Young love indeed! So adorable! Again, I wish this pairing had stayed in the canon books! They belong together!!!!!!! Great job! I enjoyed it immensely!
This story was adorable. This is the way I would have pictured Lily and Severus in their younger years. Great Job!
This was so cute! I loved it! You did Lily and Snape perfectly!!
aweeee. that just so sweet.i loved it.
Awwww so sweet. So cute. The "we were just kids!" explanation has a use here, I am presuming.
Author's Response: That's right, just kids, past the 'coodies' days, but before the Mudblood days.
awwwwwwwww severus, ur so sweet at this age! what went wrong??? very very sweet, but sad in a way, knowing what will happen......i love it....
Author's Response: The world may never know... Thanks for reviewing!
This is a very sweet story and you did well describing the scene and keeping the Snape and Lily in character. I think you are like me and need to work on really bringing the world alive to your readers...maybe learn to add more description to your stories. Over all this is a really good story though! :)
Author's Response: Thanks, I appreciate the advice!
*squees* This is an adorable story! *is all for SevLil* It's so full of ten-year-old innocence, and I loved how you portrayed Sev, hoping he would get a kiss from Lily. And her reaction to the picture was perfect. I wish I had a moving photograph!
This was very well-written, good job!~
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Author's Response: Thanks! That's how I picture them at that age. I would totally love a moving photograph, too!
I really enjoy Snape/Lily centric stories, thank you.
WOW that was really great. for a new ambition you've really taken to it. im so proud of you!
Author's Response: You're so kind, Jen! :P
Very sweet. He got his kiss after all.
Author's Response: Thank you!
So sweet =)
Author's Response: Thanks.
Ah, young love. This is for the challenge, no? Very sweet.
Author's Response: yes, it is. =)
Awesome one shot! I really liked it :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
loved it update soon!
Author's Response: thanks! It's only a one-shot, though *sorry*
aw.. sweet story!
Author's Response: Thanks!
