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Reviewer: Nagini Riddle
Date: 07/16/12 0:30
Chapter: Chapter 1

Young love indeed! So adorable! Again, I wish this pairing had stayed in the canon books! They belong together!!!!!!! Great job! I enjoyed it immensely!

Reviewer: 08Alohomora09
Date: 08/03/10 20:07
Chapter: Chapter 1

Such a sweet little story!

Reviewer: Pretty_Fangirl
Date: 04/19/08 16:51
Chapter: Chapter 1

Aww! So sweet!

Reviewer: kreachers_pet
Date: 03/06/08 16:42
Chapter: Chapter 1

This story was adorable. This is the way I would have pictured Lily and Severus in their younger years. Great Job!

Reviewer: bubblegumpinkhair
Date: 02/01/08 15:02
Chapter: Chapter 1

This was so cute! I loved it! You did Lily and Snape perfectly!!

Reviewer: zonkoslover
Date: 01/29/08 23:06
Chapter: Chapter 1

aweeee. that just so sweet.i loved it.

Reviewer: WhateverForever26
Date: 01/26/08 19:30
Chapter: Chapter 1

Awwww so sweet. So cute. The "we were just kids!" explanation has a use here, I am presuming.

Author's Response: That's right, just kids, past the 'coodies' days, but before the Mudblood days.

Reviewer: A_Pink_lady
Date: 01/26/08 19:04
Chapter: Chapter 1

awwwwwwwww severus, ur so sweet at this age! what went wrong??? very very sweet, but sad in a way, knowing what will happen......i love it....

Author's Response: The world may never know... Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Cwiddy
Date: 01/14/08 16:45
Chapter: Chapter 1

This is a very sweet story and you did well describing the scene and keeping the Snape and Lily in character. I think you are like me and need to work on really bringing the world alive to your readers...maybe learn to add more description to your stories. Over all this is a really good story though! :)

Author's Response: Thanks, I appreciate the advice!

Reviewer: Heiress_of_Insanity_
Date: 01/02/08 11:36
Chapter: Chapter 1

*squees* This is an adorable story! *is all for SevLil* It's so full of ten-year-old innocence, and I loved how you portrayed Sev, hoping he would get a kiss from Lily. And her reaction to the picture was perfect. I wish I had a moving photograph!

This was very well-written, good job!~

H_o_I_

Author's Response: Thanks! That's how I picture them at that age. I would totally love a moving photograph, too!

Reviewer: DMTAT003
Date: 12/21/07 17:37
Chapter: Chapter 1

I really enjoy Snape/Lily centric stories, thank you.

Reviewer: readyfreddy
Date: 11/23/07 21:51
Chapter: Chapter 1

WOW that was really great. for a new ambition you've really taken to it. im so proud of you!

Author's Response: You're so kind, Jen! :P

Reviewer: cjbaggins
Date: 11/17/07 9:54
Chapter: Chapter 1

Very sweet. He got his kiss after all.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: RonandMioneForever
Date: 11/16/07 14:48
Chapter: Chapter 1

So sweet =)

Author's Response: Thanks.

Reviewer: Stubbornly_appeared
Date: 11/15/07 23:19
Chapter: Chapter 1

Ah, young love. This is for the challenge, no? Very sweet.

Author's Response: yes, it is. =)

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 11/15/07 20:31
Chapter: Chapter 1

Awesome one shot! I really liked it :)

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: PadfootnPeeves
Date: 11/15/07 16:30
Chapter: Chapter 1

aaww, how cute!

Reviewer: i love prongs
Date: 11/15/07 15:34
Chapter: Chapter 1

loved it!

Reviewer: i love prongs
Date: 11/15/07 15:29
Chapter: Chapter 1

loved it update soon!

Author's Response: thanks! It's only a one-shot, though *sorry*

Reviewer: JustLikeHermione77
Date: 11/15/07 14:40
Chapter: Chapter 1

aw.. sweet story!

Author's Response: Thanks!

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