Reviews For Deadly Desire
Reviewer: AlexPotter
Date: 04/12/09 19:36
Chapter: Chapter 1

I loved this!

I've always wondered what could have happened with Helena and the diadem. I love this take on it! Well done!


Reviewer: tiger_lily821
Date: 12/05/07 14:53
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow...that was intense at the end!
There was a lot of backstory, though, it might have been better to start when she steals the diadem or shortly before. It was still really good, don't get me wrong! You're a great writer.

Reviewer: chitra
Date: 11/18/07 17:27
Chapter: Chapter 1

This is almost exactly how I imagined it. Excellent!

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