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Name: Callisto Anaxandra (Signed) · Date: 10/23/08 12:58 · For: Chapter 26 - The Tension Mounts
I can't understand why you would think the Weasleys would be so conservative. I mean, even in the 90s, when the story is apparently set, conservative families would have been a little more forgiving, I think, under the stressful circumstances following the war.

Author's Response: yes, and this is the biggest bone of contention readers have. The reason I set it in this manner is because even though the '90's is what the story is set in, it isn't our '90's, it's the wizarding '90's. Do we ever see any of the older Weasely boys doing anything even close to this? never, so I think JKR would have had a very-stressed out Molly reacting strongly to this. It isn't a big part of the story, but a lot of people have felt the need to tell me how wrong I am and that's fine.

Name: jaret (Signed) · Date: 10/22/08 3:59 · For: Chapter 25 - A Family Affair
poor ginny
i want to read more now
your really good

Author's Response: thank you so much - I'm glad you're enjoying the story!

Name: FriendofMolly (Signed) · Date: 10/17/08 18:14 · For: Chapter 25 - A Family Affair
Poor Ginny, but at least she has people to talk to her. Hasn't anyone realised Harry feeling cut off fom his"family" has no one. This is a really great story.

Author's Response: I think they can't see that at all - they're so consumed with George that everything else is falling to the wayside. Thanks for reading!

Name: Alicia Jonae (Signed) · Date: 10/17/08 17:20 · For: Chapter 25 - A Family Affair
I liked it when you said 'that' for I think we all know what 'that' implies to! ;) It's good that you did that, incase younger people were reading!
Anyway, great chapter! I hope Harry does go back to The Burrow tho...

Author's Response: I'm not sure that many people are reading this, so I have to be honest that I did that more because I can't see Mrs. Weasley saying it than censorship. I'm glad you're enjoying the story!

Name: mlskojin (Signed) · Date: 10/17/08 17:15 · For: Chapter 25 - A Family Affair
That was a very good chapter. I perticularly liked the part where Molly was giving Ginny "The Talk." Especially since nobody seemed to want to listen to what Ginny had to say. I do sort of feel sorry for Harry for the next time they see him though.

Author's Response: yeah, it might be a little rough on him, but I think he was already feeling out of place as it was. Thanks for commenting!

Name: SP4RT4N (Signed) · Date: 10/17/08 17:10 · For: Chapter 25 - A Family Affair
ack. I hated that talk when my mom gave it to me. poor ginny. And another chapter without a cliffhanger? i was just getting used to them ;P. Awesome job.

Author's Response: well, I spared the readers the details of 'the talk,' I'm sure we all know it well :p lol you'll have to wait a few chapters for another one ;) thanks for commenting :)

Name: SP4RT4N (Signed) · Date: 10/17/08 17:01 · For: Chapter 24 - Coming to Terms
Oh joy. Hyper protective parents coupled with hyper stressed parents could doom a relationship. Hope that doesn't happen here. Nicely written.

Author's Response: I think we can be more optimistic for Ginny and Harry :) thanks for commenting :)

Name: jaret (Signed) · Date: 10/17/08 7:30 · For: Chapter 24 - Coming to Terms
great writing
perfect balance
and no cliffhanger
well done

Author's Response: thank you so much! I'm so glad you're enjoying it!

Name: littlestweasley (Signed) · Date: 10/16/08 21:37 · For: Chapter 23 - Twisted Paths Cross
love it, love it, love it!

Author's Response: thank you!

Name: Alicia Jonae (Signed) · Date: 10/16/08 21:24 · For: Chapter 24 - Coming to Terms
I was shocked, but not really when Mrs. Weasley caught Ginny and Harry the way they did. Keep em coming..

Btw: How long did it take for your story to get accepted by Mugglenet? Because I've written/published a story that I did in my spare time and I'm anxiously awaiting to see if they approved it..

