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Name: SP4RT4N (Signed) · Date: 10/05/08 6:16 · For: Chapter 22 - Stolen Moments
Well, I read the chapter again and, being more alive than dead this time, more info got through. I think it's only a matter of time before the whole bathroom incident blows up around the house. poor Ron, though. His best mate and his sister's boyfriend, rolled into one. Nasty one to deal with.

Please don't mistake my earlier comments both in this chapter and in the previous ones. I was hoping to give something more constructive than "oh yay! please post again!". Not that I don't want you to post again! But seeing as you're forty or more chapters away, I don't think there's more for me to do than, to quote Capt. Rex, "Sit back, relax and enjoy the flight!"

Author's Response: as soon as the queue opens again I'll finally be able to push some new chapters through. You're more than welcome to deride the story if you like, a lot of people over at SIYE had a great time doing just that, but hey, more comments is always nice :) And constructive comments are always helpful ;)


Name: hpandgwlove (Signed) · Date: 09/27/08 17:15 · For: Chapter 22 - Stolen Moments
I just started reading your fic and wanted to let you know that I'm really enjoying it. Ginny and Harry's relationship is really cute. Update soon!

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it and I wish I could update, but the queue is frozen and God knows when the mods will catch up again. Thanks for commenting!


Name: SP4RT4N (Signed) · Date: 09/25/08 9:58 · For: Chapter 22 - Stolen Moments
So this is now two? Three? Chapters devoted to around 36 hours. I think I see why you have so many of them! Don't get me wrong, your attention to detail is impressive, but as far as i can tell, no critical information is being said for most of it. Then again, it did take me until i was well into HBP to puzzle out some of the mysteries. Still, it is entertaining to read.

Author's Response: You may not thing you're getting critical information, but there are things going on in those chapters that have an impact on things down the road. I'm sorry you don't see the value of being detailed, but they've been written since February of 2008, I don't expect to delete them now. And to warn you now, there are at least two more, but to be honest, I can't recall how many they are without looking, I'm posting Chapter 39 soon and I'm writing 72 now. Thanks for commenting.


Name: Fred and Georgie (Signed) · Date: 09/23/08 20:08 · For: Chapter 22 - Stolen Moments
I really enjoyed this story.
PLEASE update soon.
I think you could make many more chapters if you wanted.
i really want to find out what happens at hogwarts.

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying the story, sadly, I can't control how frequently I can update...thinks here at Mugglenet are challenging, at best. I have a lot more chapters written, but I doubt I'll have the patience to post them here. Thank you for commenting!


Name: esila (Signed) · Date: 09/23/08 16:09 · For: Chapter 2 - Happy Reunions
it wav good
a bit over the top with the locket and ring

Author's Response: I'm sorry you're not enjoying the story - thank you for commenting :)


Name: Callisto Anaxandra (Signed) · Date: 09/18/08 16:35 · For: Chapter 22 - Stolen Moments
I don't think the Weasley family is so conservative that they can barely leave Harry and Ginny alone in a room together. Reading the sections where Ron gets overprotective make me think that you have laid it on a little heavy. Otherwise, the story is interesting.

Author's Response: this was the same complaint I got before, and I think what is lacking is that I didn't describe the pressure everyone is under well enough. People over-react when one thing gets out of control, in this instance, because George is acting out, then the family will sometimes, lash out at something that should be innocuous. Given that, I think the situation is realistic.


Name: jaret (Signed) · Date: 09/18/08 7:59 · For: Chapter 22 - Stolen Moments
im still reading
its a friggin sweet fan fic
i keep checking every night to see if theres a new chapter
i just love it how you have really captured the love between ginny and harry
keep going
10 out of 10

Author's Response: glad you're still reading - it'll be awhile until the next update...the mods here are taking a break for three weeks...I'm glad you're enjoying the story so much!


Name: Icedearth15876 (Signed) · Date: 09/17/08 23:37 · For: Chapter 22 - Stolen Moments
Very nice new chapter, kinda fluffy but I like it that way.

Author's Response: there are only a few of these fluffy chapters, so enjoy them while you can ;) thanks for commenting :)


Name: SP4RT4N (Signed) · Date: 09/17/08 2:30 · For: Chapter 21 - Healing Hurts
That was... Interesting. Some of the dialogue with Ron didn't quite feel like him, but overall you nailed the characters dead-on.
I wish it didn't take so long for the chapters to get authorized. I'm really enjoying this story.

Author's Response: well, I took Ron out of his element a little with the situation, so it may have seemed a little forced, but based on his reactions to Harry messing Ginny around in book seven, well, I went with it, plus the overall stress already around. You're not kidding...I have 37 chapters ready to be posted and it's like pulling teeth...I'm glad you're enjoying the story and hope you continue reading and commenting!


Name: FriendofMolly (Signed) · Date: 09/16/08 19:12 · For: Chapter 21 - Healing Hurts
Ok something is going on. Whatever it is you're writing a terrific story. I hope you have another chapter in queue. It sounds like it's going to be a while before new updates are going to be a while.

