Reviewer: Nagini Riddle
Date: 07/16/12 0:19
Chapter: The Very Best Gift of All

Awwwww! How sweet! How old are they in this? I'm just curious... I loved it! What a beautiful story! I especially loved the snow descriptions!

Reviewer: Lucky_13_Girl
Date: 05/18/08 21:44
Chapter: The Very Best Gift of All

I kinda wish that Lily and Severus could have gotten together. Oh, well, we wouldn't have Haary to adore if they did. TTFN!!!!!

Reviewer: XhayleeXblackX
Date: 03/08/08 20:42
Chapter: The Very Best Gift of All

Well, how sweet was that? I really liked this little one-shot. The simplicity of it made it very realistic and heart warming.

The relationship you have shown between Lily and Severus is very real and untainted. I liked the small arguement that they almost had. It foreshadows their relationship at school, in that Severus is stuck in his ways and Lily is pure of heart.

I liked that though Lily had just barely gotten over the flu, she still wanted to sit outside in the freezing cold to be with Severus. It was very funny that he gave her the Pepperup Potion, because she will probably need it now that she was outside for a while.

I really liked that he gave her a potion as well. It was very thoughtful and sweet of him, and seeing as how it is his subject, I think it was perfect. The ending where Lily tells him he was the best gift was just adorable.

I can't wait to read more of your lovely stories. This was truly an adorable read.


Reviewer: draco_roxmysox
Date: 01/12/08 14:51
Chapter: The Very Best Gift of All

awww! I needed a warm fuzzy feeling. This was a very nice story!

Reviewer: Sev and Lily
Date: 12/16/07 19:42
Chapter: The Very Best Gift of All

awwww! that is so cute! I feel like they are a little bit too young to be having crushes but its not a big deal, the story is still super duper adorable

Reviewer: shewolf2000
Date: 12/02/07 21:40
Chapter: The Very Best Gift of All

Awww, that's so sweet! It almost makes me feel like she's a bit of a tease though. I know she doesn't mean it, but sometimes it seems that way to me. I love how you made her character; she does seem like the type to want a picnic in the middle of winter. And you had me feeling sorry for Snape, a pastime I usually avoid. Anyway, super sweet fic, I loved it.

Reviewer: MissyQuill
Date: 11/18/07 0:18
Chapter: The Very Best Gift of All


Very very sweet. And when I imagine what happens to them in the end, it makes me cry.=Sammy

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! :) I'm glad you enjoyed it. It is too bad that the ship never did sail properly...:(

Reviewer: Phia Phoenix
Date: 11/13/07 0:41
Chapter: The Very Best Gift of All

Aww. IÖ IÖ Aww.

Iíll come back later, once I can actually say something intelligible.

OK, Iím back.

I think itís wonderful that Sev canít appreciate the beauty of the winter day, but instead marvels at Lilyís beauty.

I think that the way youíve characterised both of them is absolutely perfect.

I think your descriptive language is fantastic.

I think that the plot is so SWEET. I donít have the talent to take an ordinary happening and make it an extraordinary piece of writing. I wish I did. All I can do is big adventures. It doesnít take much skill.

But overall, I think that the obvious love between the two Ė the way Sev only wants to make Lily happy, the way Lily appreciates everything Sev does and is Ė is so, so touching.

Congrats on an awesome fic, Tash. I love it.

Love Phia

PS: wait, I finally found something to criticise! Spelling errors! Chequered is spelt wrong, so is sceptically, phial and jewellery. Oh dear. Iím at the point where I have to pick at spelling. Hmm. I think Iíll just leave. Good job!

Author's Response: *hugs* Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. :D And if you check the dictionary, they're not spelling errors...just alternate spellings....Silly English language *throws rock at it*

Reviewer: chasing_willow
Date: 11/12/07 10:13
Chapter: The Very Best Gift of All

Awwww that's so sweet!!!
I loved your story and I adore *guilty look/shifty eyes* LE/SS
I think I'm going to go read everything you've ever written now,
-- willow

Reviewer: chitra
Date: 11/11/07 14:24
Chapter: The Very Best Gift of All

That was the cutest, most adorable, most touching thing ever! I love Snape!

Reviewer: RonandMioneForever
Date: 11/10/07 16:51
Chapter: The Very Best Gift of All

So simple and sweet. I absolutely loved it. Going into favorites =)

Reviewer: PadfootnPeeves
Date: 11/10/07 16:23
Chapter: The Very Best Gift of All

aaw, that was beautiful! *sniff*... absolutely loved it!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)

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