Reviewer: esila
Date: 09/23/08 16:09
Chapter: Chapter 2 - Happy Reunions

it wav good
a bit over the top with the locket and ring

Author's Response: I'm sorry you're not enjoying the story - thank you for commenting :)

Reviewer: Callisto Anaxandra
Date: 09/18/08 16:35
Chapter: Chapter 22 - Stolen Moments

I don't think the Weasley family is so conservative that they can barely leave Harry and Ginny alone in a room together. Reading the sections where Ron gets overprotective make me think that you have laid it on a little heavy. Otherwise, the story is interesting.

Author's Response: this was the same complaint I got before, and I think what is lacking is that I didn't describe the pressure everyone is under well enough. People over-react when one thing gets out of control, in this instance, because George is acting out, then the family will sometimes, lash out at something that should be innocuous. Given that, I think the situation is realistic.

Reviewer: jaret
Date: 09/18/08 7:59
Chapter: Chapter 22 - Stolen Moments

im still reading
its a friggin sweet fan fic
i keep checking every night to see if theres a new chapter
i just love it how you have really captured the love between ginny and harry
keep going
10 out of 10

Author's Response: glad you're still reading - it'll be awhile until the next update...the mods here are taking a break for three weeks...I'm glad you're enjoying the story so much!

Reviewer: Icedearth15876
Date: 09/17/08 23:37
Chapter: Chapter 22 - Stolen Moments

Very nice new chapter, kinda fluffy but I like it that way.

Author's Response: there are only a few of these fluffy chapters, so enjoy them while you can ;) thanks for commenting :)

Reviewer: SP4RT4N
Date: 09/17/08 2:30
Chapter: Chapter 21 - Healing Hurts

That was... Interesting. Some of the dialogue with Ron didn't quite feel like him, but overall you nailed the characters dead-on.
I wish it didn't take so long for the chapters to get authorized. I'm really enjoying this story.

Author's Response: well, I took Ron out of his element a little with the situation, so it may have seemed a little forced, but based on his reactions to Harry messing Ginny around in book seven, well, I went with it, plus the overall stress already around. You're not kidding...I have 37 chapters ready to be posted and it's like pulling teeth...I'm glad you're enjoying the story and hope you continue reading and commenting!

Reviewer: FriendofMolly
Date: 09/16/08 19:12
Chapter: Chapter 21 - Healing Hurts

Ok something is going on. Whatever it is you're writing a terrific story. I hope you have another chapter in queue. It sounds like it's going to be a while before new updates are going to be a while.

Author's Response: quite a few things are going on, actually, but I'm using subtly to my advantage ;) Thank you so much - I am working really hard to make it a good, solid story :) I pushed one through as soon as I saw that notice, I'm hoping I can get 22 up during the break...it's rather frustrating...but if you want to read more, I have up to chapter 37 posted at my livejournal, flannel_fiction, I think it's in my userinfo :) thanks for commenting and reading!

Reviewer: jaret
Date: 09/16/08 8:21
Chapter: Chapter 21 - Healing Hurts

wow
you are really capturing some nice moments
im liking this story the more i read it
lulz on the undressing part

Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying the story and I hope you keep reading and commenting :) I felt like I had to throw that in ;)

Reviewer: GryffindorGirl163
Date: 09/15/08 20:30
Chapter: Chapter 21 - Healing Hurts

another great chapter can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response: glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: ravenclawmoon2001
Date: 09/11/08 14:32
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Back to the Beginning

Amy (the maruader): We are proud to present...

Sherri (the slytherin): the best dorm mate two girls could have...

Amy: Ceana McKenzie!

Ceana: Hi there! I just read this fiction; it's great! (ceana- keh-nuh)

~The Silver Trio

Author's Response: glad you've joined the story and thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: SP4RT4N
Date: 09/11/08 1:27
Chapter: Chapter 20 - The Truth Will Not Set You Free

I keep coming across something, and i don't know if anyone else has notices. i think you are wanting to use the word skeptical, rather than sceptical. unless you're trying to tell us that they're throwing around looks of sewage rather than disbelief! lol.

