Reviewer: Sunny_Rainbow
Date: 03/24/08 17:45
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which Jordan Spends Most of the Chapter Being Surprised

I'm sorry I said you neglected this fic! :( I just think your an amazing writer and that this fic is TOTALLY AWESOME and the first book was TOTALLY AWESOME too! I'm sorry I'm just not a very patient person. So thanks for what you have already writen (it provided entertainment for me and my sister and we are both betting on who Lee is, I think it is Lily Evans) you are an amazing writer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *Begs for forgiveness of bad punctuation if you are anything like Jordan* :)

~Sunny_Rainbow

P.S. I actually am quite a silly person! :P I even say awesome possum all the time now! :D

Author's Response: Oh, I'm not insulted that you said I neglected it! I can see how you'd misunderstand! I was just trying to clear it up for you and other people who are worried. And I don't care at all about bad punctuation; this is a fun website, not English class! Hehehe... if your friends get annoyed at you for saying 'awesome possum,' then blame it on me.

Reviewer: Sunny_Rainbow
Date: 03/23/08 18:24
Chapter: Chapter 9: In Which We Finally Learn Exactly What's Up

YOUVE NEGLECTED THIS FIC!!!!!!!
I AM A FAN AND HAVE WAITED FOR CHAPTER TEN FOR A MONTH!!!!!!!!!!!
sry bout the spaz i just love this story!
please write more please please please!

Author's Response: I have not neglected this fic, you silly person! The queue has been CLOSED for a month-- that means no authors were allowed to submit stories. I submitted Chapter 10 days ago, and Chapter 9 was actually posted when the queue was still closed. I'm sorry you have to wait, but believe me, I'm waiting, too. I've actually already written the entire third book in addition to this one, so there's nothing to neglect.

Reviewer: harrietamidala
Date: 03/23/08 14:00
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which Jordan Spends Most of the Chapter Being Surprised

when is your next chapter coming out? You left chapter nine on a suspenseful note!

Author's Response: I've already submitted it! The queue's been closed for a long time, so I'm getting quite antsy.

Reviewer: Carma Godsun
Date: 03/19/08 19:32
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which Jordan Spends Most of the Chapter Being Surprised

update!! ahh i love you!!! ill leave a longer review when my dad isnt bugging me to get off the computer.

Author's Response: AWww, thank you! I did update... the queue just reopened. I don't know when it'll be updated, though... probably not for a long time.

Reviewer: Firkant
Date: 03/15/08 7:44
Chapter: Chapter 9: In Which We Finally Learn Exactly What's Up

Great story :)
It is really fun to read. So have you, like ever thought about writing a book? Or something? That would have been very much fun.

Can`t wait for more... Well, I can.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm working on a lot of stories now, including three that aren't fanfiction... I'm working on one in particular called "Charming," where eight fairy-tale princes tell the stories from their points of view (princesses are overrated).

I have this idea for a novel that's been in a planning stage for a year or so. For now, it's called "Goode Versus Eville And All That Archaically Spelled Jazz," in which America is and always has been a colony for those with magical powers, taking place at a special school for kids who can't do magic... AND ONE OF 'EM DISCOVERS A DARK SECRET ABOUT THE MAGICAL WORLD.

The magic is totally different from Harry Potter (it's a lot more like Bartimaeus Trilogy, without the djinn). There's also some vampire stuff, because the vampires are the police/law-enforcers in this society, and criminals are punished by being bitten and forced to join the police/law-enforcer ranks... I don't much like vampires, and this is my first story with them. I'm trying to do a new kind of vampire that you don't see in other books or stories.

I love the main character, Phinn, and I'm really excited about it.... but even when I'm done, I probably won't try and get it published. First of all, it probably wouldn't be published, and second of all, even if it did, in like five years, I'd be so much better at writing, and I'd be so embarrassed that something so comparatively bad got published.

