Reviewer: lioness_of_magic
Date: 11/18/07 19:57
Chapter: Chapter 1

Sweet. The only word I can use. Sweet as candy and ice cream and cotton candy. Sweet.

Author's Response: Sweet review.

Reviewer: I Luv James Potter
Date: 11/18/07 18:16
Chapter: Chapter 1

I luv it! I luv the stories more when James and Lily are already married. I just do, Ya know...... Lol. KEEP IT UP!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! Wow, 4 reviews ALREADY! Hehe.

Reviewer: peevesismyhero
Date: 11/18/07 18:07
Chapter: Chapter 1

aww!!!! oh my god that is too sweet! i love the sort of foreshadowing about peter and how in love with lily james is. favorite part:
Well, son, I just wanted to say, in all of these useless words that I love you. If anything ever happened to you it would kill me. I would give myself for you. I hope you understand that. I am your dad, and I will always be there for you, no matter what.

that is just too sad and sweet at the same time because we know what happens to james....now im deperessed. :-( well, great job!

Author's Response: Thanks! That was my favorite part, too. Well, thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: TheHarryPotterGirl
Date: 11/18/07 16:49
Chapter: Chapter 1

this is a really great fic, I really like it.

Author's Response: Wow, I just now looked and saw it was validated! Thank you!

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