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Name: mlskojin (Signed) · Date: 11/09/08 8:29 · For: Chapter 30 - Even the Best Laid Plans
That was a great Chapter. Though one major error just screamed out at me. The Fact that Ginny has never rode in a muggle cab. Maybe you were implying that she has never been alone with Harry in one. But she has indeed rode in one. I know for sure that they rode to Kingscross in a taxi in book 4. But other than that. It was a really good store. I can't wait for the rest.

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it :) Are you sure? I honestly don't recall that at all - where is that in GoF?


Name: FriendofMolly (Signed) · Date: 11/09/08 3:27 · For: Chapter 30 - Even the Best Laid Plans
Oh no. This is getting ridiculous. The story is still excellent, but I wish things were easier for Harry and Ginny. Was Gaunt testing Harry something about taking care of what's important.

Author's Response: I don't think things can be easy for them, can they? I mean, that wouldn't be realistic. Thanks for commenting! It'll get better for a bit, I promise :)


Name: Kiwi_Chick (Signed) · Date: 11/08/08 3:09 · For: Chapter 30 - Even the Best Laid Plans
Poor Harry, what a dissapointment. He must love her very much because most people would have given up on the massive hassle the Weasleys are putting him through.

Author's Response: He loves her, of course he'd do almost anything for her. In a way, this story is a coming of age for Ginny in realising how much she loves Harry. I think, given the circumstances, he's going to be patient for her :)


Name: dona682 (Signed) · Date: 11/07/08 23:07 · For: Chapter 30 - Even the Best Laid Plans
After reading the added chapters, I asked Jane (my wife) what she thought. The reply was it is a good story, Turn the page and read some more. We look foreward to the next chapters.

Author's Response: I'm glad you're both reading it and there is much more to come :)


Name: FriendofMolly (Signed) · Date: 11/03/08 16:25 · For: Chapter 29 - Reconciling Two Halves
Ok, I'm gettin the feeling Gaunt is about to reveal something nasty. I agree with Harry in regards to George. But what are the Weasleys hiding from Harry other than George. And Percy is still a Prat.

Author's Response: I think Gaunt is the type to let things simmer a little first ;) You'll find out in a couple chapters :) he is, but he is Percy ;) thanks for commenting!


Name: Kiwi_Chick (Signed) · Date: 11/03/08 15:47 · For: Chapter 29 - Reconciling Two Halves
I have a bad feeling that it wont go to plan for Harry, especially with Gaunts warnings about them being in danger. Great chapter.

Author's Response: I'm afraid you'll have to wait and see - but I'm glad you're enjoying it - I'll put the next chapter in the queue today :)


Name: Alicia Jonae (Signed) · Date: 11/02/08 22:52 · For: Chapter 28 - A Fresh Start
Yay! Harry started @ the Ministry, along w/Neville & Ron; I'm so excited to see how this all turns out! :) Jw, how long exactly do you intend on writing this chapter?

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it. I aim my chapters to be at least 2500 words, if that's what you're asking, but sometimes I don't quite make it...I wanted to give you, and Harry, a taste of the Ministry. The next chapter is a little more...interesting, I thought...I could be wrong :)


Name: Kiwi_Chick (Signed) · Date: 11/02/08 17:05 · For: Chapter 28 - A Fresh Start
So is Gaunt from the famous Slytherin Gaunts? Lets hope he really does have Harrys best interests at heart. I think surely Kingsly wouldnt have him teaching Harry if he wasnt a good guy...well lets hope so anyway. Brilliant chapter, looking forward to your next.

Author's Response: I'm afraid you'll have to wait and see what is up with Gaunt - but I didn't pick names arbitrarily :) thanks so much and the next chapter is in the queue :)


Name: FriendofMolly (Signed) · Date: 11/02/08 12:25 · For: Chapter 28 - A Fresh Start
That was well to the point. However why didn't McGonagal or Kingsley ever bring the protection of loved ones up to Harry?They knew he had Auror ambitions. He may have done a lot in his life, but he's still unaware of Adult wizards life. On the other hand there's something about Gaunt that gives me pause. It could be that his name is the same as Riddles' mother. Give us more, more, more.

Author's Response: well, there's a lot going on in this chapter, more than I'm letting on ;) you would think, but he's been in 'hiding' a lot of the time too, I mean, he hasn't sought out their opinions either...thanks for commenting! I have 29 in the queue :)


Name: Kif (Signed) · Date: 11/01/08 11:00 · For: Chapter 27 - Hoping for the Best, Expecting the Worst
I had forgotten about this for a while - ended up missing a pile of chapters. Glad I took the time to catch up, however, it's a nice read! :D

Re-favoured (I think only removed it because I was getting more e-mails than I should).