Author's Response: you must be American, because in the Queen's English, it's sceptical, not skeptical. But I'm glad that's what you've gotten out of all these chapters, word usage ;)

Reviewer: ravenclawmoon2001
Date: 09/10/08 15:50
Chapter: Chapter 20 - The Truth Will Not Set You Free

Amy: THEY KNEW?! They knew all along, and they STILL didn't say anything?!

Sherri: Calm, down Amy You'll give yourself another attack! We both loved it, and, yes, as Amy said when she FREAKED, thought that was a great twist on things. Keep an eye out for our newest team member, Ceana McKenzie, our new roomate, as she is going to be reviewing with us!

~Amy Amelia & Sherri

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the twist - and yeah, of course they knew - they had to know, how could they not know? But don't worry, you know how much of this story arc goes :) and welcome to your new roommate who'll be joining in the reviews :)

Reviewer: jaret
Date: 09/10/08 6:11
Chapter: Chapter 20 - The Truth Will Not Set You Free

wow
so far has been really good and absorbing
9.5/10
excellent story
i just hope its not over

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it - and no, not for a while. I'm writing chapter sixty-seven or sixty-eight right now...I don't have it in front of me ;) It'll be weighing in on quite a few chapters. I just don't know how many I have the patience to post here. Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: GinervaMPotterthe2
Date: 09/09/08 17:18
Chapter: Chapter 20 - The Truth Will Not Set You Free

i love this whole book soooo much!
keep writing and dont stop till its over
i always check to see when the chapters are done! I LOVE THIS ONE!
post the next chapters asap, because i LOVE them!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying the story - and don't worry, I have tons of chapters to go. Sadly too many...I'll try to push the next chapter in today and see how long it takes to get through the queue. Thanks for reading and commenting!

Reviewer: ravenclawmoon2001
Date: 09/09/08 16:25
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Back to the Beginning

Amy: tee hee ;-)

Reviewer: FriendofMolly
Date: 09/08/08 19:14
Chapter: Chapter 20 - The Truth Will Not Set You Free

OMG, Why? On his birthday! Will will find out what the purple flame was? This is a incredible story Carry on Quick!

Author's Response: well, we don't come back to it specifically, but I am trying to resolve everything as I keep writing. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Mudblood_and_Proud_of_it357
Date: 09/08/08 18:23
Chapter: Chapter 20 - The Truth Will Not Set You Free

Yay! You updated! Great chapter and well done. I thought I'd say that the incantation for revival is "Ennervate" rather than "Rennervate" as it is used in GOF several times. You can check the hp-encyclopedia.com spell section for any clarification. Well done, though, and upate more often! I've loved this fic from the start and can't wait to see where it goes!
Mapoi357

Author's Response: thank you! And actually, my Beta and I went back and forth on that one and according to our combined resources, 'Rennervate' was what would make him be re-energised. I think the general point still comes across, but we can discuss it further if you like :) I have a lot more chapters posted elsewhere, but I don't know how many more I'll post here...validating is rather involving. I'm glad you're enjoying the fic!

Reviewer: jaret
Date: 09/08/08 7:15
Chapter: Chapter 2 - Happy Reunions

again
its better than i expected

Author's Response: and to think you're only at chapter two! Just wait till you get to the later chapters :)

Reviewer: jaret
Date: 09/08/08 7:03
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Back to the Beginning

wow
thats really good
really feels like a real writer
ill be reading more
thats for sure

Author's Response: I'm glad to read you're enjoying the story :) and thank you for the high praise, I'm trying very hard to make this a cohesive overall story :)

Reviewer: Taiya89
Date: 09/07/08 5:55
Chapter: Chapter 19 - The Hits Keep Coming

WOW!!! This is the BEST FanFiction i've ever read! Please write more! I'm a huge fan of your writing now!
Keep it up...

Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying it and I wish I could update faster! Thanks much!

Reviewer: ravenclawmoon2001
Date: 09/05/08 16:41
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Back to the Beginning

(Amy:) well, yeah, I was just... a bit, you know, excited, and... yeah.

~Amy Amelia

Author's Response: I'm glad someone is excited :)

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