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Name: Ginny Guerra (Signed) · Date: 11/24/07 21:37 · For: Chapter 1 - Back to the Beginning
"It had been less than two years ago when Harry had first arrived at number 12 Grimmauld Place. " Considering that that first time was before fifth year, and this is the end of seventh year, it's been three years since Harry was at Grimmauld place for the first time.

I like where this chapter seems to be going. Update soon, please!

Author's Response: thanks for the comment - I made the change ;)


Name: QtipKiwis (Signed) · Date: 11/24/07 10:17 · For: Chapter 1 - Back to the Beginning
Really well written! You captured the emotions perfectly. You'll be coninuing this right?


Name: Marauder4Life (Signed) · Date: 11/21/07 11:46 · For: Chapter 1 - Back to the Beginning
Nice job so far. I can't wait for the next chapter! It would be better if you could go into more detail about what happened between Harry and Ginny, but still amzing job so far!

Author's Response: I know - I'm building to something, don't worry :) thank you for the review!


Name: MrsDags (Signed) · Date: 11/21/07 6:58 · For: Chapter 1 - Back to the Beginning
Wonderful start! Looking forward to seeing where you take it.


Name: mirimos (Signed) · Date: 11/21/07 1:34 · For: Chapter 1 - Back to the Beginning
Very well done. You didn't go too fast or too slow with the chapter. Nice start to h/g relationship. Please update soon and I'm not sure how long this will be but you've started out great so please give the whole story :)
gj


Name: helz_belz (Signed) · Date: 11/21/07 0:41 · For: Chapter 1 - Back to the Beginning
Nice job, keep up the good work. Especially the part between Ginny and Harry very well written.


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