Author's Response: I'm glad you came through and decided to read it! I've got lots more to go! and I'm glad you did :)


Name: Alicia Jonae (Signed) · Date: 10/31/08 10:49 · For: Chapter 1 - Back to the Beginning
Aww, I'm glad Harry and Ginny are starting to get things back to normal. I can't wait to see the reaction tho on the Weasley family when he does show up for Ginny's birthday! I'm hoping to read more when I'm in Texas or 6 wks! (Nov 1-Dec13!!)

Author's Response: since you're on chapter 1, you've got a lot to go! enjoy!


Name: Sesah (Signed) · Date: 10/30/08 22:02 · For: Chapter 27 - Hoping for the Best, Expecting the Worst
i love this story! I look forward to more updates on it. I'm really curious as to how things turn out!

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it and there are lots more chapters to come :)


Name: jaret (Signed) · Date: 10/30/08 5:08 · For: Chapter 27 - Hoping for the Best, Expecting the Worst
man
you are excellent
and the rate you upload these things is incredible
i will definitely be keeping an eye out for an other of your works
10/10
again

Author's Response: I promise I'm going as fast as I can - I give credit to the one mod that's actually pushing these through *cheers* I'm glad you're enjoying the story, I don't have any others in the works, I need to finish this one ;)


Name: FriendofMolly (Signed) · Date: 10/29/08 20:15 · For: Chapter 27 - Hoping for the Best, Expecting the Worst
And still no one is considering Harrys feelings. Well maybe Ginny is a little. I can't wait for the next chapter. This is such a tremendous story.

Author's Response: no, but if you have someone in George's position, the strain on a family can be brutal...I don't think they mean to treat Harry badly, he's one of the family. I'm glad you're enjoying the story! I have the next chapter in the queue :)


Name: Kiwi_Chick (Signed) · Date: 10/28/08 21:03 · For: Chapter 27 - Hoping for the Best, Expecting the Worst
Yay for Harry getting Ginny to come round a bit. I'm glad he got that visit from Hermione..he needed a friend. I'm looking forward to seeing where he takes Ginny for her b'day.

Author's Response: I am a big Hermione fan, so I am trying to get her to help those two ;) and I laboured over that for a while, I think it goes well :) you'll see soon enough :)


Name: Kiwi_Chick (Signed) · Date: 10/27/08 23:52 · For: Chapter 26 - The Tension Mounts
Porr Harry feeling so left out. I feel sorry for him that he can't get close to Ginny, and that her family keep bring up the 'sleeping together' thing like its a massive deal. I'm glad he's back at his house now though. Keep up the great work.

Author's Response: thanks so much - I'm glad you're enjoying the story! And I promise, things will get sorted for Harry and Ginny :)


Name: Alicia Jonae (Signed) · Date: 10/24/08 22:41 · For: Chapter 26 - The Tension Mounts
Wow

Author's Response: thanks, I think :)


Name: Callisto Anaxandra (Signed) · Date: 10/23/08 12:58 · For: Chapter 26 - The Tension Mounts
I can't understand why you would think the Weasleys would be so conservative. I mean, even in the 90s, when the story is apparently set, conservative families would have been a little more forgiving, I think, under the stressful circumstances following the war.

Author's Response: yes, and this is the biggest bone of contention readers have. The reason I set it in this manner is because even though the '90's is what the story is set in, it isn't our '90's, it's the wizarding '90's. Do we ever see any of the older Weasely boys doing anything even close to this? never, so I think JKR would have had a very-stressed out Molly reacting strongly to this. It isn't a big part of the story, but a lot of people have felt the need to tell me how wrong I am and that's fine.


Name: jaret (Signed) · Date: 10/22/08 3:59 · For: Chapter 25 - A Family Affair
awwww
poor ginny
i want to read more now
ooooo
your really good

Author's Response: thank you so much - I'm glad you're enjoying the story!


Name: FriendofMolly (Signed) · Date: 10/17/08 18:14 · For: Chapter 25 - A Family Affair
Poor Ginny, but at least she has people to talk to her. Hasn't anyone realised Harry feeling cut off fom his"family" has no one. This is a really great story.

Author's Response: I think they can't see that at all - they're so consumed with George that everything else is falling to the wayside. Thanks for reading!


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