Reviewer: Pottergirl
Date: 03/14/08 21:28
Chapter: Chapter 9: In Which We Finally Learn Exactly What's Up

SCHMERGO!!!! "Bella and Edward sittin' in a tree......" Sorry, I've been reading Twilight fanfiction for a while now...Tee Hee!!! I'm slightly punch-drunk!!! *hic* 10/10 UPDATE!!! Did you know I'm an addict? Yeah, I'm addicted...to Harry Potter!!!!! YAYNESSS!!!!!!!!!!! lol!!!!

Author's Response: Hello! Thanks so much for this slightly bizarre review! I'm not a fan of Twilight... I could only read part of the first book... but then, I'm weird like that. I think EVERYONE on this site is addicted to Harry Potter!

Unfortunately, I can't update because the queue is closed, but hopefully I'll be able to in a few days.

Reviewer: justin ferguson
Date: 03/12/08 21:08
Chapter: Chapter 9: In Which We Finally Learn Exactly What's Up

OK, on chapter 8, I submitted a review, but NEVERMIND! But, HOW COULD YOU DO THAT TO ME??? HOW COULD YOU BE SO EVIL??? HOW COULD YOU JUST LEAVE ME AND ALL YOUR FRIENDS HANGING??? I HATE YOU!!! I HATE YOU I HATE YOU I HATE YOU!!! UPDATE SOON!!! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!

Author's Response:
I'm SOOO SORRY! I really want to update! The queue is closed! ;_; Please, please don't hate me!

Reviewer: justin ferguson
Date: 03/12/08 20:01
Chapter: Chapter 8: In Which Tyrone Does NOT Enjoy Brief Insanity

Wow, nice chapter! But how did Marina and Emma get mixed up? Emma followed all the clues right.

Author's Response: Emma did follow the clues... but there's always the chance of *jarring chord* SABOTAGE! I wanted it to look fishy... because it is!

Reviewer: LoopyLoonyLuna
Date: 03/09/08 16:58
Chapter: Chapter 9: In Which We Finally Learn Exactly What's Up

oh no..i cant wait until the queue opens again i really want an update cliffies are EVIL!! haha
anyways great story .. love it
--Casey

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I really want to update, too!

Reviewer: PadfootnPeeves
Date: 03/08/08 17:34
Chapter: Chapter 9: In Which We Finally Learn Exactly What's Up

I have a question! It actually pertains to the story, so I'll ask it here.

Is Arden's name partially from the word 'ardent'? It means 'passionate' and 'devoted' so it kinda reminds me of her feelings for Ted. If that's nothing revelant, well, I made it tie in ^_^

(coincidentally, I read the other review, and was rather shocked to find that Haley likes Ted. I always saw her as too hyper for him, myesss. Ah, well.)

I'm very eager for chapter ten's arrival- the suspense is killing me! Slowly... slowly...

Good luck with submitting when the queue reopens!
~Padfoot

Author's Response: Ooh, okay! Arden's name wasn't intended to sound like the word 'ardent' (though I was watching Pride and Prejudice when I came up with a lot of the character names, and Darcy's always like "I love you... most ARRRDENTLY"). I actually picked her name because it means 'forest,' and her last name means 'from the wood.' (I think. I don't speak French.) I wanted to give her nature-ish names to show how much a part of her being a werewolf is... how it affects her more than it does Ted. I'm always a little bit overzealous like that when it comes to naming.

You're right about Haley, and I think that if she actually dated Ted, she'd break up with him pretty soon. But she's always fancied him. You have to remember that Haley, Jordan, Ted, and Emma all grew up together, and Ivy didn't come into the picture until they all went to Hogwarts. When she was little, Haley was probably at that stage where she was like, "TED, LET'S GET MARRIED!" (I myself was proposed to twice in kindergarten, once with a green pipe cleaner ring. ^_^)

And when you're a teenager, there's kind of a special relationship that you have with people of the opposite gender that you've known since you were little. Plus, I think Ted is to some extent the only person who really takes Haley seriously-- he's someone who treats everyone like they're important, and she likes that... oh yeah, and he saved Haley's life in fourth year.

