead? He saw a ghost from his past in the face of another. I think he wanted so badly for it to be her that his heart told him it was. It's sweet in the sadest way possible. It was a shocking ending, I was hoping for a meeting, but it was wonderful the way it was.

Author's Response: Not necessarily. I liked the idea of seeing her in someone else though. But no, whether she did die or not has been left up in the air for a reason. *wink* I think the basis of the story was that they were never ment to meet. A meeting would have turned it into someone more developed and I wanted to keep to the one-shot for now. Plus- I like those quirky twists. It keeps it on the edge. Oh, and thankyou for the response. Appreciation.

Reviewer: groteskq_fatality
Date: 11/28/07 0:21
Chapter: One-Shot

awwww sadddd.itd be soo much better if this wasnt a one shot.
but twas awesome nonetheless.


Author's Response: Thankyou. Yes, there might actually be a seperate follow-up to this. Keep your eyes peeled.

Reviewer: thomasandrewfelton
Date: 11/26/07 20:26
Chapter: One-Shot

thats really sad...

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