Reviewer: way 2 HP obsesed
Date: 01/05/09 15:57
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Back to the Beginning

i so dont trust gaunt...good story by the way

Author's Response: thank you for commenting! glad you're enjoying the story!

Reviewer: FriendofMolly
Date: 01/05/09 2:51
Chapter: Chapter 37 - Class is Back in Session

So much on her shoulders, and now this. I can't imagine what you have in store for Ginny and Hermione. But I know it's going to be good.

Author's Response: It is - if you go to my LiveJournal com, I have 51 chapters posted there - a lot more is going on...God knows when I'll get it up here ;) Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: siilly_bookworm_28
Date: 01/04/09 17:35
Chapter: Chapter 37 - Class is Back in Session

Spectacular chapter, but please post more quickly!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: thank you and I'm glad you enjoyed it. Trust me - if I could get validated any faster, I would, I push these chapters in as quickly as possible, but the moderation queue can be as long as a month to get a chapter updated...If you know of any tricks, let me know!

Reviewer: Alicia Jonae
Date: 01/04/09 9:24
Chapter: Chapter 36 - Coping with Escape

Coping is never easy; my grandfather died last year & it's still hard to believe he's not w/us. I just hope that George can heal & become his natural funny self again

Author's Response: that's one of the reasons I've spent so much time on that concept. I don't think people are as unfortunate as you and I are in dealing with loss, so it's important to get that point across. I'm sorry for your loss and that loss does do crazy things to people, as George is illustrating for us.

Reviewer: Alicia Jonae
Date: 01/04/09 9:21
Chapter: Chapter 34 - Riding the Rails

I have to agree w/everyone else; Harry giving Ginny the Marauder's Map was the perfect thing to do, b/c no matter what happens @ Hogwarts, the Map always comes in handy! :)

Author's Response: it should! Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 12/30/08 12:20
Chapter: Chapter 36 - Coping with Escape

Another natural progression

Author's Response: thank you!

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 12/30/08 12:07
Chapter: Chapter 35 - Shifting Forward

I still think this story is flowing in a logical manner. Must confess though, I'm worried about George

Author's Response: George needs some TLC, but he'll be alright :)

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 12/30/08 11:50
Chapter: Chapter 34 - Riding the Rails

Good chapter

Author's Response: thank you!

Reviewer: Poonst
Date: 12/30/08 3:10
Chapter: Chapter 7 - Talking Things Out

Went downhill fast. Too much 'romance' not enough substance. Harry shouldn't be such an apologetic sap, he was off saving the entire world and Ginny got tortured a bit a school. He has nothing to apologize for . Also, we get it, Ron doesn't like seeing Harry and Ginny 'snog' please move on.

Author's Response: I'm sorry you feel that way, a handful of people seem to be enjoying the fic in its entirety. Thank you for the feedback.

Reviewer: Poonst
Date: 12/30/08 2:15
Chapter: Chapter 1 - Back to the Beginning

I am pleased with the first chapter.

Author's Response: at least you liked the beginning before panning it ;)

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 12/30/08 0:42
Chapter: Chapter 33 - Places to Go

Should I be having a bad feeling about where this is heading? I'm certainly not getting a good feeling.

Author's Response: maybe it was the last chapter...well, things can't get 'better' if they're not together, but it isn't all bad - I promise! there is a good ending in the end, literally, but getting there could take some doing ;)

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 12/30/08 0:30
Chapter: Chapter 32 - The Things We Do

Still confused. Enjoying the story, but still confused.

Author's Response: I think we're almost there, the next chapter was one of my faves :)

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 12/30/08 0:15
Chapter: Chapter 31 - If Only Things Could Stay Simple

Now I'm really getting confused.

Author's Response: even more? just wait, these chapters are all sorted, sort of, you'll see :)

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 12/30/08 0:07
Chapter: Chapter 30 - Even the Best Laid Plans

Now I'm getting confused

Author's Response: have to throw some twists in here and there ;)

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 12/29/08 23:58
Chapter: Chapter 29 - Reconciling Two Halves

I think I like the direction it's headed in. I'm rooting for Harry and Ginny and George

Author's Response: I hope I can keep you on my side as I keep posting :) thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Lazy Lazuli
Date: 12/29/08 23:54
Chapter: Chapter 11 - Curiosities Abound


I particularly like this fic. Every other Harry/Ginny fic I've read seems to have the need to make up an alternate universe to complete the fic, and they don't even explain it thoroughly. This is one of the only fics I've read that are canon.

Also, about your name, are you the person who owns

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 12/29/08 23:44
Chapter: Chapter 28 - A Fresh Start

After all the time Harry spent trying to protect Ginny, he's still not mature enough to realize WHEN he needs to do so.

Author's Response: I think that'll take some time, and she has to help him understand when he should as well - they're both new to it and I think they both realise how much they need each other, but they aren't quite there yet...sadly...

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 12/29/08 23:21
Chapter: Chapter 27 - Hoping for the Best, Expecting the Worst

I'm having no problem wth this story's progression

Author's Response: this was a slow moving chapter, I have to admit it now that I've completed the entire fic, it moved more slowly than it should have. I'm going to improve that in my next fic ;)

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 12/29/08 23:04
Chapter: Chapter 26 - The Tension Mounts

Harry doesn't understand because he's never had a)any type of normal family life, b) a little sister. Life is always going to be more difficult for him in that respect. At least until he and Ginny are married and have children of their own.

Author's Response: well, I'd like to think things will start to be easier for Harry once he can get his life with Ginny in the beginnings of organised...but I think you're right on both counts - he didn't grow up with a normal life or siblings, so this is all new to him. Knowing a family and being part of it are two very different things.

Reviewer: captburke
Date: 12/29/08 22:45
Chapter: Chapter 25 - A Family Affair

Perfect progression. This story is flowing in a very logical manner.

Author's Response: I'm really glad you think so - this was another one of those chapters people didn't like...but I've written them for a reason, I'd like to think :)

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