I think if you reread the first and second books, Ted and Haley have an interesting dynamic... it's the kind of crush where Haley doesn't really want anything to COME of it-- she doesn't want to date him, she just fancies him. I think a lot of this happened because at the time of writing this stories, two of my best friends and I all had crushes on the same rather dorky boy-- I always liked the idea of an unassuming person getting ridiculous amounts of female attention.

I was kind of the Haley of the group, and I really wanted the Ivy of the group to go out with him even though I liked him too, and the Arden of the group was really jealous and weepy and despondent about it. And... I didn't really realize this until now, that there is a really heavy resemblance to my own life. Wow, thanks for making me realize this, hehe...

Reviewer: Purple_Hippopotamus
Date: 03/08/08 11:29
Chapter: Chapter 9: In Which We Finally Learn Exactly What's Up

Schmergo, Schmergo, Schmergo... Why did you have to leave us with a cliff hanger? Now, we won't be able to read the next chappie for several more weeks... :( Seriously. I can't stand the suspense!!!! AHHHHH!!!! I think I'm going to go insane!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ivy's an animagus! *sings* That's so awesometasticalamazingful! I didn't guess that! So, it was a surprise!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hmmm... Lee.... some other reviewer said that they could be Lily E. Evans and I think that's a reeeeeeeally cool idea. Or maybe Lee is Lee Jordan. But, that seems rather obvious to me. Or maybe Lee is.... *drumroll* SOMEONE!!!!!!!

Haley and Jordan have quite interesting arguments! They're funny! :P Ha ha ha ha HA!!!!

Will Haley ever have a boyfriend? Because, like, there's Ted/Ivy, Emma/Tyroonie, Jordan/Giorgi (maybe) and then Haley/? Maybe she will be paired with that Slytherin prefect, Anatoly (I think that's his name. at least). That could be interesting... ^_^

The judges are cheaters!!!!!!! That's so not cool. They are big, fat meanie-heads. Maybe someone offered them money? Or they thought it would be fun? Or they wanted to go to jail? Or the just wanted some cupcakes? Or maybe they are just evil people at heart and they are on the evil side and rigging a tournament is just theur idea of evil-ness? Or maybe.... aww... neve rmind!

~*Emma*~

P.S. I used waaaaaaaaaay too many exclamation points, didn't I? Oh, well. I'm hyper right now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: My name looks really cool if you put it a lot of times in a row. I AM SO IRRITATED THAT THE QUEUE IS CLOSED!!! Because I really want to update. I'm glad you didn't guess about Ivy, because a lot of people are guessing stuff and spoiling the suprises. As for Lee, you'll find out in chapter 13! *zips lips*

Sadly, Haley and Jordan have some really similar arguments to what my younger brother and sister (they're twins) have. I just exaggerate them a little and they're pretty true to life.

Haley's the type who really kind of flirts with everyone and isn't that serious about her romance life, so I don't really put a lot of it into the story. I've always had the idea that during the course of the trilogy, she's had a couple of boyfriends but none too serious. In Haley's journey, romance isn't really something that makes a big impact in her life (at least during the trilogy).

There is this story that I'm writing for a NEWTS class on the forums which takes place five years after the events of the trilogy, and it has a lot of stuff on Haley's love life... you get to see who she marries and stuff.

Oh yeah-- and another thing about Haley that I'll just reveal right now that I've never revealed before is that she's always had a HUGE crush on Ted, but she's such a good friend that she doesn't act at all bitter about him and Ivy. She gets over it, but in the first two books at least, he's the main guy she likes. Interesting thought about Anatoly, though... you'll definitely see more of him in the third one. *cough* (See, I'm not JK Rowling, I'll reveal information...)

You will see about the judges in the thirteenth chapter... in my opinion, their reasons for rigging the tournament are incredibly slimy, but I'll see what you think about it then.

