One of my favorite songs is Dare You to Move! I just want to say I love how you name the chapters after songs!
I love this story UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!
i love this story..u should update soon!! :)
--Casey
I really love ur story!! Its great. Ur really a good write. JUst hope that u will update soon... cant wait to read the rest of the story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks!
hullo!
that was a GREAT chapter, lily has so much chance to have someone who loves her that much!
but what's that at the bottom of the chapter? is she backing away now????? cant wait for the next chapter!
cheers! and dont forget my question on the previous chapter!
Author's Response: Lily's having second thoughts...oh no! Sorry, but you will have to wait even longer for the next chapter because the queue is down! Oh no...I better keep writing so I can get back ahead!
hullo!
well, i have to say that the sectumsempra curse is veery dangerous and powerful dark curse. the reaction of Dumbledore and Poppy doesnt reflect that, its like the curse was not that grave... but we saw in HP how it was even difficult to heal Malfoy after Harry had used it..so please, id like ur reply concerning that point.
otherwise ur story is turning out great, i can see the romance coming and i like the way it is growing.
keep it up and please reply to me, thnks
cheers!
Author's Response: You're right, it is a very powerful curse. But love is also very powerful, which is part of the reason Lily was able to seal James's wounds for a brief while. This being done, the wounds were not quite as bad when they got to Poppy, and I'm not completely sure she recognized the curse because it is pretty rare and dangerous. As for Dumbledore...perhaps there is something he is not telling us? Thanks so much for the critique, they really make me think! And I apologize for not getting back to you sooner, my internet is quite temperamental...
cherry
now a cherry's on the top of my review!
this chapter was soooo cute..and james..u really write well, continue the good work!
cheers
Author's Response: Merci for the cherry! Thank you so much...for the review and the cherry.
hi!
i liked this chapter! sirius is just so fun to hear! and these vsions both are having.. great job! keep it up!
Cheers!
Author's Response: Thanks! Sirius is very fun in general.
hullo there!
wow, i quite like this fic! beginning of a good story i think. good job! i'll be sticking around dont worry!
cheers!
Author's Response: Thanks! cheers.
It's fantastic. i haven't written any stories of my own but it doesn't mean i don't know a good one when i see it!
Author's Response: Ha ha, thanks!
Omigosh!!! i absolutely love this story!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks, and I'm trying!
Nice!! update soon pls!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I'm working on it!!!!
wow!! I love this chapter! it was really good. can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response: Thanks!
ahhhhhhhh!!!!!!! yea yea yea!!! a update and...*gasp* the "L-bomb"!!!
Author's Response: *Gasp*!
ahhhhhhhh!!!!!!! yea yea yea!!! a update and...*gasp* the "L-bomb"!!!
ahhhhhhhh!!!!!!! yea yea yea!!! a update and...*gasp* the "L-bomb"!!!
ahhhhhhhh!!!!!!! yea yea yea!!! a review and...*gasp* the "L-bomb"!!!
omg thats belle
Author's Response: Thanks.
