Reviewer: captburke
Date: 12/28/08 22:12
Chapter: Chapter 4 - The Storm

I keep repeating myself, but this is flowing just as I might picture it. Ginny is very strong and Harry has a lot to learn about trust and relationships.

Author's Response: there are a lot more twists and turns for our heroes, so please keep reading :) and thank you for commenting!

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 12/28/08 22:02
Chapter: Chapter 3 - A Conduit of Worlds

The progression is perfect.

Author's Response: I'm glad you don't mind the pace, most people have complained about it - glad you're still reading :)

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 12/28/08 21:39
Chapter: Chapter 2 - Happy Reunions

Very sensible flow to the story. Good thing someone in this world is sensible.

Author's Response: there are a handful out there, hope you still think that as you keep reading ;)

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 12/28/08 21:19
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Back to the Beginning

I like the beginning

Author's Response: thank you - I'm glad you're enjoying it :)

Reviewer: potterfan48
Date: 12/26/08 23:45
Chapter: Chapter 34 - Riding the Rails

I thought Harry had given Ron, Hermione, and Ginny the Marauders map along with Felix Felicius when Dumbledore died.

Author's Response: he uses it in DH, so I am basing the fic off of that. If you may recall, he uses it when he and Hermione are in the forest to check on Ginny.

Reviewer: FriendofMolly
Date: 12/23/08 0:12
Chapter: Chapter 36 - Coping with Escape

That was sad and a bit confusing. What's going on with Crookshanks? I also noticed that Kreacherwas a bit different, regarding Hermione. I know he's worried about Harry and Ginny. I can tell this is not going to be an easy term at Hogwarts. Poor Ginny, she needs Harry, sleep, and a real chance to grieve, as that has been denied her. I look forward to the next.

Author's Response: no, it can't be - and things are going to happen at the school, as you'll see in the coming chapters ;) I'll put the next chapter in now :)

Reviewer: FriendofMolly
Date: 12/22/08 23:48
Chapter: Chapter 35 - Shifting Forward

That was a strange chapter. I keep thinking Gaunt really wants Harry and Neville to fail, Podmore wasn't much better. I look forward to reading the next, as I'm hooked on this story. I want a happy ending.

Author's Response: Thanks for commenting - well, Gaunt is supposed to be hard to read ;) I'm glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: FriendofMolly
Date: 12/22/08 23:37
Chapter: Chapter 34 - Riding the Rails

I'm a bit behind in my reading. This is finally, a positive, not so dark, chapter. I felt so sad for Harry, and Ginny. I hope Hermione explans just how special the Map is. Seriously good chapter.

Author's Response: thank you so much - and things will get a little easier, but again a little tense, as the story moves on - thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: RL94
Date: 12/21/08 14:40
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Back to the Beginning

I really love this story. Its usually pretty hard to find a story set post Deathly Hallows that is so believable. I would really like to see a Harry and George confrontation though.

Author's Response: thank you for commenting. I think you might be surprised by the ending then. I've actually completed my final edits on the story and should be sending it to my Beta this week. But it is quite a few chapters ;)

Reviewer: Trismegistus
Date: 12/19/08 10:49
Chapter: Chapter 35 - Shifting Forward

I have not been reviewing consistently, so please forgive me for that. You have been doing wonderfully with this story. What is great is that you take a completely different, yet still Potterverse consistent, tack to the post-DH story. Your keeping Harry in the dark regarding the Weasleys' troubles, I must admit, is driving me crazy, which will make the hopefully forthcoming reveal all the sweeter. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: I'm glad you've taken the time to comment now! I really am fueled by the comments. I decided things couldn't possibly be wine and roses, so I'm taking Harry anc co. through a wild ride :) Um, it is actually not the main part of the story, but it's still important to Harry's development. Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Kiwi_Chick
Date: 12/07/08 18:12
Chapter: Chapter 34 - Riding the Rails

I'm glad they went back too. So this part of the story will be mostly Ginny's POV? I hope so coz I'm enjoying it so far.

Author's Response: it's actually going to continue to alternate, keeping both Harry and Ginny up to speed. I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far :)

Reviewer: Sarah_Joana
Date: 12/03/08 21:14
Chapter: Chapter 34 - Riding the Rails

This story is a bit sad, but it's pretty interesting! but, when it'll be finished completely? it's so long T________T

Author's Response: I won't lie, there is a lot more that's been written. I've actually completed writing the story. The way the queue goes here, I don't expect to ever see the ending posted...I'm doing the best I can posting this and I appreciate everyone who continues to read! and it has to be a little sad, it is a reflection of reality.

Reviewer: discovery
Date: 11/30/08 12:32
Chapter: Chapter 34 - Riding the Rails

ginny really should have been able to see the theraserals in fourth year after the ministry witch seeing sirius die

Author's Response: since JKR doesn't cite it, then I assume she can't.

Reviewer: FriendofMolly
Date: 11/29/08 20:57
Chapter: Chapter 34 - Riding the Rails

Thank goodness, a chapter without secrets. Harry giving Ginny the Marauders Map was so right, considering he got it from Fred and George. I think Fred would have loved that. George would too if he wasn't mental. Can you PLEASE get him the help he needs. Keep on writing, this is awesome!!

Author's Response: thanks for commenting - I am doing the best that I can with helping the characters to where they need to get :)

Reviewer: FriendofMolly
Date: 11/25/08 19:40
Chapter: Chapter 33 - Places to Go

I can't imagine what the heck is going on at te Burrow. It was good to see Harry and Ginny together, at least for a short time. I hope they have more good times ahead. Great story.

Author's Response: Thank you - things won't become clear for a little while, but I'm trying to update faster so the story moves faster!

Reviewer: jaret
Date: 11/25/08 1:19
Chapter: Chapter 33 - Places to Go

aww
how sad
:(
keep going please
this is awsome material

Author's Response: I'm trying, but there's been hardly any comments lately, so I'm kinda bummed about that...thanks for taking the time to comment!

Reviewer: FriendofMolly
Date: 11/18/08 19:23
Chapter: Chapter 32 - The Things We Do

Ok Harry and Ginny got some snog time, but something fishy is still going on. You've got to resolve this George dilemma. This is so excellent, but the George thing is wearing.

Author's Response: Yes, I know - but that takes time since the story isn't about George - thanks for commenting and reading :)

Reviewer: FriendofMolly
Date: 11/18/08 18:38
Chapter: Chapter 31 - If Only Things Could Stay Simple

That was a scary and confusing chapter. It's that everone is acting so oddly. I'm hoping now that Hermione and Ginny are at Number 12, we'll find out what's happening.

Author's Response: It was meant to be a little confusing - but things will get sorted out :)

Reviewer: mlskojin
Date: 11/09/08 20:34
Chapter: Chapter 30 - Even the Best Laid Plans

I just looked the taxi bit up for you it is in Chapter Eleven "Aboard the Hogwarts Express" page 162 American version. But as I said it was a good chapter all in all. I look forward to reading more.

Author's Response: it's interesting that dozens of people have previously read this chapter and not one person commented on that. Thanks for pointing it out. I don't know that I won't make similar mistakes in the future.

Reviewer: mlskojin
Date: 11/09/08 8:29
Chapter: Chapter 30 - Even the Best Laid Plans

That was a great Chapter. Though one major error just screamed out at me. The Fact that Ginny has never rode in a muggle cab. Maybe you were implying that she has never been alone with Harry in one. But she has indeed rode in one. I know for sure that they rode to Kingscross in a taxi in book 4. But other than that. It was a really good store. I can't wait for the rest.

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it :) Are you sure? I honestly don't recall that at all - where is that in GoF?

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