Reviewer: lola_lovegood
Date: 03/08/08 10:37
Chapter: Chapter 1: In Which Jordan Spends Most of the Chapter Being Surprised

ooooh im so glad you put a Rupert and Dan reference in here that was funny
alright carry on

ttfn
XOXO
~lola~

Author's Response: Fwahahaha, well-spotted! I tend to do stuff like that!

Reviewer: ElfLady64
Date: 03/08/08 8:36
Chapter: Chapter 4: In Which Ted Continues To Be Adorable

Nothing beats the Beatles, no matter what you may say to the contrary. So true, so true. Go Beeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaatttttttttttttttttllllllleeeeeeeees!!!!
Yah!

Author's Response: See, there's one way I definitely agree with Jordan. Giorgi is out of her tiny little mind if she thinks any different. ^_^ THE BEATLES ROCK!

Reviewer: Llama_Moose
Date: 03/04/08 15:53
Chapter: Chapter 9: In Which We Finally Learn Exactly What's Up

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: THANKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Carma Godsun
Date: 03/02/08 9:18
Chapter: Chapter 9: In Which We Finally Learn Exactly What's Up

Holy f****** s***!!!! Ahhhhhhhh ahhhh ahhhhh! Ahhhhh! squee!!!!!!!!!1

Author's Response: HAHAHAHAHA! It's nice to see someone got so excited about the story... and it's nice to see that you censored your own language as well, so the mods won't have to.

Reviewer: justin ferguson
Date: 03/01/08 11:22
Chapter: Chapter 6: In Which Various French People Anger Various English People

As they munched Fizzing Whizbees (both of their favourite) and made their way toward the Three Broomsticks for butterbeer, Ted mentioned, “So, Ivy, you don’t need to answer this if you don’t want to or anything, but what have you been studying so much? I know we have a lot of homework ‘cos this is our O.W.L.s year and all, but… you’re always so busy.”

“Oh, it’s nothing,” Ivy said quickly. “I mean, just some extra stuff that I wanted to understand better.”


And a little later…

She plucked the thick volume Ivy was reading (Advanced Transfiguration) out of her cousin’s hands and cast it aside.

IVY'S GOING TO BECOME AN ANIMAGUS!!! I figured it out about halfway through the chapter, when she and Ted were at Hogsmeade.

Author's Response: YOU SHALL SEE-EE!

Reviewer: justin ferguson
Date: 03/01/08 9:40
Chapter: Chapter 5: In Which Emma Enjoys Mild Insanity

Wow, great chapter! Lol, I looked up Jarveys and Fwoopers in my Care of Magical Creatures book.

Author's Response: Thanks! So did I when I was writing it, teeheehee...

Reviewer: Golden Patronus
Date: 02/29/08 15:46
Chapter: Chapter 9: In Which We Finally Learn Exactly What's Up

I absolutely love all of your writing. This is one of my favorite stories on here. I can't wait for the next chapter, because I want to know what Apple's going to do. I also want to know more about what's going to happen with Giorgi and who the heck Lee is. I love your writing and can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Oh my gosh, thank you so much! This review made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. I can't wait to submit the next chapter, either... I hope the queue reopens soon.

Reviewer: justin ferguson
Date: 02/28/08 19:19
Chapter: Chapter 4: In Which Ted Continues To Be Adorable

OK, one more question: Is Lee actually initials for a whole name, or is it just someone's first name?

Author's Response: How 'bout a-readin' the story and finding out?

Reviewer: justin ferguson
Date: 02/28/08 19:01
Chapter: Chapter 4: In Which Ted Continues To Be Adorable

Wow, nice chapter! But, um ... IS HALEY A COMPLETE IDIOT??? I think I recall it mentioning in the other chapter that she knew about Tom Riddle's diary and Ginny and all that, and NOW SHE'S PRACTICALLY RELIVING IT!!! What is going on here???

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the chapter! As for Haley, like Elizabeth Bennet, she considers herself an extremely, extremely good judge of people. This has gotten her in trouble before, most notably when she TRIED TO KILL HER OWN TWIN BROTHER because she thought he was evil. And yet, she doesn't learn... she still thinks that she's a very good judge of character.

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