Author's Response: I'm doing what I can - I'll put the next chapter in the queue this AM :) Um, it depends, I've been posting almost a year and I've completed more chapters than are here...sometimes the queue can take you a month or more to get through per chapter. I've been fortunate that one mod actually cares enough to keep my story moving :)

Name: Alicia Jonae (Signed) · Date: 10/14/08 19:06 · For: Chapter 23 - Twisted Paths Cross
Pls try & do another chapter or two b4 I go to Texas in the next two wks!! :)

Author's Response: I have 24 in the queue, but I can't control the moderating - I'm doing the best I can given the circumstances!

Name: jaret (Signed) · Date: 10/13/08 7:55 · For: Chapter 23 - Twisted Paths Cross
cnt wait for the next chapter
this is my fav fan fic
i hope it will be updated more regularly
because im bursting from excitetement to read more

Author's Response: I'm updating as fast as I can - but there's only so much I can do ;) thanks for commenting!

Name: Alicia Jonae (Signed) · Date: 10/12/08 22:08 · For: Chapter 1 - Back to the Beginning
oooooooohh, this is getting good! :)
I wish you would've a least written one more chapter, so we could find out what happens to George & of course, figure out who it is Ginny is talking to when Harry returns from St. Mungos!!.. Can't wait for Ch 24

Name: FriendofMolly (Signed) · Date: 10/12/08 18:56 · For: Chapter 23 - Twisted Paths Cross
Oh my. Why oh why can't Mr and Mrs W see how things really are. I can't wait to see who picked up Harry.

Author's Response: that would be nice, but you know parents ;) thanks for commenting!

Name: Icedearth15876 (Signed) · Date: 10/12/08 18:09 · For: Chapter 23 - Twisted Paths Cross
Great new addition to the story, keep the goodness coming!

Author's Response: I'm doing my best - thanks for commenting!

Name: Fred and Georgie (Signed) · Date: 10/11/08 21:42 · For: Chapter 1 - Back to the Beginning
This is a really nice story but i seams to be moving alone very slowley...i mean they are still at the burrow and not working or going to school or anything. I know the que was closed and i am now waiting for it to catch up with all the stories people submitted on wednesday. Including my first fan fic. Did you by any chance post this story on any other site where i can read more of it?

Author's Response: I have described this story as a slow burn, this story isn't going to move like lightning, however, I have posted links in my author profile to my livejournal, flannel_fiction that has 41 chapters in it - thanks for commenting :)

Name: Alicia Jonae (Signed) · Date: 10/09/08 17:03 · For: Chapter 22 - Stolen Moments
OMG! You HAVE to continue writing!! I want to know if Harry'll get better, what will happen to George, etc!! Keep it up :)

Author's Response: I have written more, but updating is tough stuff here...that queue is intense. Thanks for commenting!

Name: Alicia Jonae (Signed) · Date: 10/06/08 21:27 · For: Chapter 7 - Talking Things Out
this is getting REALLY interestng, that I don't want to go to bed, but I must! But I will be back to read more tomorrow! :)

Author's Response: luckily, you have a lot of chapters to go to catch up, but getting new chapters up is a bit of a task, hope you keep checking in! Thanks for reading and commenting!

Name: Alicia Jonae (Signed) · Date: 10/06/08 20:35 · For: Chapter 5 - Concerning Revelations
OMG OMG OMG!! I can tell this is getting good! :) My heart started thumping a little when George attacked Harry!
I shoulda started reading Harry Potter fanfics A LONG time ago! ;)

Author's Response: there are a lot of great ones out there, I'm not sure I'd count mine as one of them, but you don't know what you're missing! I'm glad you're enjoying it, a lot more is posted here :)

Name: Alicia Jonae (Signed) · Date: 10/06/08 18:27 · For: Chapter 1 - Back to the Beginning
Wow! From what I'm reading so far, it feels like Jo is writing this story herself!! ;) Keep up the good work! :)

Author's Response: that's rather high praise - thank you and I'm glad you're enjoying the story :)

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