Author's Response: quite a few things are going on, actually, but I'm using subtly to my advantage ;) Thank you so much - I am working really hard to make it a good, solid story :) I pushed one through as soon as I saw that notice, I'm hoping I can get 22 up during the break...it's rather frustrating...but if you want to read more, I have up to chapter 37 posted at my livejournal, flannel_fiction, I think it's in my userinfo :) thanks for commenting and reading!


Name: jaret (Signed) · Date: 09/16/08 8:21 · For: Chapter 21 - Healing Hurts
wow
you are really capturing some nice moments
im liking this story the more i read it
lulz on the undressing part

Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying the story and I hope you keep reading and commenting :) I felt like I had to throw that in ;)


Name: GryffindorGirl163 (Signed) · Date: 09/15/08 20:30 · For: Chapter 21 - Healing Hurts
another great chapter can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response: glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for commenting!


Name: ravenclawmoon2001 (Signed) · Date: 09/11/08 14:32 · For: Chapter 1 - Back to the Beginning
Amy (the maruader): We are proud to present...

Sherri (the slytherin): the best dorm mate two girls could have...

Amy: Ceana McKenzie!

Ceana: Hi there! I just read this fiction; it's great! (ceana- keh-nuh)

~The Silver Trio

Author's Response: glad you've joined the story and thanks for commenting!


Name: SP4RT4N (Signed) · Date: 09/11/08 1:27 · For: Chapter 20 - The Truth Will Not Set You Free
I keep coming across something, and i don't know if anyone else has notices. i think you are wanting to use the word skeptical, rather than sceptical. unless you're trying to tell us that they're throwing around looks of sewage rather than disbelief! lol.

Author's Response: you must be American, because in the Queen's English, it's sceptical, not skeptical. But I'm glad that's what you've gotten out of all these chapters, word usage ;)


Name: ravenclawmoon2001 (Signed) · Date: 09/10/08 15:50 · For: Chapter 20 - The Truth Will Not Set You Free
Amy: THEY KNEW?! They knew all along, and they STILL didn't say anything?!

Sherri: Calm, down Amy You'll give yourself another attack! We both loved it, and, yes, as Amy said when she FREAKED, thought that was a great twist on things. Keep an eye out for our newest team member, Ceana McKenzie, our new roomate, as she is going to be reviewing with us!

~Amy Amelia & Sherri

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the twist - and yeah, of course they knew - they had to know, how could they not know? But don't worry, you know how much of this story arc goes :) and welcome to your new roommate who'll be joining in the reviews :)


Name: jaret (Signed) · Date: 09/10/08 6:11 · For: Chapter 20 - The Truth Will Not Set You Free
wow
so far has been really good and absorbing
9.5/10
excellent story
i just hope its not over

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it - and no, not for a while. I'm writing chapter sixty-seven or sixty-eight right now...I don't have it in front of me ;) It'll be weighing in on quite a few chapters. I just don't know how many I have the patience to post here. Thanks for commenting!


Name: GinervaMPotterthe2 (Signed) · Date: 09/09/08 17:18 · For: Chapter 20 - The Truth Will Not Set You Free
i love this whole book soooo much!
keep writing and dont stop till its over
i always check to see when the chapters are done! I LOVE THIS ONE!
post the next chapters asap, because i LOVE them!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying the story - and don't worry, I have tons of chapters to go. Sadly too many...I'll try to push the next chapter in today and see how long it takes to get through the queue. Thanks for reading and commenting!


Name: ravenclawmoon2001 (Signed) · Date: 09/09/08 16:25 · For: Chapter 1 - Back to the Beginning
Amy: tee hee ;-)


Name: FriendofMolly (Signed) · Date: 09/08/08 19:14 · For: Chapter 20 - The Truth Will Not Set You Free
OMG, Why? On his birthday! Will will find out what the purple flame was? This is a incredible story Carry on Quick!

Author's Response: well, we don't come back to it specifically, but I am trying to resolve everything as I keep writing. Thanks for reading!


Name: Mudblood_and_Proud_of_it357 (Signed) · Date: 09/08/08 18:23 · For: Chapter 20 - The Truth Will Not Set You Free
Yay! You updated! Great chapter and well done. I thought I'd say that the incantation for revival is "Ennervate" rather than "Rennervate" as it is used in GOF several times. You can check the hp-encyclopedia.com spell section for any clarification. Well done, though, and upate more often! I've loved this fic from the start and can't wait to see where it goes!
Mapoi357

Author's Response: thank you! And actually, my Beta and I went back and forth on that one and according to our combined resources, 'Rennervate' was what would make him be re-energised. I think the general point still comes across, but we can discuss it further if you like :) I have a lot more chapters posted elsewhere, but I don't know how many more I'll post here...validating is rather involving. I'm glad you're enjoying the fic!


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